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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views on every chapter you post and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
Из плюсов: герой неслаб магически, немного юмора, нестандартная система, неожиданно хафлпаф. Из минусов: очень медленно развивается сюжет(заявленный гарем возможен лишь после 5000 главы), персонажей меньше, чем в каноне, очень тупой главный герой, ну очень тупой главный герой (важное пишут дважды), герои скучные, много текста лишь ради самого текста. Если автор допишет хотя бы до третьего года учебы, то сильно удивит. Предвижу очередной брошенный фанфик. Поэтому лучше сразу бросить тратить время ... Удачи.
I've reached till chapter 93 and I can say this is a nice fanfic. The grammar till chapter 50 was good but from there the quality dropped and mistakes started to appear more frequently. The release rate is also good, and the translator don't miss publishing at least once a day. Overall I would say this is nice enough to read when you are bored.
It's the best HP fanfic of all time. I am very satisfied with it. Cause MC didn't even spare Dumbldore, he used him as his lackey. It's really fulfilling. All the dissatisfaction I have with HP got a satisfied place in this.
Got bored after a while, the comments are complete BS and the whole concept in the synopsis is equally so. He has only played one or two pranks the entire time and has spent more time making magical objects then anything else and it very quickly becomes monotonous.
¿Qué quieres que te diga? Tener nuevos capítulos es bueno, pero estimo que no son muy largos y aunque no he contado el número de palabras en ellos, últimamente no pasan de 500, lo cual es poco. Personalmente, soy de los que prefiere calidad en vez de números y esto se traduce como menos caps pero que sean más largos, de lo contrario, se siente como si la trama nunca avanzara y el interés poco a poco se perderá.
it's was ok at starting, but then again, the mc gets powers from other worlds, making it 6 old-fashioned ff , It's says pranks, but nothing major was done
This wholesome!!! It has magic and pokemons too lmao which was unexpected. The protagonist is funny af A headsup, the real magical journey of Wayne begins from chp 15 Continuing it as of now, may drop another review The story has a good headstart, petition for regular updates 🙏🤌
This book is a fresh breath. All systems and magic powers are there, but something like this is a first. It is a fanfic. I’m curious to read the conversation of Harry and Wayne. The MC displays numerous sides, so I can’t say how the character is, exactly. In some chapters, I find him mischievous while in the next, he displays a great sense of responsibility. Also the character is not an introvert or someone who has trouble with communication which is nice, as I have read more stories on introverts than those who are good at communication.
It's a very interesting and funny Harry Potter fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is quite good too.. But there's few times the author write wrong names, like Quang Zhi?? And Li.. Although I know who they are, but it still not good to see wrong names.. I like MC/Lawrence characteristic and interaction with others(especially when he prank Gred and Forge), it's so funny.. I don't mind a little chaos in Hogwarts, it's make the story more funny and refreshing, but please don't make MC overdid it (a little is fine, but not too big).. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
My only complaint is that there aren’t enough chapters ! I’m really enjoying this story so far. 39 chapter in.
on chapter 35. the story is pretty good. the Mc is laid back and has a system that isn't too well explained such as every instance he gets points and the amount of points. the system adds some comedy and the mc seems smart and competent though a OP. the translation seems fine. there are some small things I dont like such as Cho Changs name being the Chinese version or lines in the move not being the same in the book when the scene is the same. it might be the correct translation but I wish the translators took the liberty to change it and make it better. overall though it's fine and I will keep reading.
This book is gold! Please keep it going for a long time! Unique story plot and intriguing MC!
It’s actually quite okay. I read it just to throw a one star for the sake of all the bot reviews but I actually found myself enjoying it. I’m sure I’ll drop it when the npcs in the book get to annoying and boring but for now it’s pretty good 👍 I hate all the AI reviews
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This novel has become my go-to read when I need a pick-me-up. The humor is always spot-on, and the adventure is always thrilling. Keep writing, author-san!
I'm so impressed by the author's ability to balance action, adventure, and heartwarming moments. This novel has something for everyone, and I'm so glad I found it. Keep up the amazing work!
I was blown away by the world-building in this novel. The author has created a truly unique and immersive environment that draws you in and refuses to let go. Amazing work!
This novel has everything: action, adventure, and humor. I'm so invested in the characters' journeys, and I can't wait to see how it all ends. Keep writing, author-san!
I'm usually not a fan of system stories, but this one has me hooked. The themes are interesting, and the execution is flawless. Keep it up, author!
I never thought Hogwarts could get any crazier until I read this! Wayne Lawrence and his “Chaos King System” turn the school upside down, creating chaos and mayhem that’s both fun and refreshing to read. The humor in this fanfic is spot on, and the way characters like Dumbledore and Voldemort react to Wayne's antics adds another layer of enjoyment. It's an exciting, unpredictable take on the wizarding world that keeps you hooked from start to finish!
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views on every chapter you post and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
Из плюсов: герой неслаб магически, немного юмора, нестандартная система, неожиданно хафлпаф. Из минусов: очень медленно развивается сюжет(заявленный гарем возможен лишь после 5000 главы), персонажей меньше, чем в каноне, очень тупой главный герой, ну очень тупой главный герой (важное пишут дважды), герои скучные, много текста лишь ради самого текста. Если автор допишет хотя бы до третьего года учебы, то сильно удивит. Предвижу очередной брошенный фанфик. Поэтому лучше сразу бросить тратить время ... Удачи.
I've reached till chapter 93 and I can say this is a nice fanfic. The grammar till chapter 50 was good but from there the quality dropped and mistakes started to appear more frequently. The release rate is also good, and the translator don't miss publishing at least once a day. Overall I would say this is nice enough to read when you are bored.
It's the best HP fanfic of all time. I am very satisfied with it. Cause MC didn't even spare Dumbldore, he used him as his lackey. It's really fulfilling. All the dissatisfaction I have with HP got a satisfied place in this.
Got bored after a while, the comments are complete BS and the whole concept in the synopsis is equally so. He has only played one or two pranks the entire time and has spent more time making magical objects then anything else and it very quickly becomes monotonous.
¿Qué quieres que te diga? Tener nuevos capítulos es bueno, pero estimo que no son muy largos y aunque no he contado el número de palabras en ellos, últimamente no pasan de 500, lo cual es poco. Personalmente, soy de los que prefiere calidad en vez de números y esto se traduce como menos caps pero que sean más largos, de lo contrario, se siente como si la trama nunca avanzara y el interés poco a poco se perderá.
it's was ok at starting, but then again, the mc gets powers from other worlds, making it 6 old-fashioned ff , It's says pranks, but nothing major was done
This wholesome!!! It has magic and pokemons too lmao which was unexpected. The protagonist is funny af A headsup, the real magical journey of Wayne begins from chp 15 Continuing it as of now, may drop another review The story has a good headstart, petition for regular updates 🙏🤌
This book is a fresh breath. All systems and magic powers are there, but something like this is a first. It is a fanfic. I’m curious to read the conversation of Harry and Wayne. The MC displays numerous sides, so I can’t say how the character is, exactly. In some chapters, I find him mischievous while in the next, he displays a great sense of responsibility. Also the character is not an introvert or someone who has trouble with communication which is nice, as I have read more stories on introverts than those who are good at communication.
It's a very interesting and funny Harry Potter fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is quite good too.. But there's few times the author write wrong names, like Quang Zhi?? And Li.. Although I know who they are, but it still not good to see wrong names.. I like MC/Lawrence characteristic and interaction with others(especially when he prank Gred and Forge), it's so funny.. I don't mind a little chaos in Hogwarts, it's make the story more funny and refreshing, but please don't make MC overdid it (a little is fine, but not too big).. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
My only complaint is that there aren’t enough chapters ! I’m really enjoying this story so far. 39 chapter in.
on chapter 35. the story is pretty good. the Mc is laid back and has a system that isn't too well explained such as every instance he gets points and the amount of points. the system adds some comedy and the mc seems smart and competent though a OP. the translation seems fine. there are some small things I dont like such as Cho Changs name being the Chinese version or lines in the move not being the same in the book when the scene is the same. it might be the correct translation but I wish the translators took the liberty to change it and make it better. overall though it's fine and I will keep reading.
This book is gold! Please keep it going for a long time! Unique story plot and intriguing MC!
It’s actually quite okay. I read it just to throw a one star for the sake of all the bot reviews but I actually found myself enjoying it. I’m sure I’ll drop it when the npcs in the book get to annoying and boring but for now it’s pretty good 👍 I hate all the AI reviews
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This novel has become my go-to read when I need a pick-me-up. The humor is always spot-on, and the adventure is always thrilling. Keep writing, author-san!
I'm so impressed by the author's ability to balance action, adventure, and heartwarming moments. This novel has something for everyone, and I'm so glad I found it. Keep up the amazing work!
I was blown away by the world-building in this novel. The author has created a truly unique and immersive environment that draws you in and refuses to let go. Amazing work!
This novel has everything: action, adventure, and humor. I'm so invested in the characters' journeys, and I can't wait to see how it all ends. Keep writing, author-san!
I'm usually not a fan of system stories, but this one has me hooked. The themes are interesting, and the execution is flawless. Keep it up, author!
I never thought Hogwarts could get any crazier until I read this! Wayne Lawrence and his “Chaos King System” turn the school upside down, creating chaos and mayhem that’s both fun and refreshing to read. The humor in this fanfic is spot on, and the way characters like Dumbledore and Voldemort react to Wayne's antics adds another layer of enjoyment. It's an exciting, unpredictable take on the wizarding world that keeps you hooked from start to finish!