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Bro, first of all I want to congratulate you on the quality of your writing, it seems that you dedicate your time to the topic. If you continue to dedicate yourself to it, I have no doubt that you will be able to write and publish your own book. Unfortunately, although it is of excellent quality, be it character building, points of view, character insertion (there are some inconsistencies compared to the original, but it doesn't feel forced), world building (here it could be improved a little), etc. It's not my type of book, as I usually use this platform for light reading and a bit of laughter (when I get tired of more famous titles like 'el cuervo' or 'la teoría de la relatividad ', etc). I wish you luck and success.
hello i just added this story to my collection, and i have few questions about it, can you be Kind enough to answer them?
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Author here being the first to rate the story you should definitely read 📚
I can't stress how much I love your works. Your storytelling is simply on a different level to most of the other stories on this platform. Just the fact that your stories carry a sense of mystery and have impeccable language makes it a must read. I hope you don't quit and wish for your success.
Bro, first of all I want to congratulate you on the quality of your writing, it seems that you dedicate your time to the topic. If you continue to dedicate yourself to it, I have no doubt that you will be able to write and publish your own book. Unfortunately, although it is of excellent quality, be it character building, points of view, character insertion (there are some inconsistencies compared to the original, but it doesn't feel forced), world building (here it could be improved a little), etc. It's not my type of book, as I usually use this platform for light reading and a bit of laughter (when I get tired of more famous titles like 'el cuervo' or 'la teoría de la relatividad ', etc). I wish you luck and success.
hello i just added this story to my collection, and i have few questions about it, can you be Kind enough to answer them?
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Author here being the first to rate the story you should definitely read 📚
I can't stress how much I love your works. Your storytelling is simply on a different level to most of the other stories on this platform. Just the fact that your stories carry a sense of mystery and have impeccable language makes it a must read. I hope you don't quit and wish for your success.