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It is perfect for me till with almost everything keep it going till the end without stress. I felt somewhat emotional while reading this. I hope you can mass update till the end of war. You can make him leave legacy of marine six style and haki by leaving a manual with somekind of letter. But you can make it so that no one have been able to bring out it's full power except garp. Make our captain America as the Coby typically a student of garp but make the time of teaching very short from week to a month or during missions.
Me gusta como se ve la historia, me motiva el como se desenvolvera Garp a medida que avance la guerra, espero grandes cosas de esta historia y por los pocos capítulos que lleva ests interesante
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Already a fan! The world war two setting is very interesting and I really like how the author describes his characters and the plot! Can‘t wait for more. Thanks author, you‘re doing a great job!!
Author here with the standart 5 star review... If you like the story and want to see more, pls leave a review. Any constructive criticism is welcome, but pls no spam :) In the Story we will start in WW2, with a young Monkey D. Garp who lost his will to fight, his will to live, in this cruel world. But I can promise that he will get better rather fast, otherwise it would get boring:) This is not a Harem Story. This is not a System Story. I have a love interest in mind. He will get stronger, but throught the story and fights he took. Not bc some system bullshittery. I hope u enjoy the story.
To people who want a one piece story about Garp when He is young and actually getting a character development.Then this story is just for you, but my honest opinion when you first read the chapter 1 of the story you'll wonder where is his background and why isn't it there but i promise you if can get over the fact the lack of background then you are hooked on. Honestly not to be hard on this author a d other author who is making similar stories for one piece character like Garp and it just some have unique ideas making Garp into other genres to make their own sense of style and their own sense of uniqueness that make their so much more interesting.
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Top, j'attends vite la suite bravo l'auteur, garp est un de mes persos préférés en plus de wolverine et ils sont dans la même équipe donc le top, ont vois que sa force augmente donc a voir jusqu'ou il pourra aller et comment il tiendra la vieillesse s'il l'histoire va jusqu'a endgame.
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It is perfect for me till with almost everything keep it going till the end without stress. I felt somewhat emotional while reading this. I hope you can mass update till the end of war. You can make him leave legacy of marine six style and haki by leaving a manual with somekind of letter. But you can make it so that no one have been able to bring out it's full power except garp. Make our captain America as the Coby typically a student of garp but make the time of teaching very short from week to a month or during missions.
Me gusta como se ve la historia, me motiva el como se desenvolvera Garp a medida que avance la guerra, espero grandes cosas de esta historia y por los pocos capítulos que lleva ests interesante
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Already a fan! The world war two setting is very interesting and I really like how the author describes his characters and the plot! Can‘t wait for more. Thanks author, you‘re doing a great job!!
Author here with the standart 5 star review... If you like the story and want to see more, pls leave a review. Any constructive criticism is welcome, but pls no spam :) In the Story we will start in WW2, with a young Monkey D. Garp who lost his will to fight, his will to live, in this cruel world. But I can promise that he will get better rather fast, otherwise it would get boring:) This is not a Harem Story. This is not a System Story. I have a love interest in mind. He will get stronger, but throught the story and fights he took. Not bc some system bullshittery. I hope u enjoy the story.
To people who want a one piece story about Garp when He is young and actually getting a character development.Then this story is just for you, but my honest opinion when you first read the chapter 1 of the story you'll wonder where is his background and why isn't it there but i promise you if can get over the fact the lack of background then you are hooked on. Honestly not to be hard on this author a d other author who is making similar stories for one piece character like Garp and it just some have unique ideas making Garp into other genres to make their own sense of style and their own sense of uniqueness that make their so much more interesting.
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Top, j'attends vite la suite bravo l'auteur, garp est un de mes persos préférés en plus de wolverine et ils sont dans la même équipe donc le top, ont vois que sa force augmente donc a voir jusqu'ou il pourra aller et comment il tiendra la vieillesse s'il l'histoire va jusqu'a endgame.