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It is very entertaining, although I don't understand what novel it is from, I find it easy to follow the rhythm......................................
Great story so far, although I agree with the translator that the points could've been spend a little better
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I don't have much to say. I just want to see Gu Xun'er regret cheating on MC. Hopefully she will also fall out with Xiao Yan. I just can't stand cheaters even if it's a fictional one. However, the story is quite good. It's one of my fave fanfics of BTTH so far. And the translation was also well done. Just keep it up :D
Pretty good so far. I see some people complaining about him falling for Xun'er despite knowing the plot. But, I can see that happening. She basically spent most of her childhood in the Xiao clan, making his memories with her insignificant. And since she's the main heroine, he'll fantasize about her. Given the fact that they don't have many memories together, he'll, to a point, ignore the fact that she's still a kid and fantasize about the future, adult her. I also saw some complaining about emotional blackmailing. I say, why don't you complain about the k**lings, too? But I know that you're just worried that he'll be led around by her. Don't worry, he won't be.
Everything is going well so far, I just hope the translator doesn't end up abandoning the story. Death to Xiao Yan........................................................................................................
Good fanfiction, the translation is great and without much grammatical mistakes. The conversation flow is good overall i would say it's a good btth fic.
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Tradução decente, aborda mc proveniente do cla gu. Que possui um sistema de emoção Djdjshsjsjsjsjsjjsnssnsnjssdhdjdhdjsjsudhdhxbxbxbdbdbdbdhdbdbdbdbddbdbdbbddbdbdbdndnnddndndndbdndndndndbdbdbdbdbdbdndbdhdhdhdhdhdhdbdhdbdbdbddbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdb
GREAT TRANSLATION, and updates are a lot. man are they a lot. Its very readable, story development is also great. Characters are defined well.
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Overall it's just your usual slice of life FanFiction, but I do have to agree with the TL the author is dumbs and wastes the system points, moreover the system rarely appears I'm the fic.
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The MC is a natural born simp he was simping for Gu Xun'er and then we he realized that wouldn't work divorced her. Now he is already showing signs of simping for little fairy doctor and is obediently doing everything she ask of him.
Yeah no, this is literally just a whole Chinese gas lighting up to the fullest. Like imagine knowing the whole plot yet expecting you can change something, hell in the story the fmc left for a while before they were married (meaning she met the original Mc a while and the plot happened) yet the mc just started to simp his way to a broken heart. All in all there’s too much male supremacy and stupid mindset of the Mc, legit wanted to commit my own death after realizing that this is more of a revenge on cheaters that aren’t cheaters.
shouldn't have such a high rating(The real reason is emotional blackmailing in the first Chapter)
great start to a story love the main character his decisiveness not to be cuckolded is admirable and not to be used as a cover for another man's love story
Shameless 5 star review. You can expect daily updates. First time doing this so I apologise in advance for any mistakes.
It is very entertaining, although I don't understand what novel it is from, I find it easy to follow the rhythm......................................
Great story so far, although I agree with the translator that the points could've been spend a little better
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Reveal Spoiler I don't have much to say. I just want to see Gu Xun'er regret cheating on MC. Hopefully she will also fall out with Xiao Yan. I just can't stand cheaters even if it's a fictional one. However, the story is quite good. It's one of my fave fanfics of BTTH so far. And the translation was also well done. Just keep it up :D
Pretty good so far. I see some people complaining about him falling for Xun'er despite knowing the plot. But, I can see that happening. She basically spent most of her childhood in the Xiao clan, making his memories with her insignificant. And since she's the main heroine, he'll fantasize about her. Given the fact that they don't have many memories together, he'll, to a point, ignore the fact that she's still a kid and fantasize about the future, adult her. I also saw some complaining about emotional blackmailing. I say, why don't you complain about the k**lings, too? But I know that you're just worried that he'll be led around by her. Don't worry, he won't be.
Everything is going well so far, I just hope the translator doesn't end up abandoning the story. Death to Xiao Yan........................................................................................................
Good fanfiction, the translation is great and without much grammatical mistakes. The conversation flow is good overall i would say it's a good btth fic.
Super fanfic ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Tradução decente, aborda mc proveniente do cla gu. Que possui um sistema de emoção Djdjshsjsjsjsjsjjsnssnsnjssdhdjdhdjsjsudhdhxbxbxbdbdbdbdhdbdbdbdbddbdbdbbddbdbdbdndnnddndndndbdndndndndbdbdbdbdbdbdndbdhdhdhdhdhdhdbdhdbdbdbddbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdb
GREAT TRANSLATION, and updates are a lot. man are they a lot. Its very readable, story development is also great. Characters are defined well.
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Overall it's just your usual slice of life FanFiction, but I do have to agree with the TL the author is dumbs and wastes the system points, moreover the system rarely appears I'm the fic.
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The MC is a natural born simp he was simping for Gu Xun'er and then we he realized that wouldn't work divorced her. Now he is already showing signs of simping for little fairy doctor and is obediently doing everything she ask of him.
Yeah no, this is literally just a whole Chinese gas lighting up to the fullest. Like imagine knowing the whole plot yet expecting you can change something, hell in the story the fmc left for a while before they were married (meaning she met the original Mc a while and the plot happened) yet the mc just started to simp his way to a broken heart. All in all there’s too much male supremacy and stupid mindset of the Mc, legit wanted to commit my own death after realizing that this is more of a revenge on cheaters that aren’t cheaters.
shouldn't have such a high rating(The real reason is emotional blackmailing in the first Chapter)
great start to a story love the main character his decisiveness not to be cuckolded is admirable and not to be used as a cover for another man's love story
Shameless 5 star review. You can expect daily updates. First time doing this so I apologise in advance for any mistakes.
For once there is a real development of the romance, it's nice