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Write a reviewI like the feel of this story but, the author over-explains thing's too much. It's like I'm reading a paragraph back to back most chapters about the same thing but in different wording. Now that wouldn't be so bad if it happened like in very few chapters, but I see it in almost all of them. The pacing for the story goes real fast at times then drags on the rest. I love apocalypse stories the most, they are one of my favorite genre's. This story could hit even more if it kept with a steadier pace and to leave some things a little unspoken for the readers to come to the conclusion of things on their own. World Background is there, won't give any spoilers about it. Character Designs, I will say are lost on me. That could just be me though forgetting cause I'm currently reading around 15~20 novels, so it's hard to remember what the character's features are. Writing quality is good other than the over-explaining. Updating stability is good at the time I'm reviewing it. Story development is a little on the slow side. You still see it happening just not at a jogging pace more like a walk. Which is good for some stories if they're longer novels; not short stories though. ( On that note I will say I have no idea how long this novel will be! Take that as you will.)
so far it's a very interesting book,,,,i'll come back after finishing the whole book for another review
I'm not the type who usually read new novels but I personally take a liking in this one Especially the main characters dynamics are so cute to me #powercouple
I really like how you describe things, it's simple but still vivid enough that I can still picture it in my mind But, tbh, I don't really like the dialogue in the first few chapters, the feel robotic
I like the feel of this story but, the author over-explains thing's too much. It's like I'm reading a paragraph back to back most chapters about the same thing but in different wording. Now that wouldn't be so bad if it happened like in very few chapters, but I see it in almost all of them. The pacing for the story goes real fast at times then drags on the rest. I love apocalypse stories the most, they are one of my favorite genre's. This story could hit even more if it kept with a steadier pace and to leave some things a little unspoken for the readers to come to the conclusion of things on their own. World Background is there, won't give any spoilers about it. Character Designs, I will say are lost on me. That could just be me though forgetting cause I'm currently reading around 15~20 novels, so it's hard to remember what the character's features are. Writing quality is good other than the over-explaining. Updating stability is good at the time I'm reviewing it. Story development is a little on the slow side. You still see it happening just not at a jogging pace more like a walk. Which is good for some stories if they're longer novels; not short stories though. ( On that note I will say I have no idea how long this novel will be! Take that as you will.)
so far it's a very interesting book,,,,i'll come back after finishing the whole book for another review
I'm not the type who usually read new novels but I personally take a liking in this one Especially the main characters dynamics are so cute to me #powercouple
I really like how you describe things, it's simple but still vivid enough that I can still picture it in my mind But, tbh, I don't really like the dialogue in the first few chapters, the feel robotic
Amando toda a história e os personagens.