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Write a reviewIt's an excellent story with good grammar, strong story development, and a well-developed main character. I hope this great story continues.
This story is an exemplar of the historical fiction on this site, it lacks nothing one could want in such a story
Just be patient with this novel, at the beginning maybe you feel it little bit boring because our MC still try to accept the reality. But it gradually become more better as the story progress. The story itself its refreshing because there are not many stories like this with 18 century as the background. Its bit realistic because our MC is not really overpowered, knowledgeable, etc. The updates is fast.
Please tell me you plan on reaching French Revolution. I know you potentially set up an out with the watch, but I'm down to read until 1815+. Great story!
J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue. J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite. Merci pour le partage !
I like it :) good job writing this, wished there were more similar fics i dont know what more to write for the minimum word count to post the review
It's an excellent story with good grammar, strong story development, and a well-developed main character. I hope this great story continues.
This story is an exemplar of the historical fiction on this site, it lacks nothing one could want in such a story
Just be patient with this novel, at the beginning maybe you feel it little bit boring because our MC still try to accept the reality. But it gradually become more better as the story progress. The story itself its refreshing because there are not many stories like this with 18 century as the background. Its bit realistic because our MC is not really overpowered, knowledgeable, etc. The updates is fast.
Please tell me you plan on reaching French Revolution. I know you potentially set up an out with the watch, but I'm down to read until 1815+. Great story!
J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue. J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite. Merci pour le partage !
I like it :) good job writing this, wished there were more similar fics i dont know what more to write for the minimum word count to post the review