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It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! ππ It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It interesting to see MC/Eisen became a professor/teacher in Hogwarts.. But why Astronomy?? Muggle Studies is more good choice.. First, before Quirrell is become DADA teacher that year he's a Muggle Studies, so he could be a Muggle Studies without change other teachers.. Second, he's muggle before so he can teach Hogwarts student about muggle better.. I like that MC/Eisen got a cheat/system.. But maybe you should explain better how the system work author san.. And it so bad that he only get 1 Miracle Traits each year,, maybe give him another way to get it (so automaticly he can get 1 each year, but he can get more by doing/reach something?)) Love your story.. Keep up the great job author san ππππππ
je ne vais pas détaillé mon avis ma note en dit assez, je salut le travail effectué mais j aimerais beaucoup avoir le comparatif avec le mtl s il vous plait chère auteur/traducteur ( french)
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Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
It's hard to enjoy this when almost every minute you read something wrong. The author clearly didn't read the books and I even doubt he understood the movie. Good translation though.
I've read Raw version of this is fanfic before. This fanfic has a Potential but destroyed by Poison, Nationalism and Racism. Luckily the translator reduces it. Really appreciate that thank you
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Very good... Can't wait to read the next chapter ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I have only just started this book,however, it is detailed and consistent and proving to be a nice read.
nothing coherent, he gets involved as a teacher without having the credentials or the level, he thinks that by knowing 3 spells in a year he already did it
Ta bien ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I enjoy the story so far and think is has promise as it has an interesting premise some of the concepts in the story don't make sense as I don't see a professor of Hogwarts with no NEWT or OWL exams ever being taken getting hired. Also him being able to convert so much pounds into Galleons is a bit far fetched as if you could convert them like that you would find wizards zapping muggles for cash left and right. I do see quite a bit of author forced plots that make the story loose some of its allure but I am willing to accept it so far and find the story enjoyable enough to look past.
the story doesn't follow the world logic itself, characters aren't speaking they way they suppose too and most are telling rather than showing.
Great job of the authors .Itβs very good history ,different from other fanfiction.Original history and different system .I want to read more .
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Ai slop, plot makes no sense. System is something I havenβt seen before though which was cool
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This story seems great so far from what I've read, I am very worried that you might not continue updating. Please don't drop.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. π
It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! ππ It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... It interesting to see MC/Eisen became a professor/teacher in Hogwarts.. But why Astronomy?? Muggle Studies is more good choice.. First, before Quirrell is become DADA teacher that year he's a Muggle Studies, so he could be a Muggle Studies without change other teachers.. Second, he's muggle before so he can teach Hogwarts student about muggle better.. I like that MC/Eisen got a cheat/system.. But maybe you should explain better how the system work author san.. And it so bad that he only get 1 Miracle Traits each year,, maybe give him another way to get it (so automaticly he can get 1 each year, but he can get more by doing/reach something?)) Love your story.. Keep up the great job author san ππππππ
je ne vais pas détaillé mon avis ma note en dit assez, je salut le travail effectué mais j aimerais beaucoup avoir le comparatif avec le mtl s il vous plait chère auteur/traducteur ( french)
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Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
It's hard to enjoy this when almost every minute you read something wrong. The author clearly didn't read the books and I even doubt he understood the movie. Good translation though.
I've read Raw version of this is fanfic before. This fanfic has a Potential but destroyed by Poison, Nationalism and Racism. Luckily the translator reduces it. Really appreciate that thank you
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Very good... Can't wait to read the next chapter ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I have only just started this book,however, it is detailed and consistent and proving to be a nice read.
nothing coherent, he gets involved as a teacher without having the credentials or the level, he thinks that by knowing 3 spells in a year he already did it
Ta bien ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I enjoy the story so far and think is has promise as it has an interesting premise some of the concepts in the story don't make sense as I don't see a professor of Hogwarts with no NEWT or OWL exams ever being taken getting hired. Also him being able to convert so much pounds into Galleons is a bit far fetched as if you could convert them like that you would find wizards zapping muggles for cash left and right. I do see quite a bit of author forced plots that make the story loose some of its allure but I am willing to accept it so far and find the story enjoyable enough to look past.
the story doesn't follow the world logic itself, characters aren't speaking they way they suppose too and most are telling rather than showing.
Great job of the authors .Itβs very good history ,different from other fanfiction.Original history and different system .I want to read more .
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Ai slop, plot makes no sense. System is something I havenβt seen before though which was cool
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This story seems great so far from what I've read, I am very worried that you might not continue updating. Please don't drop.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. π