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As the novel is rated 18+ more attention to convey the intimate between the characters is needed as for as now its resemble cracked cision in these parts
I will just say it's refreshing to read something that's not about reincarnation, zombies and transmigration but about real life Thanks and well done ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
As a first book, it was entertaining. I enjoy mafia stories, and the action was fast-paced. It's a short story. Maybe it was too fast-paced because there were parts that could have been fleshed out a little more. For example, towards the end, the main character's friend should have been kidnapped. But, I'm not sure what happened with that. Is the friend still alive? Also, I didn't understand how the title connected with the story. However, I read for entertainment, so that's not a big issue for me. I'm looking forward to the next book because the author creates interesting characters.
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Rafael medical skills is good practice in Marco's Mafia at the same time spying.
I liked the tension and excitement in each chapter it's unsettling about what's going to happen next, so it makes me anxious as well as curious. This plot is great as well.
It was kinda boring i feel if the story were cut down in some places would’ve been better and more entertaining
The storyline is compelling and the characters are interesting, just can't to read more
Dear readers, I'm deeply grateful to everyone who took the time to read my book. Your support and encouragement throughout my writing journey have meant the world to me, especially during the contest. As an avid fan of BL stories and mafia romance, I had an absolute blast blending these genres together. Completing this project brings me immense joy, despite some frustration due to my limited experience. My goal was to shroud Marco and Rafael's love story in mystery, intertwined with themes of love, revenge, and betrayal. I hope I've succeeded in conveying this complex narrative. Other characters, though minor, played crucial roles in the story. If I have the opportunity to write again, I promise to explore the genre better. Thank you once more for your loyalty and engagement. Best regards, Unique_Ideas.
As the novel is rated 18+ more attention to convey the intimate between the characters is needed as for as now its resemble cracked cision in these parts
I will just say it's refreshing to read something that's not about reincarnation, zombies and transmigration but about real life Thanks and well done ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
As a first book, it was entertaining. I enjoy mafia stories, and the action was fast-paced. It's a short story. Maybe it was too fast-paced because there were parts that could have been fleshed out a little more. For example, towards the end, the main character's friend should have been kidnapped. But, I'm not sure what happened with that. Is the friend still alive? Also, I didn't understand how the title connected with the story. However, I read for entertainment, so that's not a big issue for me. I'm looking forward to the next book because the author creates interesting characters.
Reveal Spoiler Rafael medical skills is good practice in Marco's Mafia at the same time spying.
I liked the tension and excitement in each chapter it's unsettling about what's going to happen next, so it makes me anxious as well as curious. This plot is great as well.
It was kinda boring i feel if the story were cut down in some places would’ve been better and more entertaining
The storyline is compelling and the characters are interesting, just can't to read more
Dear readers, I'm deeply grateful to everyone who took the time to read my book. Your support and encouragement throughout my writing journey have meant the world to me, especially during the contest. As an avid fan of BL stories and mafia romance, I had an absolute blast blending these genres together. Completing this project brings me immense joy, despite some frustration due to my limited experience. My goal was to shroud Marco and Rafael's love story in mystery, intertwined with themes of love, revenge, and betrayal. I hope I've succeeded in conveying this complex narrative. Other characters, though minor, played crucial roles in the story. If I have the opportunity to write again, I promise to explore the genre better. Thank you once more for your loyalty and engagement. Best regards, Unique_Ideas.