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Yesnth

Y'know, I went into this expecting nothing. But damn did I get hooked. This story is one of the few that captivates you and pulls you in. It captures the feel of the Harry Potter books perfectly in how magical everything seems. Although this is a translated work, it does not change that it is a work that needs to be appreciated. The Writing quality, or better yet, translation quality is impeccable. you can't even tell its a translated work unless something really particular pops up. The story development is great. although hard to stick to in the first 10 chapters, when it gets rolling, oh it gets rolling. I couldn't even tell how fast I read through this and when I reached the end it left me craving for more. The Characters are very nicely interpreted. all of them capture the Essence of the originals and even the side characters feel like they're alive. although sometimes it may feel like the side characters glaze the Mc too much, that's just part of the fun and is framed as being perfectly logical. The updating stability is good. not much to say about it. There is a chapter every day. As for the World Background, this is literally the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read that takes many elements from the books too. Everyone else just watches the movies and calls it a day in terms of research. this is very well fletched out and the gaps in knowledge are allowed to be filled in by the author. all in all, 5/5. One of the best, if not the best fanfics, I've read on the platform. It simply draws you in and doesn't let go. would recommended.

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Rango_Das

Author deceived us with the cover image. But the story is good.

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Jadrienne_Lee

So i was just minding my own business until i saw Hermione's cover so I thought? How about myself some time to relax instead i only got hooked by an interesting plotπŸ˜…

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drippy

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MrSfiry

This Harry Potter fic is very well written and has a cool premise. Chapter 66 as I write this and I thought it was very good. Some characters from the canon may have their personalities changed a little, other than that everything is fine. Author, I hope to have sauce in the scenes that should have sauce in the future, for those who don't like it just skip the sauce chapter hehe.

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Lucius_SS

The chapters either consist of info dump, mc showing off, or very dry exploration of magical theory that can sometimes even leave plot holes, mc will most likely be showing off while doing so. Put simply, it's boring.

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RackTagz

The writing is suffering in its flow with wierd phrases, maybe because of translation or something but it tends to make the story lifeless. Hopefully it Will improve

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AaatEae
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it's good but we're gonna catch up to raws soon sadge

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LeonToralla

It's a good HP fic. Being Chinese, it has the typical clichΓ© elements BUT, the translator has done a fantastic job in translating and adapting so that it's not too noticeable. The story so far is entertaining and enjoyable, the relationships between the characters are also good and well developed. So far I personally liked it a lot, I hope it continues and the translator doesn't stop it. I recommend it.[img=update][img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=gift]

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Zed1_Eren_

Iam giving 5 stars just for the cover pick πŸ™ˆπŸ™‰πŸ™Š

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Usiel
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Pure idiocy, excellent trash, king of morons MC. Simp wuss and beta mc. Trusting bumbledork showing of his talents. Befriending the idiotic trio. Going to gryffindor instead of ravens. This sorry excuse of fiction is clearly a translation, a bad one at that.

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Unknown_myth

JK ROWLING will be PROUD .... love the world building and tge authors take on Spells and Magical theories . its a refreshing and completely new POV to the Series . also its great that thr authors picks the best of both , the books as well as the novel !!

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Darkphoenix11

How bad is the harem?

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Abyss_Edge

It's good, not great nor bad but good. It has that Chinese writing style or vibe or whatever you call it, as well as the fact that the author seems to have only watched the movie.

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Tee16
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Cutejohn1234

this is a interesting read i came in expecting chinese sign in overpowered harem lemon mid work. but found something with potential instead.

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Humbuub

3-2-3-5-5 Writing is okay, there are similar terms written differently, and sometimes they mistake on the same chapter. Story is below average to me. IDKW I kept seeing 5 stars when there's barely any story in it. almost 50 chapters in and we're still on 2nd day in Hogwarts. Pacing is super slow. I like MC most of the time, too bad he went the simp road. Updates are fast. World Background is probably the best part of this fic, most theory and MC's inner monologue about The Wizarding World is spot on.

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Zero_4296

I love it, and it's different from all the other Harry Potter fanfictions I read before all of them are good this one just has something exciting to it that I can't explain.

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abc_logan

everything is good until harem tag and i really hating Hermione character and her simps with how these fics are portraying her. she is just a bookworm and thats it and these authors are glorifying it

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Aayush_storms

If this didn't have a harem tag then i would have given this higher rating.

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LiveandLove

[img=recommend]I created a poem with chatGPT: With words that soar, and scenes that thrill, Each chapter a masterpiece, a wondrous fill. The essence of the canon, it doth embrace, Yet with skillful additions, it doth grace. Elevating the tale to realms untold, A story that doth our hearts enfold. So heed my words, with utmost sincerity, This fanfic, a treasure, a rarity. A journey so true, A masterpiece, through and through.

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kyleqi

Spoiler- He smashes Narcissa and Bella with Flour and Loonna on top..........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=nervous]................

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Chandan001

Read for yourself......................................................................................................................................

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KuNaLsAmA

Started reading 'coz the cover pic of Hermione... But now hooked due to an interesting plotπŸ˜…πŸ’€

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Nirome

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SonDio

Harem πŸ‘ŽπŸΏ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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powan56379

This is on my top 5 HP fanfics now! So Gooooood!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dontmakemecry

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_Nia
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Good translation I also checked out the mtl version and thats also nice and readable (miracle) Pretty good novel so farrrrr

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SaintArgus

It's really hard to believe that this is a Chinese fanfic,

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Yesnth

Y'know, I went into this expecting nothing. But damn did I get hooked. This story is one of the few that captivates you and pulls you in. It captures the feel of the Harry Potter books perfectly in how magical everything seems. Although this is a translated work, it does not change that it is a work that needs to be appreciated. The Writing quality, or better yet, translation quality is impeccable. you can't even tell its a translated work unless something really particular pops up. The story development is great. although hard to stick to in the first 10 chapters, when it gets rolling, oh it gets rolling. I couldn't even tell how fast I read through this and when I reached the end it left me craving for more. The Characters are very nicely interpreted. all of them capture the Essence of the originals and even the side characters feel like they're alive. although sometimes it may feel like the side characters glaze the Mc too much, that's just part of the fun and is framed as being perfectly logical. The updating stability is good. not much to say about it. There is a chapter every day. As for the World Background, this is literally the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read that takes many elements from the books too. Everyone else just watches the movies and calls it a day in terms of research. this is very well fletched out and the gaps in knowledge are allowed to be filled in by the author. all in all, 5/5. One of the best, if not the best fanfics, I've read on the platform. It simply draws you in and doesn't let go. would recommended.

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Rango_Das

Author deceived us with the cover image. But the story is good.

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Jadrienne_Lee

So i was just minding my own business until i saw Hermione's cover so I thought? How about myself some time to relax instead i only got hooked by an interesting plotπŸ˜…

4mth
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drippy

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4mth
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MrSfiry

This Harry Potter fic is very well written and has a cool premise. Chapter 66 as I write this and I thought it was very good. Some characters from the canon may have their personalities changed a little, other than that everything is fine. Author, I hope to have sauce in the scenes that should have sauce in the future, for those who don't like it just skip the sauce chapter hehe.

4mth
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Lucius_SS

The chapters either consist of info dump, mc showing off, or very dry exploration of magical theory that can sometimes even leave plot holes, mc will most likely be showing off while doing so. Put simply, it's boring.

4mth
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RackTagz

The writing is suffering in its flow with wierd phrases, maybe because of translation or something but it tends to make the story lifeless. Hopefully it Will improve

4mth
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AaatEae
LV 14 Badge

it's good but we're gonna catch up to raws soon sadge

4mth
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LeonToralla

It's a good HP fic. Being Chinese, it has the typical clichΓ© elements BUT, the translator has done a fantastic job in translating and adapting so that it's not too noticeable. The story so far is entertaining and enjoyable, the relationships between the characters are also good and well developed. So far I personally liked it a lot, I hope it continues and the translator doesn't stop it. I recommend it.[img=update][img=More pls][img=Loving it][img=gift]

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Zed1_Eren_

Iam giving 5 stars just for the cover pick πŸ™ˆπŸ™‰πŸ™Š

4mth
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Usiel
LV 13 Badge

Pure idiocy, excellent trash, king of morons MC. Simp wuss and beta mc. Trusting bumbledork showing of his talents. Befriending the idiotic trio. Going to gryffindor instead of ravens. This sorry excuse of fiction is clearly a translation, a bad one at that.

4mth
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Unknown_myth

JK ROWLING will be PROUD .... love the world building and tge authors take on Spells and Magical theories . its a refreshing and completely new POV to the Series . also its great that thr authors picks the best of both , the books as well as the novel !!

4mth
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Darkphoenix11

How bad is the harem?

4mth
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Abyss_Edge

It's good, not great nor bad but good. It has that Chinese writing style or vibe or whatever you call it, as well as the fact that the author seems to have only watched the movie.

4mth
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Tee16
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Cutejohn1234

this is a interesting read i came in expecting chinese sign in overpowered harem lemon mid work. but found something with potential instead.

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Humbuub

3-2-3-5-5 Writing is okay, there are similar terms written differently, and sometimes they mistake on the same chapter. Story is below average to me. IDKW I kept seeing 5 stars when there's barely any story in it. almost 50 chapters in and we're still on 2nd day in Hogwarts. Pacing is super slow. I like MC most of the time, too bad he went the simp road. Updates are fast. World Background is probably the best part of this fic, most theory and MC's inner monologue about The Wizarding World is spot on.

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Zero_4296

I love it, and it's different from all the other Harry Potter fanfictions I read before all of them are good this one just has something exciting to it that I can't explain.

4mth
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abc_logan

everything is good until harem tag and i really hating Hermione character and her simps with how these fics are portraying her. she is just a bookworm and thats it and these authors are glorifying it

4mth
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Aayush_storms

If this didn't have a harem tag then i would have given this higher rating.

4mth
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LiveandLove

[img=recommend]I created a poem with chatGPT: With words that soar, and scenes that thrill, Each chapter a masterpiece, a wondrous fill. The essence of the canon, it doth embrace, Yet with skillful additions, it doth grace. Elevating the tale to realms untold, A story that doth our hearts enfold. So heed my words, with utmost sincerity, This fanfic, a treasure, a rarity. A journey so true, A masterpiece, through and through.

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5mth
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kyleqi

Spoiler- He smashes Narcissa and Bella with Flour and Loonna on top..........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=nervous]................

Reveal Spoiler
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Chandan001

Read for yourself......................................................................................................................................

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KuNaLsAmA

Started reading 'coz the cover pic of Hermione... But now hooked due to an interesting plotπŸ˜…πŸ’€

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Nirome

[img=update][img=update][img=update]..........................................................................................................

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SonDio

Harem πŸ‘ŽπŸΏ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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powan56379

This is on my top 5 HP fanfics now! So Gooooood!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dontmakemecry

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]...........................................................................................

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_Nia
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Good translation I also checked out the mtl version and thats also nice and readable (miracle) Pretty good novel so farrrrr

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SaintArgus

It's really hard to believe that this is a Chinese fanfic,

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