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The writing quality, at least for the first few chapters, is bad. Sometimes, the author doesn't put spaces after a period or comma. There are either words that are unnecessary or missing in a sentence, and the I aren't capitalized most of the time. Overall, the grammar isn't that. Though the plot seems interesting.
You say you are a beginner writer? Don't joke, a beginner writer can't possibly write a story where each chapter gets better and more interesting.
no harem ruined it for me , some stories need a little spice because I think romance is one of the biggest fact that makes these novels good as there a lot of novels that are exactly like this , if it was a more entertaining story I don't see no harem as an issue
This novel is a gem i really like this novel author the story and characters so far are really amazing. i just hope the uploads remain consistent. And one more thing Please make it harem as there are not many novel on this app where mc is an extra with an harem troupe. i don't know why but there are only single female lead and I am sock of reading those. so far the story is interesting.😁 Good work author thanks for the novel 👍.
Hi i hope you don't drop this story i really like it i will support you as much as I can So please keep writing this story And dont drop it...................
Will great novel but I think I will stop here not because the novel was bad its just that I don’t like where the MC like to befriend the original MC it just makes the novel seem not fun I wish the mc to be alone and start his own life instead of wasting his time with the main casting.
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Ah yeah, author here. I know it's kinda late but ask me any questions regarding the novel, i will try my best to answer everything.
The writing quality, at least for the first few chapters, is bad. Sometimes, the author doesn't put spaces after a period or comma. There are either words that are unnecessary or missing in a sentence, and the I aren't capitalized most of the time. Overall, the grammar isn't that. Though the plot seems interesting.
You say you are a beginner writer? Don't joke, a beginner writer can't possibly write a story where each chapter gets better and more interesting.
no harem ruined it for me , some stories need a little spice because I think romance is one of the biggest fact that makes these novels good as there a lot of novels that are exactly like this , if it was a more entertaining story I don't see no harem as an issue
This novel is a gem i really like this novel author the story and characters so far are really amazing. i just hope the uploads remain consistent. And one more thing Please make it harem as there are not many novel on this app where mc is an extra with an harem troupe. i don't know why but there are only single female lead and I am sock of reading those. so far the story is interesting.😁 Good work author thanks for the novel 👍.
Hi i hope you don't drop this story i really like it i will support you as much as I can So please keep writing this story And dont drop it...................
Will great novel but I think I will stop here not because the novel was bad its just that I don’t like where the MC like to befriend the original MC it just makes the novel seem not fun I wish the mc to be alone and start his own life instead of wasting his time with the main casting.
Reveal Spoiler
Ah yeah, author here. I know it's kinda late but ask me any questions regarding the novel, i will try my best to answer everything.