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I’ve only just noticed who you are and what you’ve already so I’m excited for this. Does this have romance
Great execution of a concept of power that is underdone because of lack of creativity or simply sometimes lack of thought. I won't spoil it here because that is major plot point in the story so it'd be better if you read it for yourself. The only star I've deducted is in the stability of updates criteria, I would like more chapters and not because of simple greed, the updates are genuinely quite slow and I personally think slow updates, especially at the start, hurt the potential of a story because of simply the fact that it is in these first chapters that people start to connect with the story and judge the story. Out of sight, Out of mind kinda of a deal. I have no issue with writing of the story till now(14 Chapters in, which I know is a short time but that is why I have highlighted this issue here).
one of the best demon slayer fanfics I have read. this is top tier. don't miss this fanfic. I love how the action scenes are composed. I would recommend this fanfic
i will wait till it gets more chapter. i hope you dont add ntr shit like your previous works living with author, it was promising novel yet you add blackmail ntr shit to it :)
A very good and enjoyable story. An enjoyable character and good dialogues that make you enjoy it. I look forward to the events of my future and I also trust the author because of his other novel.
As all ways broo you cooked this soo hard no words broo hatts off......................................................................................................
WOW,just wow this fanfic is absolutely amazing.Just the right amount of progression and an amazing mc.Love it.
This story got every thing that I desire have to be in the story and the story is masterfully well-balanced there was not even a moments disturbs the balance and the flow, Mc is Excellent he does have overpowered ability and also through out the story show Mc has also he has weakness and young still so much to learn, This story truly deserves 5 🌟
It's really good so far as of chapter 30. If you like demon slayer you will likely enjoy it.
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This novel is amazing, please keep updating it!! I need some more juicy character development!!
This is a really good ff. The amount of knowledge the author has taken and knows of the demon slayer story is amazing. There’s no plot holes so far and this definitely deserves a 5 star and would go as far as to say this will be the best DS ff on here
I read the synopsis and it caught my attention, but I wasn’t sure whether to read it or not. However, I saw that it’s by the same author as 'A Life with the Author,' so I definitely have to read it—I know it won’t disappoint me
I'm afraid to read stories from an author who has worked with NTR (Yes, I'm already traumatized), but I really liked this one so I'll give it a chance 👍🏻
Absolute banger, the whole fighting style is awesome, his character is a treat, keep it up my man I'm dropping stones everyday
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Wonderful work, I'm really looking forward to continuing. Thanks to the author for his great work. I can't wait to find out how the plot will develop further.
i love this fanfic the way the author phrase every sentence and word is just wonderful easy to understand the way the writing express crisp and clear emotions about the story its amazing fully fleshed out no plot holes so far no world travel bullshit just another pov of a what if character reborn with normal background no cheat or op system just talent and sheer will i mean bruh didn't even know he was in the demon slayer world until a fate full night you might think the cheat is his transparent world bullshit but the clearly explain that he got the talent in his og world with lip reading and was just enhance when he was reborn being deaf and all. and it was explain that the talent wag not born it was created being deaf and having experience reading the body language of how people act he just hone this to perfection also ty author haven't read a good fanfic in a while no system no world hoping nonsense just another demon slayer with fresh perspective of the world around it 🥰🥰🥰
Only quality works and it just keeps getting better and better with each new story. What else did you expect?. Interesting power and likable MC. Nice world building, exploring things which the original did not. And I really like how the MC and other characters build their relationship
Dude made “more than a dragon warrior” the greatest thing I’ve read so I’m gonna have at bare minimum a good read
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This is a great story keep up the good work please let it be a harem consisting of mitsuri daki shinobu kanae kanao nezuko and aoi
Overall, comparing this to the author's previous fanfic, More Than A Dragon Warrior, what happened? This feels like a step down in quality. The Good: We have an original MC in a fan-fic, yay! The author is kind enough to offer this for free and updates it regularly! The chapters are long and I am impressed the author can keep up the pace of releases. The Bad: The tenses are switching too rapidly, making it a chore to follow and beginning almost every chapter with (Seiji's POV) hurts my soul. I understand wanting to pump out a story, but all of the unnecessary punctuation line breaks and weirdly inserted tags just feel like speed bumps. The Neutral: It's not long enough to give it a truly good review yet, though, but Demon Slayer is hard to do. The Demon Slayer characters from the anime are (usually) very simple and this works for Demon Slayer. If you only use the anime as a source, you're going to have to fill in a lot of the blanks on your own. Thankfully, we have an original MC but I can't help but seem him as a Tanjiro 2.0. I think that is my fault though since I was not really able to connect with this.
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I was late to the Demon Slayer hype train. I binged it a few days ago while I had my holiday and I couldn't get it out of my mind. I searched for fanfics to stiate my need to get more but was disappointed to see there were barely any, and the existing are all dropped or only part of a multiversal story. Then it hit me, I am a fanfic Author, so I wrote this. Halfway writing the ten chapter, I realized why most of the Demon Slayer fanfic were dropped but I take it as a challenge so expect this to be completed. The main priority in my project is still MTADW so this book update might be a bit slow sometimes but hopefully you will get 5 chapters every week. If you are reader of my previous book, I hope you try this one. My latest works are always the best because I keep improving. The book will have slice of life moments and character interactions, especially the Hashiras as that was why I even felt the need for a fanfic in the first place. We didn't have enough Hashira screen time Well, what else can I say except let me cook🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥. I hope I don't get one spar spam again this time.
I’ve only just noticed who you are and what you’ve already so I’m excited for this. Does this have romance
Great execution of a concept of power that is underdone because of lack of creativity or simply sometimes lack of thought. I won't spoil it here because that is major plot point in the story so it'd be better if you read it for yourself. The only star I've deducted is in the stability of updates criteria, I would like more chapters and not because of simple greed, the updates are genuinely quite slow and I personally think slow updates, especially at the start, hurt the potential of a story because of simply the fact that it is in these first chapters that people start to connect with the story and judge the story. Out of sight, Out of mind kinda of a deal. I have no issue with writing of the story till now(14 Chapters in, which I know is a short time but that is why I have highlighted this issue here).
one of the best demon slayer fanfics I have read. this is top tier. don't miss this fanfic. I love how the action scenes are composed. I would recommend this fanfic
i will wait till it gets more chapter. i hope you dont add ntr shit like your previous works living with author, it was promising novel yet you add blackmail ntr shit to it :)
A very good and enjoyable story. An enjoyable character and good dialogues that make you enjoy it. I look forward to the events of my future and I also trust the author because of his other novel.
As all ways broo you cooked this soo hard no words broo hatts off......................................................................................................
WOW,just wow this fanfic is absolutely amazing.Just the right amount of progression and an amazing mc.Love it.
This story got every thing that I desire have to be in the story and the story is masterfully well-balanced there was not even a moments disturbs the balance and the flow, Mc is Excellent he does have overpowered ability and also through out the story show Mc has also he has weakness and young still so much to learn, This story truly deserves 5 🌟
It's really good so far as of chapter 30. If you like demon slayer you will likely enjoy it.
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This novel is amazing, please keep updating it!! I need some more juicy character development!!
This is a really good ff. The amount of knowledge the author has taken and knows of the demon slayer story is amazing. There’s no plot holes so far and this definitely deserves a 5 star and would go as far as to say this will be the best DS ff on here
I read the synopsis and it caught my attention, but I wasn’t sure whether to read it or not. However, I saw that it’s by the same author as 'A Life with the Author,' so I definitely have to read it—I know it won’t disappoint me
I'm afraid to read stories from an author who has worked with NTR (Yes, I'm already traumatized), but I really liked this one so I'll give it a chance 👍🏻
Absolute banger, the whole fighting style is awesome, his character is a treat, keep it up my man I'm dropping stones everyday
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IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!IT'S THEIR!!!!
Wonderful work, I'm really looking forward to continuing. Thanks to the author for his great work. I can't wait to find out how the plot will develop further.
i love this fanfic the way the author phrase every sentence and word is just wonderful easy to understand the way the writing express crisp and clear emotions about the story its amazing fully fleshed out no plot holes so far no world travel bullshit just another pov of a what if character reborn with normal background no cheat or op system just talent and sheer will i mean bruh didn't even know he was in the demon slayer world until a fate full night you might think the cheat is his transparent world bullshit but the clearly explain that he got the talent in his og world with lip reading and was just enhance when he was reborn being deaf and all. and it was explain that the talent wag not born it was created being deaf and having experience reading the body language of how people act he just hone this to perfection also ty author haven't read a good fanfic in a while no system no world hoping nonsense just another demon slayer with fresh perspective of the world around it 🥰🥰🥰
Only quality works and it just keeps getting better and better with each new story. What else did you expect?. Interesting power and likable MC. Nice world building, exploring things which the original did not. And I really like how the MC and other characters build their relationship
Dude made “more than a dragon warrior” the greatest thing I’ve read so I’m gonna have at bare minimum a good read
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This is a great story keep up the good work please let it be a harem consisting of mitsuri daki shinobu kanae kanao nezuko and aoi
Overall, comparing this to the author's previous fanfic, More Than A Dragon Warrior, what happened? This feels like a step down in quality. The Good: We have an original MC in a fan-fic, yay! The author is kind enough to offer this for free and updates it regularly! The chapters are long and I am impressed the author can keep up the pace of releases. The Bad: The tenses are switching too rapidly, making it a chore to follow and beginning almost every chapter with (Seiji's POV) hurts my soul. I understand wanting to pump out a story, but all of the unnecessary punctuation line breaks and weirdly inserted tags just feel like speed bumps. The Neutral: It's not long enough to give it a truly good review yet, though, but Demon Slayer is hard to do. The Demon Slayer characters from the anime are (usually) very simple and this works for Demon Slayer. If you only use the anime as a source, you're going to have to fill in a lot of the blanks on your own. Thankfully, we have an original MC but I can't help but seem him as a Tanjiro 2.0. I think that is my fault though since I was not really able to connect with this.
[img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=Good night][img=Feeling it][img=Envy][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=In a daze]
I was late to the Demon Slayer hype train. I binged it a few days ago while I had my holiday and I couldn't get it out of my mind. I searched for fanfics to stiate my need to get more but was disappointed to see there were barely any, and the existing are all dropped or only part of a multiversal story. Then it hit me, I am a fanfic Author, so I wrote this. Halfway writing the ten chapter, I realized why most of the Demon Slayer fanfic were dropped but I take it as a challenge so expect this to be completed. The main priority in my project is still MTADW so this book update might be a bit slow sometimes but hopefully you will get 5 chapters every week. If you are reader of my previous book, I hope you try this one. My latest works are always the best because I keep improving. The book will have slice of life moments and character interactions, especially the Hashiras as that was why I even felt the need for a fanfic in the first place. We didn't have enough Hashira screen time Well, what else can I say except let me cook🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥. I hope I don't get one spar spam again this time.