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...I don't consider this a bad fanfic, not at the level to be disgusting, but yes one Fanfic boring because the protagonist have no ambition and not goal, doesn't have either good fight's and the dialogue/interactions are very... Not from Naruto world, You know? Is only one guy wasting time on Konoha village... That should be the fanfic name now that I think about it.
The translator tries hard and did an excellent job, well, the story itself is about a garbage hero who has no goals and desires, he is a slave to his system in the literal sense of the word, he has a desire to do only what the system tells him, and there is nothing else, he does not have his own personality, his own desires, only those, what the\system tells it to do.
Don't know much about the intricacies of story writing, but I personally like this fic. The laid back and realistic personality of the mc is one of the few traits that got me hooked to this story. It also has good comedy(atleast to me) and 'I' also love the light teasing and romantic moments that happens between the mc and some of the female characters. I also think it has good fight scenes with the mc utilizing the abilities/jutsus at the opportune moments. I'm still wondering why it has such a low rating honestly. If you see this author I hope you don't drop this fic because of the mid rating because I really like it.
The descriptions aren't bad, the dialogue is terrible. The title and descriptions of the fanfic suggest that the concept of the story is that Naruto won't try, etc. But what do we see? Everything is exactly the opposite. If it's a translation of shitty Chinese stuff then everything is understandable, but if it's an original story.... the author still has a lot to learn.
This book isn't really a Naruto story. It's a drama taking place in the Naruto world. A lot of the characters are OOC and there is tons of forced plot to make Naruto do certain things. He is kind of a sandbag for women, just getting pushed around by 5+ women for no apparent reason. There is a lot more I could say, but I don't want to spoil it for anyone who is actually going to read this novel. In my opinion, save yourself the time and skip it though.
Big fan once i started reading i couldn’t stop till i cought up to the scheduled releases
I'm not going to pay attention to any of the comments, because I see that everyone says that it's garbage and that it's bad, therefore, I'm not going to take anyone's advice, because the other times I've taken bad comments and I haven't seen anything, so I'll check it out for myself and until then I'll give it five stars.
i am a lazy person , i don't usually write reviews but i will make an exception today in hope that someone will benefit from it , if you want your blood pressure to reach extreme levels and unlock second gear then read this . first of all i want to clarify that the system in this novel give the mc 2 choices every it get triggered here what the expect : - extremely poor choices some times for example , what would you chose wood release (kekkei tota that excel in many areas and extremely versatile )or lava release kekkei genkai , the mc chose lava release but this can be overlooked , what truly infuriated me is the mc choosing an INCOMPLETE version of hiraishin over an IMMORTAL VERSION OF 8 INNER GATES WITH NO SIDE EFFECTS i mean look at guy in the war he was a beast , if he got thia IMMORTAL version he would have decimated every thing in his path , but no the mc chose INCOMPLETE hiraishin , even though he can get the full version in future from the scroll of seals -messy chapter order in short this novel can be funny at some times but generally feels like those puzzle games ads that purposely makes mistake to trigger you into downloading the game just to chose the right moves
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Remove the Romance and Harem tags, none of those go anywhere throughout the 200+ chapters. It's literally just teasing with 0 kisses and confessions, at most you'll have perverted remarks and occasional friendly hand holding and that's it. Otherwise the story is just lazy mc who's actively screwing his future self over and is kinda strong but only compared to genin and chunin characters
The story is boring, the main character is absolutely useless. The story is about nothing. No goals, with each chapter mc contradicts itself. Idleness + women. 0 hours of training or effort but still behaves cool. Slave of the system. I really regret those hours that I spent on 80 chapters
The story is barely legible at current point. Despite so many comments the chapters are repeatedly out of order and author has made absolutely no effort to fix it. Now this is bad because you may not notice while reading that you have jumped to wrong chapter and the entire narration becomes confusing to read. It's not readable on this platform atleast so I can't rate it better although previously I thought the story had good premise
The story of Naruto just wanting to chill greatly resonates with me. However, the disordered chapter order greatly affects the reading experience.
it's frustrating to read because the uploader didn't put the chapters in order.
score is simple to understand, and writing quality is good. I can't understand the story develment because the author refuses to fix chapter order cant understand character design for the reason stated above skipped over 30 chapters because of it updating is pretty fast but let down by the order again world background is destroyed by the chapter order I guess all I'm trying to say is pls fix the order
author messed up the chapter sequence. If it was one time - ok but it's systematically. + It's Chinese so +- 2, its nothing new. good quantity of updates though
Its decent if you like a harem and a really lazy mc but most of the chapters are not in order so watch out
After 100 chapters I give up, I waited all this time to see if it would get better (spoiler: it didn't). Power level is meaningless, MC's personality is trash and the romance is forced, all of this accompanied by chapters out of order (for example: chapter 99 is posted, then 98 and then 101).
mc is utter thrash. not even unlikeable he is something worse. its like author thinks hard how hard i can make readers despise mc.
It went from having an interesting premise to straight up being edgy. This guy wants the higher-ups of the village to kill him. 😂
I love this story up until around chapter 100, at this point the story itself was still good but the chapters are being uploaded in the wrong order. I’m having to jump back and forth to make sure I read it correctly
Not going to lie, the first chapter really put me off. it doesn't really read well and it just feels awkward to read. it most definitely is better than some things I've read by not by much. it needs a full update to a better grammer and shit, this feels like it was A.I generated. the idea of it had me interested, but it's not worth reading it for that.
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i probably shouldn't have had any hope for a Chinese novel in the first place, if this genuinely was a laid back MC with a good system it might been good, this guy is just a useless gag MC, very disappointing
I always wanted to read a FF where the mc reincarnated as Naruto. A fresh que were the mc is no naive and does not have a hero complex. This one is a pretty good read and hope they continue with the updates.
It's a good, kinda slice of life, but with some action. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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Reveal Spoiler ...I don't consider this a bad fanfic, not at the level to be disgusting, but yes one Fanfic boring because the protagonist have no ambition and not goal, doesn't have either good fight's and the dialogue/interactions are very... Not from Naruto world, You know? Is only one guy wasting time on Konoha village... That should be the fanfic name now that I think about it.
The translator tries hard and did an excellent job, well, the story itself is about a garbage hero who has no goals and desires, he is a slave to his system in the literal sense of the word, he has a desire to do only what the system tells him, and there is nothing else, he does not have his own personality, his own desires, only those, what the\system tells it to do.
Don't know much about the intricacies of story writing, but I personally like this fic. The laid back and realistic personality of the mc is one of the few traits that got me hooked to this story. It also has good comedy(atleast to me) and 'I' also love the light teasing and romantic moments that happens between the mc and some of the female characters. I also think it has good fight scenes with the mc utilizing the abilities/jutsus at the opportune moments. I'm still wondering why it has such a low rating honestly. If you see this author I hope you don't drop this fic because of the mid rating because I really like it.
The descriptions aren't bad, the dialogue is terrible. The title and descriptions of the fanfic suggest that the concept of the story is that Naruto won't try, etc. But what do we see? Everything is exactly the opposite. If it's a translation of shitty Chinese stuff then everything is understandable, but if it's an original story.... the author still has a lot to learn.
This book isn't really a Naruto story. It's a drama taking place in the Naruto world. A lot of the characters are OOC and there is tons of forced plot to make Naruto do certain things. He is kind of a sandbag for women, just getting pushed around by 5+ women for no apparent reason. There is a lot more I could say, but I don't want to spoil it for anyone who is actually going to read this novel. In my opinion, save yourself the time and skip it though.
Big fan once i started reading i couldn’t stop till i cought up to the scheduled releases
I'm not going to pay attention to any of the comments, because I see that everyone says that it's garbage and that it's bad, therefore, I'm not going to take anyone's advice, because the other times I've taken bad comments and I haven't seen anything, so I'll check it out for myself and until then I'll give it five stars.
i am a lazy person , i don't usually write reviews but i will make an exception today in hope that someone will benefit from it , if you want your blood pressure to reach extreme levels and unlock second gear then read this . first of all i want to clarify that the system in this novel give the mc 2 choices every it get triggered here what the expect : - extremely poor choices some times for example , what would you chose wood release (kekkei tota that excel in many areas and extremely versatile )or lava release kekkei genkai , the mc chose lava release but this can be overlooked , what truly infuriated me is the mc choosing an INCOMPLETE version of hiraishin over an IMMORTAL VERSION OF 8 INNER GATES WITH NO SIDE EFFECTS i mean look at guy in the war he was a beast , if he got thia IMMORTAL version he would have decimated every thing in his path , but no the mc chose INCOMPLETE hiraishin , even though he can get the full version in future from the scroll of seals -messy chapter order in short this novel can be funny at some times but generally feels like those puzzle games ads that purposely makes mistake to trigger you into downloading the game just to chose the right moves
Reveal Spoiler Remove the Romance and Harem tags, none of those go anywhere throughout the 200+ chapters. It's literally just teasing with 0 kisses and confessions, at most you'll have perverted remarks and occasional friendly hand holding and that's it. Otherwise the story is just lazy mc who's actively screwing his future self over and is kinda strong but only compared to genin and chunin characters
The story is boring, the main character is absolutely useless. The story is about nothing. No goals, with each chapter mc contradicts itself. Idleness + women. 0 hours of training or effort but still behaves cool. Slave of the system. I really regret those hours that I spent on 80 chapters
The story is barely legible at current point. Despite so many comments the chapters are repeatedly out of order and author has made absolutely no effort to fix it. Now this is bad because you may not notice while reading that you have jumped to wrong chapter and the entire narration becomes confusing to read. It's not readable on this platform atleast so I can't rate it better although previously I thought the story had good premise
The story of Naruto just wanting to chill greatly resonates with me. However, the disordered chapter order greatly affects the reading experience.
it's frustrating to read because the uploader didn't put the chapters in order.
score is simple to understand, and writing quality is good. I can't understand the story develment because the author refuses to fix chapter order cant understand character design for the reason stated above skipped over 30 chapters because of it updating is pretty fast but let down by the order again world background is destroyed by the chapter order I guess all I'm trying to say is pls fix the order
author messed up the chapter sequence. If it was one time - ok but it's systematically. + It's Chinese so +- 2, its nothing new. good quantity of updates though
Its decent if you like a harem and a really lazy mc but most of the chapters are not in order so watch out
After 100 chapters I give up, I waited all this time to see if it would get better (spoiler: it didn't). Power level is meaningless, MC's personality is trash and the romance is forced, all of this accompanied by chapters out of order (for example: chapter 99 is posted, then 98 and then 101).
mc is utter thrash. not even unlikeable he is something worse. its like author thinks hard how hard i can make readers despise mc.
It went from having an interesting premise to straight up being edgy. This guy wants the higher-ups of the village to kill him. 😂
I love this story up until around chapter 100, at this point the story itself was still good but the chapters are being uploaded in the wrong order. I’m having to jump back and forth to make sure I read it correctly
Not going to lie, the first chapter really put me off. it doesn't really read well and it just feels awkward to read. it most definitely is better than some things I've read by not by much. it needs a full update to a better grammer and shit, this feels like it was A.I generated. the idea of it had me interested, but it's not worth reading it for that.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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i probably shouldn't have had any hope for a Chinese novel in the first place, if this genuinely was a laid back MC with a good system it might been good, this guy is just a useless gag MC, very disappointing
I always wanted to read a FF where the mc reincarnated as Naruto. A fresh que were the mc is no naive and does not have a hero complex. This one is a pretty good read and hope they continue with the updates.
It's a good, kinda slice of life, but with some action. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
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