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So far so good. The MC has a "transmigration benefit" that does not completely break the power balance of ASOIAF world. Mc is relatively smart and ruthless, but has clear boundaries that he doesn't cross. Start has been promising so I hope the quality doesn't drop but so far plot hasn't progressed much so it's too early to tell.
To start off, I'll say that I'm writing this while I'm in the middle of work, because I can't get your story out of my head, so that's a sign of its quality. Before I go with a review I'll say it's a silly thing out of frustration that there are less than 100 chapters instead of 500 as I would like. AUTHOR! GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!. After this silly thing I'll go with the actual review: The first chapters are too influenced by AI, but the author read the comments and fixed it and that improved the story to the point that I don't remember if it was just the first chapter or it was 5, but no matter the quality of the story improved enormously. Let's talk about the MC, when I saw the story I thought it would be the typical cliché, a protagonist dies and reincarnates in the body of a native, but the author did something really surprising for any fanfic. He did something original. The soul of the earth dweller that should inhabit the MC's body (an obese, useless, and disgustingly perverted guy) is consumed, giving him memories of Wolverine's plot and template. Just the fact that he didn't make another Mushoku tensei made the story 100% better, a lot of people treasure that story, but Rudeus' character is so unpleasant in many ways that it makes me unable to enjoy it. Leaving that aside, the MC gains Wolverine's abilities, and let me tell you, in a setting like Game of Thrones, not only does it make it OP, but it's tremendously convenient (in a good way), it's incredible how the author develops the protagonist's criminal empire, very Godfather-esque and damn, you look REALLY good, it's intriguing, interesting, and very entertaining. The romance is just beginning, but it's clear that the character will aspire to at least two wives and I hope it ends there, because I like Daenerys, the harem is so cliché in these stories that it's already boring, so if the author is hesitating about doing it, the answer is probably no. To sum up, a story that's just beginning but has incredible potential, very well written, with an original plot (for an asoiaf fanfic) and deep and interesting characters.
This is a great story. Like a really fun one. When I saw wolverine, I was usure because varys and the maester hate anything magical and I thought that this would be a crack-fic but you have proven me wrong. It is good. The main character is written very well. My main question is what is the main character's goal? Is he trying to take over westeros because I'm wondering how alicent will fit in. I like her as a character but it feels like she has to die since this isn't a harem, or maybe not. I just think that there'll be questions of legitimacy if he doesn't marry a noble of some kind. I get that he has a powerbase but people can poison his loved. What happens if Elia pays faceless men to kill Alicent because she is the reason that she can't get with galahad or what if his group betrays him? I don't really like harems but I think that it would fit in this story. Maybe cersei or something. These are all just suggestions. Take them with a grain of salt. Your writing is sgood and you've managed to hide his powers very well. I can't wait to see how it all goes. So far, five stars.
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the start was good it had the Game of Thrones vibe to it but it changed when he became the squire when the story shifted from GoT vibe to all smiley vibe which is kinda weird since the characters get along too fast and too easy which is pretty off-putting but still an interesting read
The story isn’t bad it was quite good in the beginning but the story got stale or boring because everything was a community vote i dont have a problem with 1 vote if the writer was having a hard time with something but this author used it a bit too much for my taste the story was getting predictable because everything was voted on in the previous chapters Example the story was going in the direction that he was going to have multiple love interest but in but the community voted against it while i dont have a problem with that my problem is that the author steers the story in that direction just to have a vote on whether should i do this or that and then he does the same thing again all that build up just to just walks everything back its like a multiple choice simulator but the choice are controlled by twitch chat this is just one example as I dont Want to make this spoiler heavy Note : i dont mind votes but i feel like its a cheap way to try to please everyone i just want the writer to write his kind story i dont want a story where its just bland
De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo o no referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres así poder colocar lo que en un principio se podría suponer que se escribiría a continuación. Solo para poder finalizar, esta historia está...
I’m dropping this story because the author first develops romantic stories (Cersei, Elia), and then I’m sorry, I love my childhood friend. The question is why did you do this then, you spent many chapters developing romantic relationships, so that you could then say I love only one? And this is not a pretension that I want a harem, no, but why develop a relationship in order to abandon them like that. As for me, it’s terrible, I didn’t give 1 on everything only because the story really interested me, the beginning and the future process are super. But I'm sorry, I'm dropping this. Whoever reads to the last chapter at the moment, and this is 54, will probably understand that if not, it means we have different views. Very disappointed, I gave stones every day to get this ((((
Overall, the story was good, up to a point, namely chapter 45. Most disappointing is that the author succumbed to the influence of the crowd and just shifted the responsibility for some decisions to the readers.
Very interesting concept of the story. Grammar and interactions are very good.
Currently up the latest update, I’ll probably delete this and post a new review once more chapters are out. Everything was five stars other than character design. I feel like I don’t know the true MC, I know his masks he puts on for others, but basically nothing of his true face. Other than that though it’s been pretty good.
Pos que puedo decir, Si llegué al último capítulo de la Actualización fue porque lo disfruté. Me quede con la duda de lo que le paso a Ragnar
Not a bad story per say, author has tried to create a world with wolverine template but the story is filled with plot holes. Character development is 2d with no real thinking, no real reason for his quick success, with no hurdle, or even character growth. The story sumply tells us and we are suppose to believe it. Author has tried to create a story but his lack of experience also the use of ai is apparent.
any yuri or ntr? not fond of either and would like to know before i continue reading.
Una pregunta porque en algun momento me perdi el jefe de la pandilla y galahad son la misma persona? Porque estoy un poco perdido en ese sentido
Awesome novel so far and I am excited to see where it will go and hopefully it will keep getting updated. I especially like the translation quality and the fact that even though MC is powerful he is not really so overpowered that he flips the balance of the novel
surprisingly good. my only problem with this fic is that, there's too few chapters >.<
The story feels bloated filled with redundant and overly descriptive words, reading this makes my head go dizzy. I bet nearly 3/4ths of the story is filler words added by an AI.
Me está encantando está historia, no había leído una historia tan buena en muchos tiempo, y eso que e leído demasiadas jajaja el mejor fanfic hasta el momento, al menos en este día.
It started out great then the author decided to introduce a harem calling it a 'small' harem of 1-3 girls. I HATE harem and would never even start to read such a story. I hope the author adds the harem tag so that prospective readers are aware. Otherwise it is a great story with underworld mafia vibes (till chapter 17) but I won't read further for stated reasons .
Honestly pretty good, can’t wait for more chapters, keep up the good work chief👍
the Titel is realy Missplaced and should be changed becase it has a More negative vibe than anything. Story is astoundly good and worth a read , its different and ruthless
Loving the story, the MC, and everything so far. The only thing that scares me are the cockroaches that are yelling for harem. The number of good stories I've seen ruined because harems is too much
Incredible! Honestly the best story I’ve ever read. Truly a captivating story with well thought out writing. Can’t wait to read more chapters!
Great story, loved the use of the godfather in this FF. It's a good idea with huge potential. Keep it going and I'm sure we'll keep reading.
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So far so good. The MC has a "transmigration benefit" that does not completely break the power balance of ASOIAF world. Mc is relatively smart and ruthless, but has clear boundaries that he doesn't cross. Start has been promising so I hope the quality doesn't drop but so far plot hasn't progressed much so it's too early to tell.
To start off, I'll say that I'm writing this while I'm in the middle of work, because I can't get your story out of my head, so that's a sign of its quality. Before I go with a review I'll say it's a silly thing out of frustration that there are less than 100 chapters instead of 500 as I would like. AUTHOR! GIVE ME MORE CHAPTERS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!. After this silly thing I'll go with the actual review: The first chapters are too influenced by AI, but the author read the comments and fixed it and that improved the story to the point that I don't remember if it was just the first chapter or it was 5, but no matter the quality of the story improved enormously. Let's talk about the MC, when I saw the story I thought it would be the typical cliché, a protagonist dies and reincarnates in the body of a native, but the author did something really surprising for any fanfic. He did something original. The soul of the earth dweller that should inhabit the MC's body (an obese, useless, and disgustingly perverted guy) is consumed, giving him memories of Wolverine's plot and template. Just the fact that he didn't make another Mushoku tensei made the story 100% better, a lot of people treasure that story, but Rudeus' character is so unpleasant in many ways that it makes me unable to enjoy it. Leaving that aside, the MC gains Wolverine's abilities, and let me tell you, in a setting like Game of Thrones, not only does it make it OP, but it's tremendously convenient (in a good way), it's incredible how the author develops the protagonist's criminal empire, very Godfather-esque and damn, you look REALLY good, it's intriguing, interesting, and very entertaining. The romance is just beginning, but it's clear that the character will aspire to at least two wives and I hope it ends there, because I like Daenerys, the harem is so cliché in these stories that it's already boring, so if the author is hesitating about doing it, the answer is probably no. To sum up, a story that's just beginning but has incredible potential, very well written, with an original plot (for an asoiaf fanfic) and deep and interesting characters.
This is a great story. Like a really fun one. When I saw wolverine, I was usure because varys and the maester hate anything magical and I thought that this would be a crack-fic but you have proven me wrong. It is good. The main character is written very well. My main question is what is the main character's goal? Is he trying to take over westeros because I'm wondering how alicent will fit in. I like her as a character but it feels like she has to die since this isn't a harem, or maybe not. I just think that there'll be questions of legitimacy if he doesn't marry a noble of some kind. I get that he has a powerbase but people can poison his loved. What happens if Elia pays faceless men to kill Alicent because she is the reason that she can't get with galahad or what if his group betrays him? I don't really like harems but I think that it would fit in this story. Maybe cersei or something. These are all just suggestions. Take them with a grain of salt. Your writing is sgood and you've managed to hide his powers very well. I can't wait to see how it all goes. So far, five stars.
Reveal Spoiler the start was good it had the Game of Thrones vibe to it but it changed when he became the squire when the story shifted from GoT vibe to all smiley vibe which is kinda weird since the characters get along too fast and too easy which is pretty off-putting but still an interesting read
The story isn’t bad it was quite good in the beginning but the story got stale or boring because everything was a community vote i dont have a problem with 1 vote if the writer was having a hard time with something but this author used it a bit too much for my taste the story was getting predictable because everything was voted on in the previous chapters Example the story was going in the direction that he was going to have multiple love interest but in but the community voted against it while i dont have a problem with that my problem is that the author steers the story in that direction just to have a vote on whether should i do this or that and then he does the same thing again all that build up just to just walks everything back its like a multiple choice simulator but the choice are controlled by twitch chat this is just one example as I dont Want to make this spoiler heavy Note : i dont mind votes but i feel like its a cheap way to try to please everyone i just want the writer to write his kind story i dont want a story where its just bland
De un momento muy particular y ciertamente de manera singular haciendo o no referencia a cierto diálogo que puede o no estar relacionada con algún hipotético muñeco para ser o no ser contabilizado como 150 caracteres así poder colocar lo que en un principio se podría suponer que se escribiría a continuación. Solo para poder finalizar, esta historia está...
I’m dropping this story because the author first develops romantic stories (Cersei, Elia), and then I’m sorry, I love my childhood friend. The question is why did you do this then, you spent many chapters developing romantic relationships, so that you could then say I love only one? And this is not a pretension that I want a harem, no, but why develop a relationship in order to abandon them like that. As for me, it’s terrible, I didn’t give 1 on everything only because the story really interested me, the beginning and the future process are super. But I'm sorry, I'm dropping this. Whoever reads to the last chapter at the moment, and this is 54, will probably understand that if not, it means we have different views. Very disappointed, I gave stones every day to get this ((((
Overall, the story was good, up to a point, namely chapter 45. Most disappointing is that the author succumbed to the influence of the crowd and just shifted the responsibility for some decisions to the readers.
Very interesting concept of the story. Grammar and interactions are very good.
Currently up the latest update, I’ll probably delete this and post a new review once more chapters are out. Everything was five stars other than character design. I feel like I don’t know the true MC, I know his masks he puts on for others, but basically nothing of his true face. Other than that though it’s been pretty good.
Pos que puedo decir, Si llegué al último capítulo de la Actualización fue porque lo disfruté. Me quede con la duda de lo que le paso a Ragnar
Not a bad story per say, author has tried to create a world with wolverine template but the story is filled with plot holes. Character development is 2d with no real thinking, no real reason for his quick success, with no hurdle, or even character growth. The story sumply tells us and we are suppose to believe it. Author has tried to create a story but his lack of experience also the use of ai is apparent.
any yuri or ntr? not fond of either and would like to know before i continue reading.
Una pregunta porque en algun momento me perdi el jefe de la pandilla y galahad son la misma persona? Porque estoy un poco perdido en ese sentido
Awesome novel so far and I am excited to see where it will go and hopefully it will keep getting updated. I especially like the translation quality and the fact that even though MC is powerful he is not really so overpowered that he flips the balance of the novel
surprisingly good. my only problem with this fic is that, there's too few chapters >.<
The story feels bloated filled with redundant and overly descriptive words, reading this makes my head go dizzy. I bet nearly 3/4ths of the story is filler words added by an AI.
Me está encantando está historia, no había leído una historia tan buena en muchos tiempo, y eso que e leído demasiadas jajaja el mejor fanfic hasta el momento, al menos en este día.
It started out great then the author decided to introduce a harem calling it a 'small' harem of 1-3 girls. I HATE harem and would never even start to read such a story. I hope the author adds the harem tag so that prospective readers are aware. Otherwise it is a great story with underworld mafia vibes (till chapter 17) but I won't read further for stated reasons .
Honestly pretty good, can’t wait for more chapters, keep up the good work chief👍
the Titel is realy Missplaced and should be changed becase it has a More negative vibe than anything. Story is astoundly good and worth a read , its different and ruthless
Loving the story, the MC, and everything so far. The only thing that scares me are the cockroaches that are yelling for harem. The number of good stories I've seen ruined because harems is too much
Incredible! Honestly the best story I’ve ever read. Truly a captivating story with well thought out writing. Can’t wait to read more chapters!
Great story, loved the use of the godfather in this FF. It's a good idea with huge potential. Keep it going and I'm sure we'll keep reading.
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This story has potential. The Wolverine and his X-men.