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It’s okay a bit boring for my taste however if your going to translate a Chinese story the least you can do is credit them and show the link to the original
Well written but extremely boring. MC's also an idiot, with his dead eyes, distancing himself from everyone. There's no satisfaction to reading such an unnecessarily dark & average mc. Wasted 20 mins on this. Doesn't deserve a rating above 4.0.
Great story, one of the best Naruto fanfiction I don't know why this novel isn't popular Can you please give us more chapter 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
It’s fire a bit off around the edges because of the transition got a lot better and to the point that I would call it a masterpiece in the works
Great novel you flipping beast please release more chapters now here’s the review
Great novel i love it, it’s been a really long time since i read something with an actual proper plot
Great novel i love it, it’s been a really long time since i read something this well written
Something really other novels really should do is that you need to have an end. Their is a clear goal for our mc and it is sonitnwrrwsting to see how his goal effects him. Also translations really nice. And I don’t rlly see any big consistency issues
Honestly i just want to say that this is a very beautiful story, it’s just amazing i am so used to trash were everyone is so 2d that it brings a tear to my eye when i see the great character building that was put into the original characters and even the oc’d
So , this story is based on a character that doesn't know anything about naruto which is a great idea tbh ,the mc is kinda dark , which i really ike , the story development is peak fr , so overall, i really like this fan fiction , 10/10 , keep up the good work author
the story is good especially for those who like dark description of the naruto world. but for someone like me who just want to be entertained by mere fanfics, this story isnt for me. good luck to the author :).
based on my past experience of reading naruto fanfiction, this is one of the better ones that I've read. this is also more darker than other fanfiction, though not unnecessarily so. The mc is definitely one of the better highlights of this. His conviction is quite strong and he is focused on his goal, and based on the current chapter I can see that there will be development. Overall a good piece of work that explores the deeper themes of the naruto world. the punctuation and grammar is also easily understood would definitely recommend ps. sorry if I ranted, this is my first ever review.
if you are interested in a transmigration story of an MC ignorant of Naruto or any kind of fantas before, then this is the story for you.
The story is written well so far, I was hooked reading this. All I can say is more chapters pleaseee
I can say with full certainty that this is one of the best web's novels I've ever read
The story is written well so far and I really like the MC. I haven't really seen a fanfic like this making it very refreshing. I think it's definitely worth reading and I definitely see the potential. I hope the author keeps on going.
simply amazing. this story is a really fresh take on naruto. the main character is not mindless, he is dark but not without his reasons. i feel it will become difficult to read other naruto fics not as good as this one. those giving one stars are simply stating bullshit reasons, such as the mc not knowing the cannon (something completely fine and necessary to this plot) or complying about the protagonist being emotionally detached (something completely normal based on his past and motivations, also something only kids who dont understand the story will complain)
It’s okay a bit boring for my taste however if your going to translate a Chinese story the least you can do is credit them and show the link to the original
Well written but extremely boring. MC's also an idiot, with his dead eyes, distancing himself from everyone. There's no satisfaction to reading such an unnecessarily dark & average mc. Wasted 20 mins on this. Doesn't deserve a rating above 4.0.
Great story, one of the best Naruto fanfiction I don't know why this novel isn't popular Can you please give us more chapter 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
It’s fire a bit off around the edges because of the transition got a lot better and to the point that I would call it a masterpiece in the works
Great novel you flipping beast please release more chapters now here’s the review
Great novel i love it, it’s been a really long time since i read something with an actual proper plot
Great novel i love it, it’s been a really long time since i read something this well written
Something really other novels really should do is that you need to have an end. Their is a clear goal for our mc and it is sonitnwrrwsting to see how his goal effects him. Also translations really nice. And I don’t rlly see any big consistency issues
Honestly i just want to say that this is a very beautiful story, it’s just amazing i am so used to trash were everyone is so 2d that it brings a tear to my eye when i see the great character building that was put into the original characters and even the oc’d
So , this story is based on a character that doesn't know anything about naruto which is a great idea tbh ,the mc is kinda dark , which i really ike , the story development is peak fr , so overall, i really like this fan fiction , 10/10 , keep up the good work author
the story is good especially for those who like dark description of the naruto world. but for someone like me who just want to be entertained by mere fanfics, this story isnt for me. good luck to the author :).
based on my past experience of reading naruto fanfiction, this is one of the better ones that I've read. this is also more darker than other fanfiction, though not unnecessarily so. The mc is definitely one of the better highlights of this. His conviction is quite strong and he is focused on his goal, and based on the current chapter I can see that there will be development. Overall a good piece of work that explores the deeper themes of the naruto world. the punctuation and grammar is also easily understood would definitely recommend ps. sorry if I ranted, this is my first ever review.
if you are interested in a transmigration story of an MC ignorant of Naruto or any kind of fantas before, then this is the story for you.
The story is written well so far, I was hooked reading this. All I can say is more chapters pleaseee
I can say with full certainty that this is one of the best web's novels I've ever read
The story is written well so far and I really like the MC. I haven't really seen a fanfic like this making it very refreshing. I think it's definitely worth reading and I definitely see the potential. I hope the author keeps on going.
simply amazing. this story is a really fresh take on naruto. the main character is not mindless, he is dark but not without his reasons. i feel it will become difficult to read other naruto fics not as good as this one. those giving one stars are simply stating bullshit reasons, such as the mc not knowing the cannon (something completely fine and necessary to this plot) or complying about the protagonist being emotionally detached (something completely normal based on his past and motivations, also something only kids who dont understand the story will complain)