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Not going to lie, I was originally hesitant to read this, because based on the summary I assumed that the "hero" she would train would be Bell, which had honestly been done to death already, but I was very pleasantly surprised by who it actually was. Overall, so far it's been a great story, and a perfect example of how to write an OP mc, (in this particular case by focusing more on character interaction and humor). Honestly my only complaint is I wish it would update more often.
The first 3 chapters really made me interested in the future plot, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I also hope the author will update this story stably and not update slowly
Good story please update more often. please make her in good term with freya if it doesn't affecte thé story devlopment. Good luck in your work
The story so far is quite entertaining. ....................................................................................................................
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ProtoMerlin trolling. That alone makes this story worth reading, the only problem is the slow and sporadic updates.
Not going to lie, I was originally hesitant to read this, because based on the summary I assumed that the "hero" she would train would be Bell, which had honestly been done to death already, but I was very pleasantly surprised by who it actually was. Overall, so far it's been a great story, and a perfect example of how to write an OP mc, (in this particular case by focusing more on character interaction and humor). Honestly my only complaint is I wish it would update more often.
The first 3 chapters really made me interested in the future plot, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I also hope the author will update this story stably and not update slowly
Good story please update more often. please make her in good term with freya if it doesn't affecte thé story devlopment. Good luck in your work
The story so far is quite entertaining. ....................................................................................................................
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ProtoMerlin trolling. That alone makes this story worth reading, the only problem is the slow and sporadic updates.