My Wives are Beautiful Demons

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Katanexy

Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I do them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thank you for reading! I will leave a warning here... Well, the inspiration is obvious, but I will not limit myself to just that. Have a good reading!

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CoatHanger_43

This seems like a ripoff of 'My 3 Beautiful Vampire Wives' by Victor Weismann cuz plot seems similar: MC stalked by different race member since young age then when said different race tries to change MC's race and bind him in a contract to them the contract goes awry and different race members friends get bound to MC as additional wives. At least one of the female leads are yanderes and the MC himself is a yandere. As contract went awry MC ends up as a higher ranking member of the race he changed to with possibilities of having multiple bloodline abilities from female lead's clans/families which is not meant to be possible by novel world logic. MC is also battle maniac

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3dy2

author plz stop writing new novels and focus on ending the ones you alr write

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SovereignofShadows

I'm at lost of words, I read this novel because I've read the previous works of the authors and liked them and because I thought the plot was similar to MTWABV but it turned to be better than a novel with just a plot similar to to MTWABV it has its own plot and twists I really liked reading. Highly recommended I'm feeling the same when I was reading MTWABV which was my first WebNovel hope the author continues to update chaps regularly.

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Bruno_O_Opinador

Who knew, I didn't read anything for a while and when I came back one of my favorite authors posted something, I honestly really like his writing style so I recommend it. I read up to Chapter 21 and the story is perfect, and with a touch of wanting more. I come to ask you, please, not to make a very large harem, like the one in Blood legacy (your other masterpiece) Thank you for your work, hugs from Brazil 🇧🇷

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Daoist875KHS

please help me find the fanfiction description: A young man dies alone, he had money and everything he wanted, he died (I don't remember how) and wakes up in space, he is told to choose the body of a character without magical powers, he chooses eirichi Tsugikuni from "blade dissecting demons" then he chooses Naruto's powers at the peak powers and sharingan (there were other abilities, but I don't remember which ones) then he wakes up in the world of "levelling up alone" he is Jin-woo's neighbor and childhood friend, (his parents died here too ) He becomes a hunter and helps Jin-woo with the monarchs., he has a harem of Jin-woo's sister, the woman who can't stand the smell, 1 Japanese s-rank hunter (black hair, red eyes like she was shown with cubes in the manga) and insect monarch (she was a queen in another world, but the monarchs came to her world and destroyed it and her body was captured by insect monarch), and it's like ( from this world on, he gets more girls ( he doesn't collect them like Pokemon, he only goes after those he loves ) ) then he finds out that his parents are not just people, but higher beings, and his power and memories have been sealed because his power is killing him and they are looking for a way to save him, there is also a fox inside him, this is his childhood friend, she is the embodiment of sin (I don't remember what) she helps restore strength and keeps it under control. after all the monarchs die, he moves to the world of "the beginning after the end" to become a teacher at the Xyrus school or whatever, he kills those people who wanted to get to this continent and capture it, he also saves that elf who was supposed to die in the dungeon and meets another woman who understands blacksmithing, then he moves In the world of the "omniscient reader", he seals his powers so that they won't find him. He got a job where he works. I don't remember further, I'm sorry if I described it badly, but PLEASE HELP ME FIND HIM!!!!!

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Infiniterosario

I’m really enjoying the story so far even tho only 12 chapters are released I will be following this book and waiting to see what happens

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DittleLick20

All I gotta say is that this novel of yours has a striking resemblance to MTWABV, the best example of this when Vergil and Sapphire met each other like Victor and Scathach but in a much better way. And also how he met Ada, Katherine, and Roxanne which is also pretty similar to how Victor met Violet, Ruby, and Sasha and it's also the fact that both of them are battle maniacs. But this is definitely better than the start of MTWABV in my humble opinion since Vergil's father is dead, and some of you may relate to this because- well you might already know what I'm talking about... So anyway, so far so good and I'm glad the harem won't be that big since as you have said that only 9-16 members will be in his harem if I remember correctly (or maybe it will get bigger but who knows?) and the grammar is also much better than MTWABV but I'm no expert because my English is average at best since it's not my first language either but it's definitely better. (I won't mind Felicia ({Vergil's mother}) getting in the harem since there's no father in this one but the others might not like it or maybe they will because I don't see any man as a perfect fit for her ({for now that is and this is also my lower part thinking}). And since she's still single I most preferably prefer that she stays single if you don't plan on putting her in the harem but this ain't my novel so who am I to say this?) Anyway, this is my review without actually saying what made this better than MTWABV or how the story actually goes but I'm too lazy for that🤣.

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LadyBL

A good read for now. One of those books you can read without worrying. Grammar - 5 Stars [img=update] Characters - 5 Stars [img=proud] Plot - 5 Stars [img=recommend]

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Bruno_O_Opinador

well, I'll be honest, the book is well written, it follows a really cool theme, the plot is awesome, and it's heading in a great direction, as a whole for the book, however, Cap 85: The potential made her release "liquids " gave me the feeling that it will follow in the same direction as that work that everyone knows which it is, and probably at the same time will have to keep only the 3 initial wives, or add their mothers (which is obviously going to happens), which would be a good number, but it will probably follow that path of HAREM, HAREM, HAREM. Which is something I honestly don't like, so Bruno Opinador is getting out. Thank you for your work, author. (Are you a woman? Some things in your work make it seem like you don't know the nature of men that well! 😆🫣

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TsukasaSirius

I really enjoyed this book. The story is exciting, and I never felt bored while reading it. I think the world building is good as well. This story has a lot of potential. The characters are interesting and well written. Also, the writing is clear, and there aren’t any issues with grammar that take you out of the story. I can‘t wait for Vergil to delve deeper into the supernatural side of the world. I’m looking forward to seeing more from this author and hope they keep writing, because this was a great read.

A captivating fantasy where Vergil becomes a demon and marries Pure-Blood demonesses. The story blends romance and dark fantasy, with engaging twists and a unique approach. Perfect for fans of the genre!

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NandoFalske

This novel is one of those classic cases of comfort reading. A balanced romance, interesting action scenes and female characters who, in my opinion, have very diverse and interesting personalities. It gives me the same feeling as the beginning of High School DxD, when the female characters were deeper than just, well, you know. Writing quality: ♥♥♥♥♥ Plot quality: ♥♥♥♥♥ Characters quality: ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Fickle_as_light

i will read this now, author i just hope you don't pull Victor Wiseman on us. his story had so much potential at the start but he ruined it step by step and it forced me someone who can handle 100os of chapters of cultivation slop into dropping it. i like this premise a lot but I have never seen it well executed as always the story falls off after some time

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Am_Hell

author please don't make harem too big..

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MrBanono

Entertaining enough to pass the time. Accept that it is "inspired" by MTWABV and it'll be easier reading. Personally loved that novel (before it wenr to shit) so this one was an instant read for me. Some things that stood out to me after 200 chaps: - Lots of errors involving incorrect references. Like a line a would have a character state "Apple, you say?" Yet the preceding sentences do nor have that word used. Maybe a translation issue, if this is written in a different language originally. - Names get mixed up here and there saying X is speaking but is someone else - some dialogue lifted 100% from MTWAB. good oe bad up to you - Humor attempts fall flat for me. I think my biggest thing here is that I can't find myself attached to any of the characters. Don't hate em but don't love em either. They are not 'charming' enough. Maybe intended I dunno. The three wives? forgettable after certain point sadly. I can't even commiserate with the MC's 'struggles'. The character relationships do nor feel that special for a lack of better way of saying. Most of them do not feel that heartfelt for me. But as I said it is an entertaining read so gonna keep going. Despite being a tribute, what I enjoy most are the unique ideas of the author. Hard to expect a lot of updates given the number of novels this author has going.