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Story premise is great. Was looking forward to reading. MC is an absolute disappointment. If rewritten with a different MC I think the story would be a great one.
I love overpowered MC and systems. Only a few chapters out, but it's good start! MC actually killed a got and got OP power. He said he's a pacifist though. Very curious to see how this goes.
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MC - "i am a pacifist and can't see blood" proceeds to vanish immortality , reap souls 😂😂
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An interesting premise, it's been a while since I read (or watch) system based works though, last time it was Overlord. Would like to see this one grow.
Author here! You’ll expect to see the gradual change in the immortal world as they start to go through the apocalypse. And of course, the MC will get more powerful with the deaths all around. My recommendation is to just sit back, relax, and read how the story and the world unfolds.
So, if you’re still hesitating to read and wondering what makes this world unique from the rest, then I’ll tell you. In this world, God and Myths inhabit a territory. They become a City, a Metropolis, a Village, and even a whole mountain range. Think of every part of the Territory being the God’s body, if you will. And sometimes, that body gets sick. Now, why do Gods get sick? It’s because just like humans, there are viruses inside the body. In this world, that is called a Canzer. They are monsters that wreak havoc on a God’s body. Make no mistake. The Canzers don’t appear in the real world; they are inside the God’s body or what we call the Remedium. And because those Canzers wreak havoc in a God’s body (in the 4th dimension Remedium), that manifests as all kinds of destruction or disruption in the real world. That affects human lives. To stop the Canzers, the Gods have given powers to humans so that they can go over to the Remedium and kill the Canzers. Just like a human, they need a doctor to kill the ‘viruses’. That’s where human Saviors came in. They are the doctors of Gods. And just like doctors, there are two types: the Medical doctor and the Surgical doctor. One type of Savior is called the Operator. They are the Medical doctors of Gods. They diagnose what type of Canzer the God’s body has by looking at the symptomss. They do this by looking at a lot of factors—is it an earthquake, does it only happen in one district, is it spreading out, that kind of stuff. And once they know what they are dealing with, they prescribe a cure. The other type of Savior is called the Vanguard. They are the Surgical doctors of the Gods. They are the ones that go into the Remedium. Yes, Operators don’t go to the Remedium, only the Vanguards do. The Vanguards then kill the Canzer in the Remedium. Only with that does the manifestation of destruction and disruption in the real world stop. If a God’s healthy, then people can live happily ever after in immortality. Right?
Reveal Spoiler Story premise is great. Was looking forward to reading. MC is an absolute disappointment. If rewritten with a different MC I think the story would be a great one.
I love overpowered MC and systems. Only a few chapters out, but it's good start! MC actually killed a got and got OP power. He said he's a pacifist though. Very curious to see how this goes.
Reveal Spoiler MC - "i am a pacifist and can't see blood" proceeds to vanish immortality , reap souls 😂😂
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An interesting premise, it's been a while since I read (or watch) system based works though, last time it was Overlord. Would like to see this one grow.
Author here! You’ll expect to see the gradual change in the immortal world as they start to go through the apocalypse. And of course, the MC will get more powerful with the deaths all around. My recommendation is to just sit back, relax, and read how the story and the world unfolds.
So, if you’re still hesitating to read and wondering what makes this world unique from the rest, then I’ll tell you. In this world, God and Myths inhabit a territory. They become a City, a Metropolis, a Village, and even a whole mountain range. Think of every part of the Territory being the God’s body, if you will. And sometimes, that body gets sick. Now, why do Gods get sick? It’s because just like humans, there are viruses inside the body. In this world, that is called a Canzer. They are monsters that wreak havoc on a God’s body. Make no mistake. The Canzers don’t appear in the real world; they are inside the God’s body or what we call the Remedium. And because those Canzers wreak havoc in a God’s body (in the 4th dimension Remedium), that manifests as all kinds of destruction or disruption in the real world. That affects human lives. To stop the Canzers, the Gods have given powers to humans so that they can go over to the Remedium and kill the Canzers. Just like a human, they need a doctor to kill the ‘viruses’. That’s where human Saviors came in. They are the doctors of Gods. And just like doctors, there are two types: the Medical doctor and the Surgical doctor. One type of Savior is called the Operator. They are the Medical doctors of Gods. They diagnose what type of Canzer the God’s body has by looking at the symptomss. They do this by looking at a lot of factors—is it an earthquake, does it only happen in one district, is it spreading out, that kind of stuff. And once they know what they are dealing with, they prescribe a cure. The other type of Savior is called the Vanguard. They are the Surgical doctors of the Gods. They are the ones that go into the Remedium. Yes, Operators don’t go to the Remedium, only the Vanguards do. The Vanguards then kill the Canzer in the Remedium. Only with that does the manifestation of destruction and disruption in the real world stop. If a God’s healthy, then people can live happily ever after in immortality. Right?
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