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hes all about vengeance. but hes not willing to die for it. hes weak willed because of that in my opinion. this distorted from a cool story. to a story of a pathetic man.
This book is shit bro no wonder it has little to no power stone. At first it started out just fine then the so called writer decides to do some bulshit utter shit.
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Absolutely, in episode 1 MC loses his family, which honestly discouraged me a lot, but the later chapters made me forget about it, in the end he loses his powers to Constantine (I already expected this, Lucifer himself wants the guy's soul, but I was surprised that he died for Batman) the way he regained his powers and even became stronger was very good, and the way he is going to change universes is not forced (leaving for fear of being killed or experimented on by cosmic beings is a very good excuse to leave in style, better than a hole sucking him), he even left a legacy in the form of Jimmy, now I have to see the next chapters and I hope they are of greater or equal quality to the previous chapters.
I love it but why not send it to Cyberpunk Endgame or Attack on Titan, even better Akame Ga Kill Maybe to the universe of Tokyo Ghoul or Kimetsu
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So much potential was wasted by author it could havebeenan amazing story yet cauthor wasted it all on an edgy & forceful plot development that wasn't needed 1/10
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If you get through the starting few chapters, then this is one of the best recent novels. Although I Author improves how he writes Selena.
cara normalmente eu nunca faço envio ruim essa deve ser uma das primeiras que eu faço ou a primeira que coisa horrível muito erro de continuidade quem que vai encarnar no universo da DC e vai morar em Gotham, o mano tem entre "os poderes do espectro ghost Rider" que pelo visto ganhou os poderes do cara que conseguiu derrotar o anti monitor e perdeu para o Batman e e 2 mago, kkkkkkkk e no último capítulo ele acabou de lançar ele falou que o Superman não aguenta aí para superfície do Sol, o cara nunca leu uma HQ na vida só pode.
wonderful story . each of it is increasing the interest to read it more. i keep waiting for the story to come. if u can pls upload two stories a day.
Yea😬 the story went from 4.2stars to 1.0stars and the sad thing about this is that it could have been easily avoided. Ghost rider is the profile pic and the main source of attraction to this fic but you take away that power and give him a downgrade to a yellow/red lantern ring
My honest review from chapter 13 I’ve been a reader of your other books and I can hands down say it’s always the same you love to give Batman more credit than he’s worth characters with less sin and more morals than Batman have fallen to ghost rider PS but you use that as a plot point I haven’t ever seen anyone get out from it but enough about that my main problem is that you don’t know the rider it’s a disappointment to see a character ppl grow and love be degraded to that level if rider couldn’t fight hero’s then half of marvel fight with him would have been as you put it a wash you can’t be serious with a being that rivals gods be take out from the mc when it’s a template you can’t take a template from a person so from all this I just got to say is do a little research before you ruining a character it’s not lake with Aden and the soul king character you had the rider is already shown to take down cosmic beings so don’t put him on that weak lvl even John got done bad
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*SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER* Mc faces the setback of losing the Ghost rider powers (Temporarily), with some obvious foreshadowing to get them back in prior (and following) chapters. Yet for some reason a bunch of twits with the attention span of a slice of soggy bread review bomb the story? Pathetic. It's a good story with an actually interesting plot, and some amazingly written scenes. He's not instantly a God-tier OP infallible protagonist, nor is he a 5d chess mastermind. Don't let the review bombers fool you into thinking that getting outwitted and outplayed by Batman (Friggin Batman!) of all people (And temporarily at that!) makes for a bad read. Give it a shot, it's actually quite fun to theorize how things will turn out.
I change my mind, Barbido. SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY
In fact, I think that the author can write an interesting story, yes, many people were bombed that the power of the ghost rider was taken away, but I think that if you just write about how criminals are punished in each chapter, it's not interesting, but the author created an intrigue, and I will continue to follow this story, the author Don't leave the piece!
***EARLY SPOILER*** Listen I think everyone else is freaking out too much when it comes to him losing his power as the rider. It most likely will continue to be a rider story. He will gain the rider back and perhaps even continue with his new ring. He saw the rider as a tool and misused it going on a rampage. He's clearly an imperfect protagonist and will have to grow through the events around him. Just let the author cook, I'm loving the story so far! I'm just saying try and give it a chance instead of immediately dropping it.
Started well, ended horribly. The hero is an idiot who lived in Gotham. Started a family there, Joker killed them. I thought, well, okay. Good. Now the ghost rider will appear and it seemed like something was working out. Until the moment when the author shot himself in the foot by taking away the power of the phantom joker with a simple ritual of a couple of spells and words. And the racer was given by the system, damn it! Now the author is trying to revive the story with a yellow lantern, but it's like kicking a corpse in the form of a story. Not recommended for reading.
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"Don't judge the book by it's cover." People like to throw around this quote a lot and I also believe it to some degree. But in this case, you are getting the exactly the first thing that came your mind. When you read this fanfic synopsis or reviews.
I can’t in my right mind give it more then what I did, it’s a story with ghost rider in the picture and yet getting jumped by the league once he loses all his powers, it was hype when I was like ‘man Possible ghost rider with red and yellow rings would be busted.’ But then we get “plot armor Batman and justice league takes his powers.” The story started well enough but then it slowly took a dive with each chapter, firstly trusting catwoman even if she was a family friend that was a no no, plus catwoman was made out to be well… flirtatious as she is she has tact she wouldn’t be all over him after his family just died. So while it’s not bad, it’s going down a slope I can’t keep reading I may give it another chance when their is 30+ chapters to see what happens but taking the powers that quickly didn’t sit right. As much as a yellow ring is ok it’s a massive downgrade from ghost rider
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I followed this story because of Ghost Rider, but it doesn't have Ghost. Rider anymore.................................................................[img=ตบหน้า]
He got the Ghost Rider taken from him, when it was seemingly given to him by a system of sorts. Idk what the author was thinking, they should have known this would make people mad. The entire reason anyone is reading this, is because it was a ghost rider fic, only for them to do this. Hopefully someone else will make one…or maybe I will lol.
giving this one star purely because of recent development might change later if author cooks something decent out of this
Dude, I'm past the nonsense of someone willingly staying in Gotham as a reincarnated person at the beginning of the story. In the last episode, they took away the Ghost Rider power from MC. I do not recommend this story, do not waste your time.
Tuve esperanza con la historia pero el último capítulo, me dejó decepcionado......... Perder a muy poco de empezar la historia o despojado algo que fue dado por un ser considerado cósmico es puramente ridículo
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My favorite DC fanfic with an actual mc that does real actionable change and doesn’t talk abt it he solves issues straight forward and has the power to back it up
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hes all about vengeance. but hes not willing to die for it. hes weak willed because of that in my opinion. this distorted from a cool story. to a story of a pathetic man.
This book is shit bro no wonder it has little to no power stone. At first it started out just fine then the so called writer decides to do some bulshit utter shit.
[img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh]
Absolutely, in episode 1 MC loses his family, which honestly discouraged me a lot, but the later chapters made me forget about it, in the end he loses his powers to Constantine (I already expected this, Lucifer himself wants the guy's soul, but I was surprised that he died for Batman) the way he regained his powers and even became stronger was very good, and the way he is going to change universes is not forced (leaving for fear of being killed or experimented on by cosmic beings is a very good excuse to leave in style, better than a hole sucking him), he even left a legacy in the form of Jimmy, now I have to see the next chapters and I hope they are of greater or equal quality to the previous chapters.
I love it but why not send it to Cyberpunk Endgame or Attack on Titan, even better Akame Ga Kill Maybe to the universe of Tokyo Ghoul or Kimetsu
Reveal Spoiler So much potential was wasted by author it could havebeenan amazing story yet cauthor wasted it all on an edgy & forceful plot development that wasn't needed 1/10
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If you get through the starting few chapters, then this is one of the best recent novels. Although I Author improves how he writes Selena.
cara normalmente eu nunca faço envio ruim essa deve ser uma das primeiras que eu faço ou a primeira que coisa horrível muito erro de continuidade quem que vai encarnar no universo da DC e vai morar em Gotham, o mano tem entre "os poderes do espectro ghost Rider" que pelo visto ganhou os poderes do cara que conseguiu derrotar o anti monitor e perdeu para o Batman e e 2 mago, kkkkkkkk e no último capítulo ele acabou de lançar ele falou que o Superman não aguenta aí para superfície do Sol, o cara nunca leu uma HQ na vida só pode.
wonderful story . each of it is increasing the interest to read it more. i keep waiting for the story to come. if u can pls upload two stories a day.
Yea😬 the story went from 4.2stars to 1.0stars and the sad thing about this is that it could have been easily avoided. Ghost rider is the profile pic and the main source of attraction to this fic but you take away that power and give him a downgrade to a yellow/red lantern ring
My honest review from chapter 13 I’ve been a reader of your other books and I can hands down say it’s always the same you love to give Batman more credit than he’s worth characters with less sin and more morals than Batman have fallen to ghost rider PS but you use that as a plot point I haven’t ever seen anyone get out from it but enough about that my main problem is that you don’t know the rider it’s a disappointment to see a character ppl grow and love be degraded to that level if rider couldn’t fight hero’s then half of marvel fight with him would have been as you put it a wash you can’t be serious with a being that rivals gods be take out from the mc when it’s a template you can’t take a template from a person so from all this I just got to say is do a little research before you ruining a character it’s not lake with Aden and the soul king character you had the rider is already shown to take down cosmic beings so don’t put him on that weak lvl even John got done bad
Reveal Spoiler *SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER* Mc faces the setback of losing the Ghost rider powers (Temporarily), with some obvious foreshadowing to get them back in prior (and following) chapters. Yet for some reason a bunch of twits with the attention span of a slice of soggy bread review bomb the story? Pathetic. It's a good story with an actually interesting plot, and some amazingly written scenes. He's not instantly a God-tier OP infallible protagonist, nor is he a 5d chess mastermind. Don't let the review bombers fool you into thinking that getting outwitted and outplayed by Batman (Friggin Batman!) of all people (And temporarily at that!) makes for a bad read. Give it a shot, it's actually quite fun to theorize how things will turn out.
I change my mind, Barbido. SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY SORRY>SORRY
In fact, I think that the author can write an interesting story, yes, many people were bombed that the power of the ghost rider was taken away, but I think that if you just write about how criminals are punished in each chapter, it's not interesting, but the author created an intrigue, and I will continue to follow this story, the author Don't leave the piece!
***EARLY SPOILER*** Listen I think everyone else is freaking out too much when it comes to him losing his power as the rider. It most likely will continue to be a rider story. He will gain the rider back and perhaps even continue with his new ring. He saw the rider as a tool and misused it going on a rampage. He's clearly an imperfect protagonist and will have to grow through the events around him. Just let the author cook, I'm loving the story so far! I'm just saying try and give it a chance instead of immediately dropping it.
Started well, ended horribly. The hero is an idiot who lived in Gotham. Started a family there, Joker killed them. I thought, well, okay. Good. Now the ghost rider will appear and it seemed like something was working out. Until the moment when the author shot himself in the foot by taking away the power of the phantom joker with a simple ritual of a couple of spells and words. And the racer was given by the system, damn it! Now the author is trying to revive the story with a yellow lantern, but it's like kicking a corpse in the form of a story. Not recommended for reading.
Reveal Spoiler "Don't judge the book by it's cover." People like to throw around this quote a lot and I also believe it to some degree. But in this case, you are getting the exactly the first thing that came your mind. When you read this fanfic synopsis or reviews.
I can’t in my right mind give it more then what I did, it’s a story with ghost rider in the picture and yet getting jumped by the league once he loses all his powers, it was hype when I was like ‘man Possible ghost rider with red and yellow rings would be busted.’ But then we get “plot armor Batman and justice league takes his powers.” The story started well enough but then it slowly took a dive with each chapter, firstly trusting catwoman even if she was a family friend that was a no no, plus catwoman was made out to be well… flirtatious as she is she has tact she wouldn’t be all over him after his family just died. So while it’s not bad, it’s going down a slope I can’t keep reading I may give it another chance when their is 30+ chapters to see what happens but taking the powers that quickly didn’t sit right. As much as a yellow ring is ok it’s a massive downgrade from ghost rider
Reveal Spoiler I followed this story because of Ghost Rider, but it doesn't have Ghost. Rider anymore.................................................................[img=ตบหน้า]
He got the Ghost Rider taken from him, when it was seemingly given to him by a system of sorts. Idk what the author was thinking, they should have known this would make people mad. The entire reason anyone is reading this, is because it was a ghost rider fic, only for them to do this. Hopefully someone else will make one…or maybe I will lol.
giving this one star purely because of recent development might change later if author cooks something decent out of this
Dude, I'm past the nonsense of someone willingly staying in Gotham as a reincarnated person at the beginning of the story. In the last episode, they took away the Ghost Rider power from MC. I do not recommend this story, do not waste your time.
Tuve esperanza con la historia pero el último capítulo, me dejó decepcionado......... Perder a muy poco de empezar la historia o despojado algo que fue dado por un ser considerado cósmico es puramente ridículo
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My favorite DC fanfic with an actual mc that does real actionable change and doesn’t talk abt it he solves issues straight forward and has the power to back it up
Depois de muito tempo uma fic boa🥺🥺🥺[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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