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Una de mis pocas reseñas, tiene buen ritmo, bien traducido, algunas inconsistencias en la línea temporal pero no tan importante buena trama.
This is another translated Naruto fanfic that's really good. The translator has done a good job and filtered out a lot of Chinese stuff. The grammar is on par with a lot of well-written books on webnovel. The storyline is also entertaining. If you're searching for a good Naruto fanfic, this would be a good pick.
Smooth story transitions, reasonable fight scenes, all characters are smart and not stupid like other fanfics and most importantly interesting jutsu training.
Surprisingly good. I was expecting more MTL slop, but TL proved to be pretty good. Recommended if you like watching character progression (Numbers go up type shi, but with a different system)
Excelente, me preguntó ahora cual será el desarrollo de Obito y que decisiones tomara, por un lado está que rin no murió y que no odia a Kakashi
Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.
Really good story, plot is amazing and the characters are well written. It's a joy to read. Can't wait for more!
Lectura divertida y un buen desarrollo nada apresurado. Buen balance de poder y bien justificado, espero y sigas trayendo está historia , descansa correctamente autor
La novela es bastante entretenida teniendo una gramática y traducción decentes siendo de MTL, teniendo un sistema que ayuda mucho el MC esta OP ya que tambien es muy creativo en el desarrollo de sus técnicas propias y me gusta bastante que emplee Fūinjutsu que tiene demaciado potencial, espero que no dejen de traducirla 🙌🏻
This is one of the more unique Naruto fanfics I’ve seen out there. The system is interesting and the progress of the Mc is at a good pace. I also love how there’s not a forced love story as he is pretty young.
Muy buena historia autor sigue así 😃, hasta el momento muy buen desarrollo de la situación y me preguntó sera que Mc será papá de Karin? O bueno mejor no pienso en eso y te lo dejo a ti
Muy buena historia hasta el momento es una de las mejores que he estado leyendo y no deja de gustarme, espero y sigas así autor Me preguntó que tipos de keiki genkai despertara?
3/5/2/1/1 What can I say I'm nothing but disgusted by seeing how this story is turning out to be. The other characters are just stupid enough for mc to look smart. And and op ness is now overflowing. By the trajectory of his growth, he'll probably reach otsutsuki level after the third Shinobi war.
Explicações não cansativas e crescimento dos poderes bem justificado, sendo o protagonista forte ao ponto de não ser angustiante ou chato mas não sendo muito forte ao ponto de ser dominado. Gostaria de uma melhor classificação da força entre os personagens/ninjas. Num geral é uma obra muito divertida de se ler, zero arrependimentos !!
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One of the best naruto fanfics ... great choice for naruto fans ... the system is powerful but not too overpowered ... it doesn't hand over all the power ups in silver plate but you have to earn it (work hard for it) , and the story is not motonic , its full of surprise, comedy moments and serious moments , so just read it
This has potential to be one of the GOATS, probably my fav among all translations. MC is likeable and smart, the cheat is powerful but requires hard work, and the ”grinding” is actually interesting to read! Give this a read for sure :)
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not much to say...I just don't like it..extremely slow progression, it gets boring way too quickly. I guess mc is just untalented at the beginning..even with his "cheat" he doesn't stand out much.
Well I love the approach. The Tag system is cool a diff feel. Great work. The MC influence on the world is been felt by some changes in the faith of some character and he growth path amd time is fair enough
The story is an enjoyable read, with a hardworking protagonist who brings creativity to the use of basic jutsus in battles. The fight scenes are engaging. The main character interacts with others in a way that feels natural, with dialogue that doesn't come across as forced. Overall, it’s a worthwhile read.
i've halted writing a review just to see how good this well progress, and tbh its going good, keep up the good work, they mc is strong af from the start , but not weak, he's a genius, getting more genius by the second, excited for the war arc.
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I think this might be one of my favourite Naruto Fan Fics. I like the system, Mc actually has to work hard and I also enjoy seeing how he is in Kakashis generation
Hi there, RedX43 Here 👋 I know this fanfic is already available but that was 100% MTL Version. Here I have properly translated all names and adjusted lines which seems out of place. Even after all that If I made some mistake anywhere please point it out and I will fix it, As a Human I can make mistakes sometimes. Hope you enjoy this story,,. Peace out🚀
Una de mis pocas reseñas, tiene buen ritmo, bien traducido, algunas inconsistencias en la línea temporal pero no tan importante buena trama.
This is another translated Naruto fanfic that's really good. The translator has done a good job and filtered out a lot of Chinese stuff. The grammar is on par with a lot of well-written books on webnovel. The storyline is also entertaining. If you're searching for a good Naruto fanfic, this would be a good pick.
Smooth story transitions, reasonable fight scenes, all characters are smart and not stupid like other fanfics and most importantly interesting jutsu training.
Surprisingly good. I was expecting more MTL slop, but TL proved to be pretty good. Recommended if you like watching character progression (Numbers go up type shi, but with a different system)
Excelente, me preguntó ahora cual será el desarrollo de Obito y que decisiones tomara, por un lado está que rin no murió y que no odia a Kakashi
Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.
Really good story, plot is amazing and the characters are well written. It's a joy to read. Can't wait for more!
Lectura divertida y un buen desarrollo nada apresurado. Buen balance de poder y bien justificado, espero y sigas trayendo está historia , descansa correctamente autor
La novela es bastante entretenida teniendo una gramática y traducción decentes siendo de MTL, teniendo un sistema que ayuda mucho el MC esta OP ya que tambien es muy creativo en el desarrollo de sus técnicas propias y me gusta bastante que emplee Fūinjutsu que tiene demaciado potencial, espero que no dejen de traducirla 🙌🏻
This is one of the more unique Naruto fanfics I’ve seen out there. The system is interesting and the progress of the Mc is at a good pace. I also love how there’s not a forced love story as he is pretty young.
Muy buena historia autor sigue así 😃, hasta el momento muy buen desarrollo de la situación y me preguntó sera que Mc será papá de Karin? O bueno mejor no pienso en eso y te lo dejo a ti
Muy buena historia hasta el momento es una de las mejores que he estado leyendo y no deja de gustarme, espero y sigas así autor Me preguntó que tipos de keiki genkai despertara?
3/5/2/1/1 What can I say I'm nothing but disgusted by seeing how this story is turning out to be. The other characters are just stupid enough for mc to look smart. And and op ness is now overflowing. By the trajectory of his growth, he'll probably reach otsutsuki level after the third Shinobi war.
Explicações não cansativas e crescimento dos poderes bem justificado, sendo o protagonista forte ao ponto de não ser angustiante ou chato mas não sendo muito forte ao ponto de ser dominado. Gostaria de uma melhor classificação da força entre os personagens/ninjas. Num geral é uma obra muito divertida de se ler, zero arrependimentos !!
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One of the best naruto fanfics ... great choice for naruto fans ... the system is powerful but not too overpowered ... it doesn't hand over all the power ups in silver plate but you have to earn it (work hard for it) , and the story is not motonic , its full of surprise, comedy moments and serious moments , so just read it
This has potential to be one of the GOATS, probably my fav among all translations. MC is likeable and smart, the cheat is powerful but requires hard work, and the ”grinding” is actually interesting to read! Give this a read for sure :)
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not much to say...I just don't like it..extremely slow progression, it gets boring way too quickly. I guess mc is just untalented at the beginning..even with his "cheat" he doesn't stand out much.
Well I love the approach. The Tag system is cool a diff feel. Great work. The MC influence on the world is been felt by some changes in the faith of some character and he growth path amd time is fair enough
The story is an enjoyable read, with a hardworking protagonist who brings creativity to the use of basic jutsus in battles. The fight scenes are engaging. The main character interacts with others in a way that feels natural, with dialogue that doesn't come across as forced. Overall, it’s a worthwhile read.
i've halted writing a review just to see how good this well progress, and tbh its going good, keep up the good work, they mc is strong af from the start , but not weak, he's a genius, getting more genius by the second, excited for the war arc.
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I think this might be one of my favourite Naruto Fan Fics. I like the system, Mc actually has to work hard and I also enjoy seeing how he is in Kakashis generation
Hi there, RedX43 Here 👋 I know this fanfic is already available but that was 100% MTL Version. Here I have properly translated all names and adjusted lines which seems out of place. Even after all that If I made some mistake anywhere please point it out and I will fix it, As a Human I can make mistakes sometimes. Hope you enjoy this story,,. Peace out🚀