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Actually I dropped it at chapter 22 but then it came in my view again today and I read it till the last and finished just now... man isn't the story becoming insane. .. I won't spoil. but I think Author has now actually decided to do something for Adrian like his character seems to change a lot during the story flow and he has a mature charm now. He is still sweet nice and gentle but now he is proactive not passive about his problems. And Ethan bro. .. yyour misery... author did you have some hate towards our Ethan why did you .. . anyway it becomes so cool in later parts and I just saw the designs of Seraphina and Aurelius man they are so cute and babish I want to kidnap them. anyhow I recommend reading it till the latest chapter to enjoy
Wonderful idea for a story, but it’s hard to fully immerse in the story and characters because each new dramatic twist is full of plot holes. I’m enjoying it, but more detail and world building would make it addicting and the story more cohesive. Author love your work, and I see a lot of potential. Flowery writing doesn’t distract from impractical logistics.
While I was reading the story, there were many chapters that I didn't understand and the story line was so fast. The events weren't discussed in detail. They just jumped to different places. But it was okay. Keep up the good work and I wish for more improvement and motivation to come.
All I can say is the other must have had something against this character it's just too much and just to let you know I stopped at chapter 20-something
Just started reading an if anything happens to our little bean adrian I will riot. Keep him safe Ethan!
well, it has been quite engaging so far. it has potential too. imma keep tap on this for a while.
Overall good story with interesting plot points. I really liked how Ethan's and Adrian's love for each other grew and how they became each other's safe place. Looking forward to how their story and love progresses... without their disgusting families... Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Pacing could be a bit faster as I started skimming chapters to speed up reading the story progression. Keep up the good work though!
the novel is pretty good novel and author does a really good job in character design and development
I do like the character designs but they could be worked on. As for the story it looks like the author has several ideas they want to experiment on, so I suggest keep experimenting.
I really like the story. The plot is pretty good and has me quite attached to the characters! I have read up to chapter 20 so far and really hope it gets finished. I have been reading so many books, and then they just get dropped. And this one is actually pretty good!
Actually I dropped it at chapter 22 but then it came in my view again today and I read it till the last and finished just now... man isn't the story becoming insane. .. I won't spoil. but I think Author has now actually decided to do something for Adrian like his character seems to change a lot during the story flow and he has a mature charm now. He is still sweet nice and gentle but now he is proactive not passive about his problems. And Ethan bro. .. yyour misery... author did you have some hate towards our Ethan why did you .. . anyway it becomes so cool in later parts and I just saw the designs of Seraphina and Aurelius man they are so cute and babish I want to kidnap them. anyhow I recommend reading it till the latest chapter to enjoy
Wonderful idea for a story, but it’s hard to fully immerse in the story and characters because each new dramatic twist is full of plot holes. I’m enjoying it, but more detail and world building would make it addicting and the story more cohesive. Author love your work, and I see a lot of potential. Flowery writing doesn’t distract from impractical logistics.
While I was reading the story, there were many chapters that I didn't understand and the story line was so fast. The events weren't discussed in detail. They just jumped to different places. But it was okay. Keep up the good work and I wish for more improvement and motivation to come.
All I can say is the other must have had something against this character it's just too much and just to let you know I stopped at chapter 20-something
Just started reading an if anything happens to our little bean adrian I will riot. Keep him safe Ethan!
well, it has been quite engaging so far. it has potential too. imma keep tap on this for a while.
Overall good story with interesting plot points. I really liked how Ethan's and Adrian's love for each other grew and how they became each other's safe place. Looking forward to how their story and love progresses... without their disgusting families... Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Pacing could be a bit faster as I started skimming chapters to speed up reading the story progression. Keep up the good work though!
the novel is pretty good novel and author does a really good job in character design and development
I do like the character designs but they could be worked on. As for the story it looks like the author has several ideas they want to experiment on, so I suggest keep experimenting.
I really like the story. The plot is pretty good and has me quite attached to the characters! I have read up to chapter 20 so far and really hope it gets finished. I have been reading so many books, and then they just get dropped. And this one is actually pretty good!