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Although the beginning is very drawn out, I like this work. More importantly, I like the concept itself and I am very glad that one of my favorite authors writes such a fanfic. Thank you.
Akikan, can i have your permission to re-post the Dimensional Chat Group. I'll improved the grammar, Re-phrase it while retaining your original tone? Please reply.
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Is this one of those possessions dojin I've read? the one where fat bro get into the blond girl but this time it's reverse lol
so I just found out this dude is known for Harem and that's why everyone is hyped.I already know what this story will be..so anyone reading through the ratings just uh...goodluck?Goodluck?. I'm gone
I like this new fic man! You're doing good again. Also, can we ask for a fic where mc is rentarou in "100 girlfriends who really really really love you!"
It was so much fun, I can't wait for the next episode. Don't stop uploading. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I haven't started reading yet. I already have too many books to read. But I'm giving this 5 stars because ... akikan
I have some ideas regarding the development of pika pika no mi- Ability-1: since pika pika nomi allows a person to create, control and turn into light then he can control the light of the sun to fall more intensely in an area thus using the sun to power ones attack.This way he doesn't have to use his own physical strength to create light to attack a large area. Ability-2: create an ability like the rasengan but use light instead of chakra,this way the it will also do burning damage due to the heat of the light aside from the spiral damage done by rasengan. Ability-3:This ability is less scientific and more idealistic. Light is the source of all life on earth considering this he could develop light of life which gives lifeforce and according to some religious texts light can purify so he could develop light of purification to purify everything be it physical or metaphysical like soul, bloodline,mind,etc Ability-4: Cruel sun the ability of escanor(do I need to say more!!!!)
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Okey, I do like the story, although I may not agree with some of the stuff the author has done or described in the world of One Piece I can accept this since it is in fact an AU world and not 100% canon, so there is a certain leeway that the author can use to do what he wants. All in all, a good fanfic but keep in mind that there are several things like devil fruits and the powers of others that you may not agree with.
A very good 👍 fanfic but knowing the author it will probably a another unfinished work like all his work. The author writes some really good fanfic but he never finished his work
An Akikan story that's all you need to know. what more do you even need to know to know that this will be a banger 👑👑👌👌
De acordo com o Censo 2022, a distribuição da população brasileira por raça é a seguinte: Pardos: 45,3% Brancos: 42,8% Pretos: 10,6% Indígenas: 0,8% Amarelos (de ascendência asiática): 0,5% Esse censo reflete uma população cada vez mais diversificada, sendo que os pardos agora representam o maior grupo étnico no Brasil, seguidos pelos brancos. A população preta aumentou em relação aos últimos censos e agora constitui cerca de 10,6% da população total. Esses números refletem mudanças sociais e culturais no reconhecimento da identidade racial no país.
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I love this Akikan's new book, it's concept was unique y'all should give it a try. SPOILER: So there are not only one mc, but many at different worlds. There's Masa(mc's name) from One Piece world, there's Masa from Mahouka, and there's Masa from Dxd, and from what i see Akikan planned to add more. Think of them as what if Mc was sent to "this" world. These Masas can share power with each other and use all abilities from other masa. Pretty unique right
#akikan40 please one masa from #Tensura world as a demon lord , True dragon or as a Archdaemon 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I love you Metroman! [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Siempre subiendo lo mejor Sigue así amigo ...................................................................................................................
*DESAFIOS DEZEMBRO GBA* DESAFIO 1 - Monotype * |/}| |Hack ROM UNBOUND* Regras: -Opção Desafiador -Difícil ou expert -Level cap (Sim ou não) -Monotype -Demais opções livre *P10* - Venenoso ☠️ *Th* - Fantasma 👻 *Marcus* - Água 🌊 *GUSTAVO*- Dark 🎃 *Rodrigo Ribeiro*- Voador🐦🔥 *Davids*- pedra 🪨 *Pedro Daniel* - normal 🙂 DESAFIO 2 - Monotype *HACK ROM Sword e Shield* -Monotype *P10* - Água 🌊 *Marcus*- Grama 🍃 *H VERMELHO* - INSETO 🐜 *Enzo*- *Fogo*🔥 *Davids* *-* *Pedra* 🪨 *Everton -* *Dragão*🐉
Although the beginning is very drawn out, I like this work. More importantly, I like the concept itself and I am very glad that one of my favorite authors writes such a fanfic. Thank you.
Akikan, can i have your permission to re-post the Dimensional Chat Group. I'll improved the grammar, Re-phrase it while retaining your original tone? Please reply.
Reveal Spoiler [img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Why][img=Why][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=Relaxed][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Shocked][img=Your move][img=Your move]
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[img=In a daze][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Out of it][img=Speechless][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags]
Is this one of those possessions dojin I've read? the one where fat bro get into the blond girl but this time it's reverse lol
so I just found out this dude is known for Harem and that's why everyone is hyped.I already know what this story will be..so anyone reading through the ratings just uh...goodluck?Goodluck?. I'm gone
I like this new fic man! You're doing good again. Also, can we ask for a fic where mc is rentarou in "100 girlfriends who really really really love you!"
It was so much fun, I can't wait for the next episode. Don't stop uploading. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I haven't started reading yet. I already have too many books to read. But I'm giving this 5 stars because ... akikan
I have some ideas regarding the development of pika pika no mi- Ability-1: since pika pika nomi allows a person to create, control and turn into light then he can control the light of the sun to fall more intensely in an area thus using the sun to power ones attack.This way he doesn't have to use his own physical strength to create light to attack a large area. Ability-2: create an ability like the rasengan but use light instead of chakra,this way the it will also do burning damage due to the heat of the light aside from the spiral damage done by rasengan. Ability-3:This ability is less scientific and more idealistic. Light is the source of all life on earth considering this he could develop light of life which gives lifeforce and according to some religious texts light can purify so he could develop light of purification to purify everything be it physical or metaphysical like soul, bloodline,mind,etc Ability-4: Cruel sun the ability of escanor(do I need to say more!!!!)
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Okey, I do like the story, although I may not agree with some of the stuff the author has done or described in the world of One Piece I can accept this since it is in fact an AU world and not 100% canon, so there is a certain leeway that the author can use to do what he wants. All in all, a good fanfic but keep in mind that there are several things like devil fruits and the powers of others that you may not agree with.
A very good 👍 fanfic but knowing the author it will probably a another unfinished work like all his work. The author writes some really good fanfic but he never finished his work
An Akikan story that's all you need to know. what more do you even need to know to know that this will be a banger 👑👑👌👌
De acordo com o Censo 2022, a distribuição da população brasileira por raça é a seguinte: Pardos: 45,3% Brancos: 42,8% Pretos: 10,6% Indígenas: 0,8% Amarelos (de ascendência asiática): 0,5% Esse censo reflete uma população cada vez mais diversificada, sendo que os pardos agora representam o maior grupo étnico no Brasil, seguidos pelos brancos. A população preta aumentou em relação aos últimos censos e agora constitui cerca de 10,6% da população total. Esses números refletem mudanças sociais e culturais no reconhecimento da identidade racial no país.
Reveal Spoiler I love this Akikan's new book, it's concept was unique y'all should give it a try. SPOILER: So there are not only one mc, but many at different worlds. There's Masa(mc's name) from One Piece world, there's Masa from Mahouka, and there's Masa from Dxd, and from what i see Akikan planned to add more. Think of them as what if Mc was sent to "this" world. These Masas can share power with each other and use all abilities from other masa. Pretty unique right
#akikan40 please one masa from #Tensura world as a demon lord , True dragon or as a Archdaemon 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I love you Metroman! [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Siempre subiendo lo mejor Sigue así amigo ...................................................................................................................
*DESAFIOS DEZEMBRO GBA* DESAFIO 1 - Monotype * |/}| |Hack ROM UNBOUND* Regras: -Opção Desafiador -Difícil ou expert -Level cap (Sim ou não) -Monotype -Demais opções livre *P10* - Venenoso ☠️ *Th* - Fantasma 👻 *Marcus* - Água 🌊 *GUSTAVO*- Dark 🎃 *Rodrigo Ribeiro*- Voador🐦🔥 *Davids*- pedra 🪨 *Pedro Daniel* - normal 🙂 DESAFIO 2 - Monotype *HACK ROM Sword e Shield* -Monotype *P10* - Água 🌊 *Marcus*- Grama 🍃 *H VERMELHO* - INSETO 🐜 *Enzo*- *Fogo*🔥 *Davids* *-* *Pedra* 🪨 *Everton -* *Dragão*🐉