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Revenge is best served… HOT! MC has great chemistry and their banter is fun. I love them getting together while fighting off a common enemy.
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I pity my Maddy in this book and am a fan of Ethan and her. And her sister is lovable too.
The excerpt must be somewhere after the chapters are locked. The first chapter is different than other stories & holds the attention that the excerpt grabs. The story is different from many others & makes the character & settings stand out. However, the grammar & spelling could use a little work. The dialogue does a good job of showing personality of characters.
Revenge is best served… HOT! MC has great chemistry and their banter is fun. I love them getting together while fighting off a common enemy.
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I pity my Maddy in this book and am a fan of Ethan and her. And her sister is lovable too.
The excerpt must be somewhere after the chapters are locked. The first chapter is different than other stories & holds the attention that the excerpt grabs. The story is different from many others & makes the character & settings stand out. However, the grammar & spelling could use a little work. The dialogue does a good job of showing personality of characters.
keep the good work man and don't drop this