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Chapter 58: 58 The First Stitch

The platform beneath their feet shifted, groaning faintly as cracks in the stone emitted faint glimmers of light. 

The mist cloaking the edges of the arena stirred, swirling like it was alive. 

Serria tightened her grip on her shield, her eyes narrowing as she glanced around.

"Wait… are we moving?" Serria muttered, her voice cutting through the tense silence. 

Zoe's stomach twisted, her knees bending instinctively to steady herself as the room shifted beneath them. 

The descending mist felt heavy, pressing against her senses like it had weight, an almost suffocating reminder of how deep they were going.

As the ground below came into view, the jagged ruins of the arena gave way to a smooth, gently curved surface.

The team scrambled to their feet, weapons raised in readiness. 

The descent jolted to a stop, making everyone stagger slightly. 


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
Zanden Zanden

Here we are at the end of Volume 1! "The First Stitch" was an absolute joy to write and marks a huge turning point for Zoe and the team. This chapter wasn’t just about finishing the fight — it was about stepping forward, taking ownership, and starting something bigger than themselves.

- Zoe’s Leadership: From negotiating for the land to rallying the team, Zoe finally steps into the role of a true leader. Her decisive moves and vision for the Nexus Node are what this story has been building toward, and it feels so satisfying to see her claim it.

-The Team Dynamic: Everyone had a moment to shine, and I loved weaving in their reactions as they realized how far they’ve come together. Whether it’s Gavin’s astonishment, Roderick’s wit, or Serria’s steady presence, the group feels more united than ever.

-Seeker’s Role: Seeker subtly approving Zoe’s actions adds a layer of validation to her growth. His offer to reshape the Node into whatever they need feels like the perfect gift to cap off their victory.

- That Ending: Zoe’s realization that this is her “new game” ties everything together. She’s not just playing anymore — she’s building something, and the stakes are bigger than ever.

I hope you loved this chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it! What was your favorite moment? Did Zoe’s leadership surprise you? And what are you looking forward to in the next volume? I’d love to hear your thoughts!

Here’s to the next stitch in the tapestry,

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