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It is good so far. it was frustrating from the start but it gets better as time pass by. keep up the good work author👊
Pros- Definitely an interesting take on lotr especially with the new elements involved it’s almost like a new world Cons-nothing really explained about the basic outline of the power system or really anything to do with ranks. very confusing at times
The idea is good , the story seems nice and promising but I can't really say that the end result is THAT good . I mean , I know that the MC is 16 years old mentally but still . He summons troops all the time , with weak excuses , there is no mention of how they look after themselves , as having a 100 (and still growing) party of knights would need a lot of supplies . And it feels like the some characters have different personalities to fit the MC
A história é muito boa, definitivamente deve ser uma das melhores história de senhor dos anéis que eu já li. 👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
It's rare to see a LOTR fanfic, specially not this good. Great work and very nice world building and although a little fast phased it's still very good.
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This is peak if you read the sacrifice of fhe swift infantry and their sacrifice and listen to the song "two steps from hell - Star sky"...it will bring tears.
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Good writing and also I like the recent chapter with Rapid Infantry and their sacrifice. Please don't drop this story it has great potential.
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It is good so far. it was frustrating from the start but it gets better as time pass by. keep up the good work author👊
Pros- Definitely an interesting take on lotr especially with the new elements involved it’s almost like a new world Cons-nothing really explained about the basic outline of the power system or really anything to do with ranks. very confusing at times
The idea is good , the story seems nice and promising but I can't really say that the end result is THAT good . I mean , I know that the MC is 16 years old mentally but still . He summons troops all the time , with weak excuses , there is no mention of how they look after themselves , as having a 100 (and still growing) party of knights would need a lot of supplies . And it feels like the some characters have different personalities to fit the MC
A história é muito boa, definitivamente deve ser uma das melhores história de senhor dos anéis que eu já li. 👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
It's rare to see a LOTR fanfic, specially not this good. Great work and very nice world building and although a little fast phased it's still very good.
Very good would recommend [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is peak if you read the sacrifice of fhe swift infantry and their sacrifice and listen to the song "two steps from hell - Star sky"...it will bring tears.
Reveal Spoiler Gooood x100 ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. ……………………………………………. …………………………………………….…………………………………………….
Good writing and also I like the recent chapter with Rapid Infantry and their sacrifice. Please don't drop this story it has great potential.
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