Reviews of HP X LOTM : Please Call Me Mr. Error. by Hooin_Kyoma - Webnovel

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SpaceZeph

1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?

LV 12

Spelloyal

It's a good read, but it's marred by the protagonist and frequent errors in details such as continuity errors. The worldbuilding and stability of the updates are really good, but unfortunately it's all marred by a protagonist who starts out with negative intelligence in the first few chapters, literally betting his life and a likely fate worse than death to find out whether the world he was transmigrated to was or wasn't LoM by speaking the true names of various deities and beings to see if any would show up to kill or torture him. After that he continues with several acts of negative intelligence, although this finally improves around chapter 50 and his intelligence increases to 0. At some point he finally reaches below average intelligence and more or less stabilizes with some moments of peak intelligence or stupidity. So although I really liked a lot of things about this fic and intend to continue reading, I can't give it a rating higher than 3.4 due to the problem with the MC's intelligence and the continuity errors.

LV 4

Brent_6064

anything related to lotm plus using the powers of my favorite character amon? 5star!

LV 14

wisdomseeker

I'm really surprised tbh, this HP x LOTM fanfic was good. The only downside was MC is not smart enough, okay maybe because i always compare him with Amon but yeah my fault. Thanks for the fanfic tho

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DaoistJBeef

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mido_3957

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LV 12

Mamdouh_mohamed

The best description of the novel is that it is relaxing for the nerves. The original Lord of Mysteries novel is a novel that makes a person extremely nervous while reading and makes you wish for any slice of life to calm your nerves from all the tension, death, sadness and sacrifice. That is why most readers love the chapters of the Tarot Gathering because they are calm and relaxing after all the stressful events. My evaluation of this novel is that those who love the amount of tension, sadness and action situations that come one after the other in the original novel will not like this novel, and those who are tired of scenes of action, sadness and death one after the other will love this novel

LV 14

Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

in starting he knows about Harry Potter World and lord of mysteries but overtime shows he doesn't know about Harry Potter novel like he doesn't know Cerberus is hagrid pet but if read the novel he would know in starting few chapters with the black matriac he shared his knowledge of Harry Potter

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Mamdouh_mohamed

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LV 1

Dcap_Nslapaho

MC doesn't know HP..he only knows LOTM...MC gets pass around beaten like a dog and get away by plot armor..this repeats throughout. if you're into MC's that gets beatdown then plot armor saves him..then this is for you. in short he did a ritual cause he wants to be isekied then he did just to suffer.

LV 1

FANFICTION83

I would have enjoyed this story a lot more if the author had decided to maybe explain some of the concepts. Because I have not clue about them, I have no clue what Lotm is an abbreviation of, so i would caution anyone that doesn't know the Lotm to read up on this before diving into this story.

Не варто витраченого часу. Головний герой ідіот. Персонажі-просто декорації. Весь світ крутиться навколо бажань головного героя, він не отримує ніяких негативних наслідків від своїх дій. Діалоги написані так, ніби автор ніколи не чув як розмовляють реальні люди. Нікому не рекомендую це читати.

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I_hate_romance

romance?................................................................... mm. m...................................................................................................

LV 1

AlastorGF

Primero aclaro que dejo una puntación de 3 estrellas porque no leí mucho, sinceramente no me gusto y no es porque sea malo simplemente no es mi tipo de lectura, también tengo que aclarar que el una de las razones porque dejo es que me canso el MC cada cosas que pasa en su vida no deja de compararla con Klein.... y te soy sincero me canso eso leer sobre klein 40 veces por capitulo(obviamente estoy exagerando) me canso igual gracias por el esfuerzo autor

LV 14

shadowstriker102

why did I time travel a couple of hours with my phone when I'm meant to be sleeping because I have work tomorrow?

LV 1

Absurd_Idiot

10/10 story, a great blend of LOTM(Lord of the Mysteries) and HP(Harry Potter). You don't need extensive knowledge from both HP and LOTM to understand/read this story.

LV 1

Absurd_Idiot

A unique crossover of HP and LOTM, one of the best LOTM fanfiction novels I have read that isn't a Translation. 10/10 for me. I'll give it a 5 star in everything except world background which I gave a 4 star since much isn't written yet about it.

LV 5

Sin_of_sloth

the first few chapters felt like a slog but after that it just got better and better, at chapter 30 I couldn't wait to read more of this. i love the concept and the way the author combined the world's. to the author: if you need help or ideas for stuff like the rituals be sure to ask us readers or just look up ideas on the internet. I'm sure that can get pretty difficult.

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mido_3957

Really good crossover between HP and Lotm, the novel is at first but I see the potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Mamdouh_mohamed

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DaoistPVyESB

i know u want his sister to be cute but this is too cringe tbh.

LV 5

Fraisier

boring and slow [img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

LV 12

_Solomon_

It's an excellent story imo, as this is my first lotm x hp read and you may find the story boring or edgy in the start but it gets better and we do not have much world building as of now but so far it's good and the incorporation of lotm and hp verse is also going well... the update schedule is also quite good with more than one chapter usually... I would recommend you to try reading this book

LV 6

origin_of_power

This is a great story so far and I hope toot continues to be great I can't wait for future chapters

LV 14

A_Sleepless_dream

Good story cool ideas but story overall: Mc doesn’t know the world he is in nor have any understanding of magic / HP kinda get annoying when he says it 100 times and demonstrates that over and over again…. He let himself be murrdered and beaten down with his sister threatened and almost raped. Mc doesn’t look to have any guts or understanding or plan forward it is all riding on beyonders and lord of mysteries Great set up for what you have

LV 14

Time_walker

The story has good LOTM/HP the main character is quite enjoyable to follow so far the story seems smooth as the author has structured the story quite nicely. My only issue is the pacing can feel a bit slow but it’s fine if you binge read the story. The update stability is good as the author is consistent with it.