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A perfect story, specially for us superhero fans. keep it going author.[img=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]
really good overall, but as a non paying member I can't read nearly as much as I would want to... cannot watch videos to unlock chapters and most chapters are 2/3 free passes to unlock a single chapter which is the only downside to this novel
Excellent story, compelling characters. Looking forward to seeing how this develops. Keep up the great work.
Already tired of self-inserted edgylords and villains mcs that fills this site? Then give this novel a chance, a novel with a good hearted guy who is just trying to be his best to be good person in a world filled with evil, betrayal and disappointments without giving up, finding his way up in the world, while getting together with some great girls without their perfect cliche. Thanks a lot for this novel author, 10/10.
This is my first review, so this honestly weighs heavily for me. I wouldn't have written a review for any novels on here, but I had to say something about this novel. First and foremost, only three novels on this app have ever resonated with me with me wanting more, this being one out of the three, I may not have much reading time on this app but I have read enough hours cumulative throughout my life regarding novels, LNs, WNs, Wuxias, Xuanhuans, Eronovels, you name it, so I have quite the bit of experience differentiating low quality time wasters to well thought out novels such as this one. The writing quality of this novel is exceptional, leagues above the authors' other works, with sentencing and phrase selection that doesn't bore you out, with the stream element comments very much hooking you in, the stream comments gave me quite a bit of a chuckle and largely entertained me, Story development is predictable yet somehow not simplistic in terms of plot. Stream and system component very well done, making use of cliche novel genres and making something though not exactly original, is definitely very enjoyable and unique in its own sense. Character design is also well done, though not perfect, it is definitely good enough to invoke some feelings out of you, especially in the early chapters. World background is also meticulously done same with that of the other elements and you can easily tell that the author takes the time to incorporate the plot seamlessly into the next arc. This is a very well done novel that deserves my first review ever, and a round of applause from me, if I had to rank this novel it would definitely be in my upper top 10. Updates are relatively decent, Novel is enjoyable enough to not nitpick, and lastly I hope the chapter quality continues to be kept at the same level as of writing this review, it would be a shame if the novel degrades in quality. Thank you Sleazy for this wonderful novel. Looking forward to more chapters and the completion of this novel and to your next.
This has been great to read but what type of antihero will the MC be. Will he become a murderhobo and kill any criminal he sees or will he remain mostly as he has been. Can anyone let me know it would be greatly appreciated Thanks.
The story is there but I think the author is trying to get to major plot points too fast and is missing filler pieces to expalin certain actions or decisions or the absent background info that would make us like a character, some things are just blatantly looked over by characters that should be more aware obvious actions that most people would be wary of, and while I enjoy harems the heroines are just falling for a guy with no actual basis, I get the girlfriend and childhood friend but the pro hero speedster maybe should of started as just a fan that slowly became infatuated not in love after a short stream. On the plus side though the story has great bones and with some more fleshing out could be awesome, the system need more moments where Scott actually studies it and figures out how his ‘super power’ works (can’t tell me he’s just accepting a random power system in a society that is stated to have interdemsional warlords and aliens) I expect him to be more aware of the system that is suddenly predicting crimes and has the word ’harem’ in its name, possible mind control and what not are on the table in superpowered worlds. The heroines have some decent backstory building but Maya’s choices are just all over the place, and Emma is just unexplainable as I refuse to believe a flash level speedsters is going to be unable to clean sweep a whole city in seconds to look for someone as she stated herself to be ‘faster then light’ that level of speed is absurd and overpowered that I find it hard for her to not find Scott in seconds of seeing the stream, she herself stated she knew where his first stream was as it was in her ‘patrol’ area so she must have an idea of major and minor parts of the city or can easyily look up a street sign or building and shop names. The stream it’s self just need more detail, does it blur identify features like a location or features to keep Scott’s secret, does it give out minor missions, what all does it sell and when does Scott buy his stuff, the watch he used comes out of left field or was just too small a part to even notice yet it’s a major tool he uses when he saves Elena. What does the system do and what are its defined rules. Scott himself just seems kind of all over the place, bro is supposedly intelligent yet I have yet see him do anything remotely smart as he just seems to go with the flow and whim of the system and not ask any questions and as a vigilante is doing zero prep work or investigation work into criminals or ‘black mechanica’ an organization that supposedly has alien tech and nuclear capabilities and has been running around heroes for years and you expect me to believe his one foray into them is causing them a lick of trouble, it’s stated they are a global organization, one guy in one city stumbling on a cell isn’t going to do anything but annoy them, and get a small bounty of ’Nightwatch’, they’ve had to have dealt with things like him before just from how many superabled people there are now, plus his back story is just missing, why is his mom import or even where are his parents, is there some family situation we should be aware of. Vincent is just not fleshed out and too stereotyped, I believe him a bad guy but I think he’s also being too obvious with it, more subtle gaslighting and less outright bastard and his character improves dramatically as he pushes a wedge between maya and Scott instead of one asshole phone call. Mostly the story just needs filler to help flesh out the world and characters, little Paragraphs to explain actions or choices that build a character and help the reader understand character motivations. Maybe a side piece chapters for none important characters to help flesh out the sudden hero streams effect on the wider population or maybe a few small time heroes using it to fund their own hero activities, maybe a few people who think like Scott following in his footsteps, maybe Emma doing her own stream disguised as a different vigilante like a dark speedster named Shade. In summary I like the story just wished it was more fleshed out as I keep running into the problem of doubling back and questioning when did this happen, ‘offscreen’ moments that confuse readers and just a lack of scenes that transition the story, I hope the writer continues to write and I’m going to continue reading the story and hope it’s fleshed our more later in the story.
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Nothing amazing, just another heavily edgy teenage anime concept mixed with half real characters. Story development is subpar, fight scenes are told not shown. Characters are sometimes real sometimes not.
this is my most favorite book rn ngl. And not just cause it's spicy, because the writing is really good! I'm writing this review christmas day, so this is kinda like a Christmas present to my favorite writer ☺️ The chapters pull me in and I literally became engrossed in this novel for a full 3 days, until I caught up. I'm really looking forward to his future chapters, and I'm hoping this writer stays safe, happy, and motivated to keep giving us BOMB chapters! Merry Christmas, and a happy new year!
Jesus Christ, I'm speechless about what I just read! This stuff is more addictive than cocaine, congratulations author, you've brought another addict into the world!
I could only read up to about chapter 42 before Webnovel locked me out of peak fiction nevertheless i implore you to read like me cuz this is gas
cerita yang bagus. keren dan tdk membosankan untuk dibaca. my first top up because of this novel
Holy shit, this is fire 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥🔥 🔥 I love every single character and how they are portrayed in the story. I'm not usually into novels; some are good, others are not. But this one here is a gem 💎; I didn't sleep when I found this and read this all night; this is PEAK I'm grateful, Webnovel, for this recommendation. Thanks, Author, for this Delicious Cookie
I quite enjoy this and be serious when I say everything was really good I actually started reading this even though I knew that these types of stories have locks but now that's also the reason why I find this a bit upsetting because of the fact I enjoyed this story a lot but I can't continue reading it because of the fact it's now locked behind a paywall or something.
Very entertaining read , it was so addicting that I didn't even notice the time and when I checked it was 4:00 in the morning. The character building and world building is very nicely done. Especially the characters , they all feel fresh and unique and Emma is just 🤌🤌 The system itself is nice and the streaming stuff is pretty fun. Overall very nice thank you
really a good novel can't wait for it to have more chapter ...............................................................................................................
I will give 5 stars, new idea, good idea, and not a frustrating MC much more (I have yet to read) but are heroines blackmailed like at start Ms. Mercury wanted to mecha down but manager wanted to get er*tic shots and she didn't had choice her life also got in danger why was that?
Its a good story. However I want to know I I'm gonna have to pat for later chapters?
Nice story bro Just started reading and yeah it’s well written and has a rather unique story so I’ll definitely stick to this for now :) Keep it up
From the story to the characters everything is great. Not to mention the human behaviour that is shown when the beings with powers care only about their own profits rather than actually saving people.
I have really enjoyed reading this book, especially the comments by the viewers that are quite funny at times and has me smiling throughout the whole chapter. The feelings inside of me while Maya and Scott broke up were quite intense which is a good sign for both the writing quality the bond we have formed with the characters. In short, i really recommend giving it a read!
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Just caught up with this came here from your other work because I enjoyed your writing style and heck i wasn't disappointed. I'll be in tune to see how this goes please see it through. Also I know Maya is a bit silly but please give her a second chance before things get too far, also Vincent needs to die in the worst possible way, he always manages to annoy me every chapter. All in all you are doing a great job on all characters so far they are all well fleshed out, great job on your stream reactions too they're always fresh. Anyways without me ranting too much just don't drop this, it might be getting low tractions now but I believe with more chapters many will come to appreciate this masterpiece.
If you have any question, and any question at all, feel free to ask here :) I put the five stars by mistake, but we all make mistakes haha~
A perfect story, specially for us superhero fans. keep it going author.[img=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]mg=gift]
really good overall, but as a non paying member I can't read nearly as much as I would want to... cannot watch videos to unlock chapters and most chapters are 2/3 free passes to unlock a single chapter which is the only downside to this novel
Excellent story, compelling characters. Looking forward to seeing how this develops. Keep up the great work.
Already tired of self-inserted edgylords and villains mcs that fills this site? Then give this novel a chance, a novel with a good hearted guy who is just trying to be his best to be good person in a world filled with evil, betrayal and disappointments without giving up, finding his way up in the world, while getting together with some great girls without their perfect cliche. Thanks a lot for this novel author, 10/10.
This is my first review, so this honestly weighs heavily for me. I wouldn't have written a review for any novels on here, but I had to say something about this novel. First and foremost, only three novels on this app have ever resonated with me with me wanting more, this being one out of the three, I may not have much reading time on this app but I have read enough hours cumulative throughout my life regarding novels, LNs, WNs, Wuxias, Xuanhuans, Eronovels, you name it, so I have quite the bit of experience differentiating low quality time wasters to well thought out novels such as this one. The writing quality of this novel is exceptional, leagues above the authors' other works, with sentencing and phrase selection that doesn't bore you out, with the stream element comments very much hooking you in, the stream comments gave me quite a bit of a chuckle and largely entertained me, Story development is predictable yet somehow not simplistic in terms of plot. Stream and system component very well done, making use of cliche novel genres and making something though not exactly original, is definitely very enjoyable and unique in its own sense. Character design is also well done, though not perfect, it is definitely good enough to invoke some feelings out of you, especially in the early chapters. World background is also meticulously done same with that of the other elements and you can easily tell that the author takes the time to incorporate the plot seamlessly into the next arc. This is a very well done novel that deserves my first review ever, and a round of applause from me, if I had to rank this novel it would definitely be in my upper top 10. Updates are relatively decent, Novel is enjoyable enough to not nitpick, and lastly I hope the chapter quality continues to be kept at the same level as of writing this review, it would be a shame if the novel degrades in quality. Thank you Sleazy for this wonderful novel. Looking forward to more chapters and the completion of this novel and to your next.
This has been great to read but what type of antihero will the MC be. Will he become a murderhobo and kill any criminal he sees or will he remain mostly as he has been. Can anyone let me know it would be greatly appreciated Thanks.
The story is there but I think the author is trying to get to major plot points too fast and is missing filler pieces to expalin certain actions or decisions or the absent background info that would make us like a character, some things are just blatantly looked over by characters that should be more aware obvious actions that most people would be wary of, and while I enjoy harems the heroines are just falling for a guy with no actual basis, I get the girlfriend and childhood friend but the pro hero speedster maybe should of started as just a fan that slowly became infatuated not in love after a short stream. On the plus side though the story has great bones and with some more fleshing out could be awesome, the system need more moments where Scott actually studies it and figures out how his ‘super power’ works (can’t tell me he’s just accepting a random power system in a society that is stated to have interdemsional warlords and aliens) I expect him to be more aware of the system that is suddenly predicting crimes and has the word ’harem’ in its name, possible mind control and what not are on the table in superpowered worlds. The heroines have some decent backstory building but Maya’s choices are just all over the place, and Emma is just unexplainable as I refuse to believe a flash level speedsters is going to be unable to clean sweep a whole city in seconds to look for someone as she stated herself to be ‘faster then light’ that level of speed is absurd and overpowered that I find it hard for her to not find Scott in seconds of seeing the stream, she herself stated she knew where his first stream was as it was in her ‘patrol’ area so she must have an idea of major and minor parts of the city or can easyily look up a street sign or building and shop names. The stream it’s self just need more detail, does it blur identify features like a location or features to keep Scott’s secret, does it give out minor missions, what all does it sell and when does Scott buy his stuff, the watch he used comes out of left field or was just too small a part to even notice yet it’s a major tool he uses when he saves Elena. What does the system do and what are its defined rules. Scott himself just seems kind of all over the place, bro is supposedly intelligent yet I have yet see him do anything remotely smart as he just seems to go with the flow and whim of the system and not ask any questions and as a vigilante is doing zero prep work or investigation work into criminals or ‘black mechanica’ an organization that supposedly has alien tech and nuclear capabilities and has been running around heroes for years and you expect me to believe his one foray into them is causing them a lick of trouble, it’s stated they are a global organization, one guy in one city stumbling on a cell isn’t going to do anything but annoy them, and get a small bounty of ’Nightwatch’, they’ve had to have dealt with things like him before just from how many superabled people there are now, plus his back story is just missing, why is his mom import or even where are his parents, is there some family situation we should be aware of. Vincent is just not fleshed out and too stereotyped, I believe him a bad guy but I think he’s also being too obvious with it, more subtle gaslighting and less outright bastard and his character improves dramatically as he pushes a wedge between maya and Scott instead of one asshole phone call. Mostly the story just needs filler to help flesh out the world and characters, little Paragraphs to explain actions or choices that build a character and help the reader understand character motivations. Maybe a side piece chapters for none important characters to help flesh out the sudden hero streams effect on the wider population or maybe a few small time heroes using it to fund their own hero activities, maybe a few people who think like Scott following in his footsteps, maybe Emma doing her own stream disguised as a different vigilante like a dark speedster named Shade. In summary I like the story just wished it was more fleshed out as I keep running into the problem of doubling back and questioning when did this happen, ‘offscreen’ moments that confuse readers and just a lack of scenes that transition the story, I hope the writer continues to write and I’m going to continue reading the story and hope it’s fleshed our more later in the story.
Reveal Spoiler Nothing amazing, just another heavily edgy teenage anime concept mixed with half real characters. Story development is subpar, fight scenes are told not shown. Characters are sometimes real sometimes not.
this is my most favorite book rn ngl. And not just cause it's spicy, because the writing is really good! I'm writing this review christmas day, so this is kinda like a Christmas present to my favorite writer ☺️ The chapters pull me in and I literally became engrossed in this novel for a full 3 days, until I caught up. I'm really looking forward to his future chapters, and I'm hoping this writer stays safe, happy, and motivated to keep giving us BOMB chapters! Merry Christmas, and a happy new year!
Jesus Christ, I'm speechless about what I just read! This stuff is more addictive than cocaine, congratulations author, you've brought another addict into the world!
I could only read up to about chapter 42 before Webnovel locked me out of peak fiction nevertheless i implore you to read like me cuz this is gas
cerita yang bagus. keren dan tdk membosankan untuk dibaca. my first top up because of this novel
Holy shit, this is fire 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥🔥 🔥 I love every single character and how they are portrayed in the story. I'm not usually into novels; some are good, others are not. But this one here is a gem 💎; I didn't sleep when I found this and read this all night; this is PEAK I'm grateful, Webnovel, for this recommendation. Thanks, Author, for this Delicious Cookie
I quite enjoy this and be serious when I say everything was really good I actually started reading this even though I knew that these types of stories have locks but now that's also the reason why I find this a bit upsetting because of the fact I enjoyed this story a lot but I can't continue reading it because of the fact it's now locked behind a paywall or something.
Very entertaining read , it was so addicting that I didn't even notice the time and when I checked it was 4:00 in the morning. The character building and world building is very nicely done. Especially the characters , they all feel fresh and unique and Emma is just 🤌🤌 The system itself is nice and the streaming stuff is pretty fun. Overall very nice thank you
really a good novel can't wait for it to have more chapter ...............................................................................................................
I will give 5 stars, new idea, good idea, and not a frustrating MC much more (I have yet to read) but are heroines blackmailed like at start Ms. Mercury wanted to mecha down but manager wanted to get er*tic shots and she didn't had choice her life also got in danger why was that?
Its a good story. However I want to know I I'm gonna have to pat for later chapters?
Nice story bro Just started reading and yeah it’s well written and has a rather unique story so I’ll definitely stick to this for now :) Keep it up
From the story to the characters everything is great. Not to mention the human behaviour that is shown when the beings with powers care only about their own profits rather than actually saving people.
I have really enjoyed reading this book, especially the comments by the viewers that are quite funny at times and has me smiling throughout the whole chapter. The feelings inside of me while Maya and Scott broke up were quite intense which is a good sign for both the writing quality the bond we have formed with the characters. In short, i really recommend giving it a read!
Reveal Spoiler Just caught up with this came here from your other work because I enjoyed your writing style and heck i wasn't disappointed. I'll be in tune to see how this goes please see it through. Also I know Maya is a bit silly but please give her a second chance before things get too far, also Vincent needs to die in the worst possible way, he always manages to annoy me every chapter. All in all you are doing a great job on all characters so far they are all well fleshed out, great job on your stream reactions too they're always fresh. Anyways without me ranting too much just don't drop this, it might be getting low tractions now but I believe with more chapters many will come to appreciate this masterpiece.
If you have any question, and any question at all, feel free to ask here :) I put the five stars by mistake, but we all make mistakes haha~