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How can you take away Luffy's comrades?! it's not just one piece. it gets too strong too quickly. in the first chapters there is already a sense of inconsistency
a lot of the names are wrong, the grammar is a little bit decent, but some translations are wrong, like luffy send he wants to be one piece??? that should be he wants to be the pirate king or he wants to find the one piece,,, plus his development is to fast getting rewards that he does not need to train and instantly knows how to use it to its maximume level,,, nope its to fast, slow down
Complete trash! The biggest problem is the garbage quality MTL. I'll never understand why people can't just take some time to edit the MTL and make it readable. Story wise, the MC gets railroaded by his system, which makes it feel like he has no actual agency.
its decent but mtl cant 3 chapters its not readable after two digit chapter does anyone know where to read the raw fic of this one piece fic if theres one?
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Ótima história, protagonista op, mas acho que você deve mudar essa personalidade, tornando o menos caricato, tirando isso podemos dizer que ele tem muito pinheiral
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Although the first few chapter are mtl with slighty to no edits, it gets better as the story progresses. By better I mean the author actually starts to edit them. I guess the author wasn’t too familiar with the plot for the first few and wasn’t sure which one to translate, so they left it alone for the readers to help correct. Could just be my take tho 🤷♂️
How can you take away Luffy's comrades?! it's not just one piece. it gets too strong too quickly. in the first chapters there is already a sense of inconsistency
a lot of the names are wrong, the grammar is a little bit decent, but some translations are wrong, like luffy send he wants to be one piece??? that should be he wants to be the pirate king or he wants to find the one piece,,, plus his development is to fast getting rewards that he does not need to train and instantly knows how to use it to its maximume level,,, nope its to fast, slow down
Complete trash! The biggest problem is the garbage quality MTL. I'll never understand why people can't just take some time to edit the MTL and make it readable. Story wise, the MC gets railroaded by his system, which makes it feel like he has no actual agency.
its decent but mtl cant 3 chapters its not readable after two digit chapter does anyone know where to read the raw fic of this one piece fic if theres one?
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Ótima história, protagonista op, mas acho que você deve mudar essa personalidade, tornando o menos caricato, tirando isso podemos dizer que ele tem muito pinheiral
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Although the first few chapter are mtl with slighty to no edits, it gets better as the story progresses. By better I mean the author actually starts to edit them. I guess the author wasn’t too familiar with the plot for the first few and wasn’t sure which one to translate, so they left it alone for the readers to help correct. Could just be my take tho 🤷♂️