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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
The story needs a rewrite, the idea is good but it's very badly written , it's gringe, the guy begs people so he can help them , the way the nurse spoke to him,, his way of talking about closing the hospital is unrealistic , it doesn't make you want to help, it looks like a waste, he does not need to be in the hospital to donate, he could have done it anonymously , it seems like he wants to show everyone that he wants to help , it looks bad, he could go online to look for associations, orphanages, etc. to help online ,no need to show yourself.
interesting approach and I like the pace that it is going, hope there will be no cultivation shit later on or people doing magic and shit, keep it urban
the mc is such a wimp it’s crazy and some of the actions he do don’t even make sense like why would you date a random girl that you don’t know for no reason?? 💀🙏
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
The story needs a rewrite, the idea is good but it's very badly written , it's gringe, the guy begs people so he can help them , the way the nurse spoke to him,, his way of talking about closing the hospital is unrealistic , it doesn't make you want to help, it looks like a waste, he does not need to be in the hospital to donate, he could have done it anonymously , it seems like he wants to show everyone that he wants to help , it looks bad, he could go online to look for associations, orphanages, etc. to help online ,no need to show yourself.
interesting approach and I like the pace that it is going, hope there will be no cultivation shit later on or people doing magic and shit, keep it urban
the mc is such a wimp it’s crazy and some of the actions he do don’t even make sense like why would you date a random girl that you don’t know for no reason?? 💀🙏