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the novel's excellent, nothing else to say there so I'm giving it five stars. but i want to ask the author why aren't you updating the novel,"am i lewd enough?" and making more," his hips and her pleasure" type novels? I've been a big fan of your writing from the beginning, so please can you make a similar novel, doesn't matter how big or short is it , and you also dropped the Bambi one, so pretty please ??[img=faceslap][img=faceslap] p.s. I'm not saying you should stop making these types of novels with manly man, so please don't be offended anyone, i love all the works of the author.
I love it, the reason why I’m not putting it at 5 stars is because we haven’t really seen any other characters other than the mc, and the world while promising, has yet to be explored by us readers. But the writing and grammar? Godlike, there is not a SINGLE mistake I’ve seen, truly one of the best written works I’ve read in a while just based on the writing skill. For people like us, who like ruthless mc’s, this is definitely for you, he does not care about anyone other than himself, and his ruthless levels equal Fang Yuan, so yeh, very enjoyable for people like us
I can't believe i was lucky enough to even stumble upon this treasure. This is Peak 🔥, I've been 100% agreeing with the MC this entire time, the writing quality amazing and just everything about this novel got me hooked from the very first chapter.
Now this is a very interesting litrpg mainly because of good writing quality and a mc that is evil like our Lord and Saviour Great Love💕
Has great potential, I wish the author luck in his work with God’s blessings. Review: going to be doing this in WebNovel structure so be lenient with me. Writing Quality: The writing quality is good, I have yet to notice any grammar mistakes or misplacement of words. The might be some, but it’s not something that would impact your reading flow. Update: The book updates often with the author having to take a break to deal with real life situations but who are we to judge. It could be better in my opinion but I would prefer quality over rushed work. Story development: The story itself is interesting, with an evil/rational mc who was placed in a world that’s seems to be primordial history with the usual Gods,dwarf,elves and etc but what makes this good is how the characters actually seems decently strong and realistic. Like at one point, a god notice the mc and went to kill him himself. But that’s to much spoilers so I won’t go into detail, so read it yourself and I tell you, won’t regret it. I do have to state that the MC plot cheat would be a dues ex-machine, meaning that a higher power would come in to save the day but this high power is also using the mc to develop himself. Character design: The author took inspiration from a lot of novels, some popular and well known while others not so much. I’ll be honest when I say the mc gives me the custom demon vibes with his thinking and decisions. Although, I do believe that some stuff could’ve been done better like his cautiousness, we can just chuck it up to his inner animalistic instincts. This is a non-human novel with the mc looking like the cover with every evolution (not sure if the author changed it in the future). I don’t expect any romance and I doubt the would be so don’t worry about it impacting the reading. World background: As I said before, the story seemed to be placed in a primordial historical world, with titans falling and rising to god hood, with Gods birthing their own creations. I have not read a lot of the novel with paying chapters coming in early, but from what I’ve read so far, the world seems to be big, with a lot of dimensions and domains of different God and stuff.
the novel's excellent, nothing else to say there so I'm giving it five stars. but i want to ask the author why aren't you updating the novel,"am i lewd enough?" and making more," his hips and her pleasure" type novels? I've been a big fan of your writing from the beginning, so please can you make a similar novel, doesn't matter how big or short is it , and you also dropped the Bambi one, so pretty please ??[img=faceslap][img=faceslap] p.s. I'm not saying you should stop making these types of novels with manly man, so please don't be offended anyone, i love all the works of the author.
I love it, the reason why I’m not putting it at 5 stars is because we haven’t really seen any other characters other than the mc, and the world while promising, has yet to be explored by us readers. But the writing and grammar? Godlike, there is not a SINGLE mistake I’ve seen, truly one of the best written works I’ve read in a while just based on the writing skill. For people like us, who like ruthless mc’s, this is definitely for you, he does not care about anyone other than himself, and his ruthless levels equal Fang Yuan, so yeh, very enjoyable for people like us
I can't believe i was lucky enough to even stumble upon this treasure. This is Peak 🔥, I've been 100% agreeing with the MC this entire time, the writing quality amazing and just everything about this novel got me hooked from the very first chapter.
Now this is a very interesting litrpg mainly because of good writing quality and a mc that is evil like our Lord and Saviour Great Love💕
Has great potential, I wish the author luck in his work with God’s blessings. Review: going to be doing this in WebNovel structure so be lenient with me. Writing Quality: The writing quality is good, I have yet to notice any grammar mistakes or misplacement of words. The might be some, but it’s not something that would impact your reading flow. Update: The book updates often with the author having to take a break to deal with real life situations but who are we to judge. It could be better in my opinion but I would prefer quality over rushed work. Story development: The story itself is interesting, with an evil/rational mc who was placed in a world that’s seems to be primordial history with the usual Gods,dwarf,elves and etc but what makes this good is how the characters actually seems decently strong and realistic. Like at one point, a god notice the mc and went to kill him himself. But that’s to much spoilers so I won’t go into detail, so read it yourself and I tell you, won’t regret it. I do have to state that the MC plot cheat would be a dues ex-machine, meaning that a higher power would come in to save the day but this high power is also using the mc to develop himself. Character design: The author took inspiration from a lot of novels, some popular and well known while others not so much. I’ll be honest when I say the mc gives me the custom demon vibes with his thinking and decisions. Although, I do believe that some stuff could’ve been done better like his cautiousness, we can just chuck it up to his inner animalistic instincts. This is a non-human novel with the mc looking like the cover with every evolution (not sure if the author changed it in the future). I don’t expect any romance and I doubt the would be so don’t worry about it impacting the reading. World background: As I said before, the story seemed to be placed in a primordial historical world, with titans falling and rising to god hood, with Gods birthing their own creations. I have not read a lot of the novel with paying chapters coming in early, but from what I’ve read so far, the world seems to be big, with a lot of dimensions and domains of different God and stuff.