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Kasuma

Hello everyone, this is the author of “Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential.” I'll try to give you a little idea of what to expect here. First, the writing style and plot development. Both are very much inspired by Chinese authors, as I've read nothing but that for the last 6 years. As for the story itself. Unlike Soul King System, my first book, instead of bringing together all my favorite themes as a reader, here I opted instead to bring together concepts and above all a way of writing that was rarely seen. In this book, I wanted first and foremost, as usual, to mix science fiction and fantasy, because I love it, despite the complexity it requires to write! There will be two worlds, the world of Eternity and the real world. The development of the real world is slow at first, so as not to give readers a headache right from the start. The world of Eternity is accessible via a watch, and enables its users to strengthen their physique both in this world and in the real world. They can also acquire mysterious talents, characteristics and mysterious powers. Eternity is played like a single-player game, or at least this will be particularly the case for the first 300 chapters at least. it's a world strongly inspired by the Middle Ages, with a concept that's pretty well known in the WebNovel world: breathing methods to awaken the vital seed that lies dormant within us in order to become a knight! I won't go into too much detail here to avoid spoilers, especially for those who may not be familiar with this feature. Of course, I still have a lot of original ideas that you won't see in any other book (prove me wrong! :)). Prepare yourself for powerful emotional moments, as each of the characters accompanying Maxime, our protagonist, could die at any moment. These characters all have a first name, a story, a personality and links with the other mercenaries. Happy reading to all! PS: By the way, the quality of the writing is gradually improving, according to the feedback I've had.

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The_Great_Overlord

Okay, i'mma be honest...this novel is sick!! Mc power is well thought and writing quality, updates, THE STORY, keep it up champs, it will be a masterclass

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KENZ_OO_YT

Continue this is my best novel now [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze]

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Prezii
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This has become one of my favorites and I love how Max doesn’t take any shit. I can’t wait to see how the story progresses and hope the author continues to update it quickly. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Djeezer

This novel is great, everything about it is great whether it's the writing or the character all are done perfectly. I am already hooked, so waiting for more chapters !!! dont give up author

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Chill27
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Really good book so far and do like how the 2 world's fit together. Would definitely suggest others to read and looking forward to see it carry on.

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Kasuma

Hello everyone, this is the author of “Mercenary System: I can increase innate potential.” I'll try to give you a little idea of what to expect here. First, the writing style and plot development. Both are very much inspired by Chinese authors, as I've read nothing but that for the last 6 years. As for the story itself. Unlike Soul King System, my first book, instead of bringing together all my favorite themes as a reader, here I opted instead to bring together concepts and above all a way of writing that was rarely seen. In this book, I wanted first and foremost, as usual, to mix science fiction and fantasy, because I love it, despite the complexity it requires to write! There will be two worlds, the world of Eternity and the real world. The development of the real world is slow at first, so as not to give readers a headache right from the start. The world of Eternity is accessible via a watch, and enables its users to strengthen their physique both in this world and in the real world. They can also acquire mysterious talents, characteristics and mysterious powers. Eternity is played like a single-player game, or at least this will be particularly the case for the first 300 chapters at least. it's a world strongly inspired by the Middle Ages, with a concept that's pretty well known in the WebNovel world: breathing methods to awaken the vital seed that lies dormant within us in order to become a knight! I won't go into too much detail here to avoid spoilers, especially for those who may not be familiar with this feature. Of course, I still have a lot of original ideas that you won't see in any other book (prove me wrong! :)). Prepare yourself for powerful emotional moments, as each of the characters accompanying Maxime, our protagonist, could die at any moment. These characters all have a first name, a story, a personality and links with the other mercenaries. Happy reading to all! PS: By the way, the quality of the writing is gradually improving, according to the feedback I've had.

3mth
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The_Great_Overlord

Okay, i'mma be honest...this novel is sick!! Mc power is well thought and writing quality, updates, THE STORY, keep it up champs, it will be a masterclass

4d
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KENZ_OO_YT

Continue this is my best novel now [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze]

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Prezii
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This has become one of my favorites and I love how Max doesn’t take any shit. I can’t wait to see how the story progresses and hope the author continues to update it quickly. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

2mth
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Djeezer

This novel is great, everything about it is great whether it's the writing or the character all are done perfectly. I am already hooked, so waiting for more chapters !!! dont give up author

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3mth
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Chill27
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Really good book so far and do like how the 2 world's fit together. Would definitely suggest others to read and looking forward to see it carry on.

3mth
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