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LV 13

LordKitty

This story is great, that's for sure! I did find the plot jumped around a bit more than I prefer. It wasn't enough to make me dislike the story. I still find it to be an enjoyable read overall. I would recommend it. 4/5 Stars

LV 4

WAIDH

Amazing start. I'm very interested. Waiting for updates. Have the same feelings as 5Entity (the first reviewer).

LV 13

5Entity

I feel like this has huge potential to be an amazing novel. It's only been 5 chapters (as of writing) so it's hard to say how well the story will progress. So far, it's great. The dynamics between the MC and Morrigan aren't something you see every day.

LV 3

ArkofRambler

hONESTLY GREAT STORY BY AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND IT IS REALLY WELL WRITTEN AND SHOULD HAVE 5 STARS, A GEM HIDDEN UNDER THE BIGGEST ROCK IVE EVER SEEN BEFORE!!!!

LV 11

WimpyReader

This story is amazing! probably the best fantasy novel that I have read in a while. The world-building and character design is a breath of fresh air when comparing it to other fantasy and isekai novels, plus it's not just another trashy harem novel. [img=Loving it]

LV 4

Gavyn_Mack

Overall this story is interesting, and while it may have a few problems ( which we will talk about), it still manages to feel unique and simple. Now from what I've noticed, the story could be a bit slower, and the reason I say this is because sometimes there's a disconnect/jump that happens decently quick, but more importantly because I Think the characters need to be fleshed out more. so in summary, you should make the story slower, so you can flesh out the characters more and make it flow more smoothly (if that makes sense 😅) but keep up the good work. you're doing great 👍 The story is worth the read

LV 3

Aether_10101

After reading up to chapter 112, I must say there’s a clear improvement since chapter 37. The flaws I had pointed out earlier are gradually fading, which shows remarkable progress on the author’s part. I especially appreciated the more mature tone the story is taking, making it significantly more captivating and thrilling. The side plots are well-integrated, and the overall pacing is better managed, making the reading experience more fluid and immersive. That said, I noticed that the pacing is sometimes a bit too fast, which can give the impression of skimming over important events. Taking more time to delve into key moments could make the story even more impactful. However, there are still some areas that need attention. While the characters are gaining depth, they sometimes lack a unique spark that would make them truly memorable and loved . Regarding the protagonist, although their growth is noticeable, their traits still feel very human, making them seem less divine. This is understandable given their origins, but I hope to see a more marked transformation in the upcoming chapters. In summary, this story keeps getting better, and I’d like to congratulate the author on their work. That said, one word of caution: it would be a shame to get lost in the increasingly complex plot. Perhaps having a detailed plan would help maintain coherence and avoid losing focus. Lastly, a personal thought: I’m eagerly anticipating the arrival of romance! PS: I sincerely hope this novel won’t end up abandoned, as happens with many others. The potential here is great, and it would be a shame not to see this adventure come to a brilliant conclusion. Kudos again for this wonderful progress, and I’m looking forward to reading more!

LV 12

Buff_n_stuff

The writing is actually really well done, from a mechanical standpoint it’s well written. Unfortunately that’s the end of my praise. Maybe the story gets better? But honestly it’s dreadfully boring. I tried multiple times to read it and there’s just nothing worth reading. The plot drags incredibly slowly, and highlights what seems to be incredibly benign events. Best way to describe it up to chapter 12 at least is a slice of life without comedy or drama. Or it’s an action adventure without action or adventure.

LV 3

Aether_10101

To be honest, I was pleasantly surprised by this story. Despite some flaws, this novel brings, as mentioned in other comments, a breath of fresh air to the genre. I want to congratulate the author for their work. Now, let’s move on to a point I didn’t like. The characters are not well-developed and seem bland, lacking any real emotion. I know it’s challenging to improve in this area, especially for a beginner author, so keep going—courage! Another aspect I personally don’t like is the protagonist’s overly childish personality. I don’t appreciate a god having such an immature character. I understand that it can bring comedic moments, but it’s not my cup of tea. Finally, this comment was written on the spot right after I finished chapter 34. Maybe in the next 100 chapters, this feedback will become irrelevant.