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wait, what happened, I was waiting for more chapters to come out, and now you dropped it, this is saddening, as I enjoyed your story so much, was waiting for him to get his revenge and build a force to be reckon with
I have to say I've read up till chap 60. nd the novel was good. up until vons antics. he's just so annoying w his constant ramblings whenever an important thing comes up about women. dudes are also a predator because he's awe struck by a 14 year old girl. it's utterly inconceivably annoying hearing him yap sm abt women. also, Lydia, why tf besides town stuff and maybe knowing the way out? Did they let her stick with them when she's planning to rob them afterward? also, she's a fugitive. like, why just why would u let a fugitive stay w u. she's damn dead weight. it's not like she's insanely strong or special besides her artifact. They just let a thief stick with them. I'm then willing to bet that either author makes her continue to stick with them, and she just stops having thieving thoughts, or they kill her for trying to steal from them. after those incidents, I had to call it quits. ur novel is a good author. I love Nix and Horizon, but the other 2 r just so annoying. Have a great one.
Hello! I wanted to share my thoughts on this book —I’m at Chapter 73, and so far, it’s been an incredibly engaging experience. The world-building is one of the book’s strongest aspects, with a richly imagined universe that feels immersive and detailed. It’s clear the author put a lot of effort into crafting a setting that’s both unique and believable, and it has definitely captured my attention. The characters are also quite compelling, each bringing their own dynamics to the story. However, I do feel that a little more depth in their development would enhance the narrative even further. While they’re interesting and likable, I occasionally find myself wishing for a deeper exploration of their motivations and internal struggles. That said, I’m not a professional reviewer, just a regular reader, so this is purely my personal opinion. The story itself is gripping, and I’m eager to see how it all unfolds as I continue reading. If you enjoy well-constructed worlds and intriguing storylines, this book is definitely worth checking out! I can’t wait to see what the next chapters have in store.
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Reveal Spoiler so far, so good, keep up the great work. I'm really enjoying the story so far, great world building, looking forward to the face slapping that is about to happen, can't wait to see what other dragon powers he will get, question you have a image but will Nyx get a humanoid form and can any dragon have one
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this book feels like another work by this author called "Spirit Game" it's a 1000s of years into its future. It's an awesome, and worth getting into.
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great start so far. I would love to see more looking forward to supporting this book as it expands
Oh, nobody have reviewed this book yet? lemme be the first to give you all five stars for the rating 😆🌟✨🌟
Hey everyone! Here's my entry for the Rising Star Contest, and it's got a sports theme with a twist. Since I'm not exactly a sports aficionado—and sports and I have a bit of a rocky relationship—I've decided to dive into the world of e-sports instead. It might not be immediately obvious, but stay tuned — soon we'll dive into the world of Eternia's competitive events (Its like their Olympic world sport event) like epic Guild Wars, intense PvP showdowns, lightning-fast dungeon clears, and record-breaking boss defeats, and a lot more. Plus, there's a thrilling kingdom-building aspect to the story. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
wait, what happened, I was waiting for more chapters to come out, and now you dropped it, this is saddening, as I enjoyed your story so much, was waiting for him to get his revenge and build a force to be reckon with
I have to say I've read up till chap 60. nd the novel was good. up until vons antics. he's just so annoying w his constant ramblings whenever an important thing comes up about women. dudes are also a predator because he's awe struck by a 14 year old girl. it's utterly inconceivably annoying hearing him yap sm abt women. also, Lydia, why tf besides town stuff and maybe knowing the way out? Did they let her stick with them when she's planning to rob them afterward? also, she's a fugitive. like, why just why would u let a fugitive stay w u. she's damn dead weight. it's not like she's insanely strong or special besides her artifact. They just let a thief stick with them. I'm then willing to bet that either author makes her continue to stick with them, and she just stops having thieving thoughts, or they kill her for trying to steal from them. after those incidents, I had to call it quits. ur novel is a good author. I love Nix and Horizon, but the other 2 r just so annoying. Have a great one.
Hello! I wanted to share my thoughts on this book —I’m at Chapter 73, and so far, it’s been an incredibly engaging experience. The world-building is one of the book’s strongest aspects, with a richly imagined universe that feels immersive and detailed. It’s clear the author put a lot of effort into crafting a setting that’s both unique and believable, and it has definitely captured my attention. The characters are also quite compelling, each bringing their own dynamics to the story. However, I do feel that a little more depth in their development would enhance the narrative even further. While they’re interesting and likable, I occasionally find myself wishing for a deeper exploration of their motivations and internal struggles. That said, I’m not a professional reviewer, just a regular reader, so this is purely my personal opinion. The story itself is gripping, and I’m eager to see how it all unfolds as I continue reading. If you enjoy well-constructed worlds and intriguing storylines, this book is definitely worth checking out! I can’t wait to see what the next chapters have in store.
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Reveal Spoiler so far, so good, keep up the great work. I'm really enjoying the story so far, great world building, looking forward to the face slapping that is about to happen, can't wait to see what other dragon powers he will get, question you have a image but will Nyx get a humanoid form and can any dragon have one
Reveal Spoiler this book feels like another work by this author called "Spirit Game" it's a 1000s of years into its future. It's an awesome, and worth getting into.
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great start so far. I would love to see more looking forward to supporting this book as it expands
Oh, nobody have reviewed this book yet? lemme be the first to give you all five stars for the rating 😆🌟✨🌟
Hey everyone! Here's my entry for the Rising Star Contest, and it's got a sports theme with a twist. Since I'm not exactly a sports aficionado—and sports and I have a bit of a rocky relationship—I've decided to dive into the world of e-sports instead. It might not be immediately obvious, but stay tuned — soon we'll dive into the world of Eternia's competitive events (Its like their Olympic world sport event) like epic Guild Wars, intense PvP showdowns, lightning-fast dungeon clears, and record-breaking boss defeats, and a lot more. Plus, there's a thrilling kingdom-building aspect to the story. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!