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It hasn't been many chapters yet, however the story captivated me in many ways! It's an unique storyline which I at least haven't seen before! This mixed with very good writing quality makes it amazing! I will update this review when there are more chapters!
Мені сподобалось якщо хтось намагається зрозуміти що за мова на якій я пишу то це Українська 🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦
Really love the story but the updates…. When is the next chapter coming?
I have seen fanfics like this where the mc is just worrying about the uchiha massacre and is the only story development that goes on and most don’t even finish cuz they just like to drag out the story cuz they know there will be no conflict after this and the story goes to shit and you also need to update more
Well written, if a somewhat slow pace, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it so far, my only real criticism is the fact he has fire, lightning and water chakra affinities. Which isn’t that big of a deal. Thanks for the story, I’m looking forward to future updates!
Its really fun thats all I can say. go ahead and read it. good translation too. really nothing to bad to say. but I have a question what is the chinese name of the novel please?
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the system is kind of cool, but it's still a complete mess. it is intended for people who will study and perform the same actions for pumping, but it is essentially the same as reality
Well, what can I say after reading all the available chapters so far. In brief: the quality of writing is good, the update rate is shit. The plot at first is interesting, here you are shown some light intrigue, a little light manipulation from the main character.... and that's it, there's nothing else. Just light political games (of low lousy quality). Unfortunately all 29 chapters are chatter, not even a bit of shonen. The character design is well written, there is a feeling of a living being, not a dummy. The protagonist is interesting at first, then becomes a bit boring (well, this is the norm for the beginning of the events). Well, about the world is chosen typical Naruto, but with changes so far not very significant. In general, the development of the story will go a long way, but most likely boring and monotonous, if the author does not begin to dilute the political games active actions. And most likely we are unlikely to get a finished story).
A 5 star cause why not. Everyone is doing it anyway Writing Quality 5.0 Stability of Updates 5.0 Story Development 5.0 Character Design 5.0 World Background 5.0
good story with a fresh take on the Uchiha clan and the hidden leaf village alongside an intelligent mc so far. This story is very enjoyable to read. Keep up the great work, author.
Never give UP !!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!
Enjoyable, it's really good, and I finished it in one sitting. Otherwise, you wouldn't see such admiration for the novel (946.9K Views, 5.6k Collections in 23 Chapters, and all of this in 15 days). Keep going! Question: How did it become popular so quickly?
This is a good fic, it’s fun to read. Review by number one author in the world that follows the teachings of Jesus.
Absolute Cinema are the only words that make sense when describing this book, the uchiha clan all taking daggers was blood boiling. Damn good writing
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(using translator) Just reading this story makes my heart race, give it a chance, it's definitely a very good FF, in my opinion it's a bit dense but it's 100% worth it.
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i'm only chapter 20, but for now this is good. The system is not OP, but has a lot of potential. I hope this Fic don't be dropped. The MC seem good and coherent. This review is writen only about the 20, but this story has potential.👍
I'm currently reading chapter 19 so far it's full of politics and things but I'm not disappointed at all i don't know what to say because nothing happened yet so ... please keep it up author ~
Excellent story! So far (ch15ish) it is mostly politics to delay the uchiha massacre and buy time for growth rather than the power fantasy I expected. However, the author has done a fantastic job of writing both the Uchiha and Elder councils as intelligent and crafty schemers facing off, so I’m not even slightly disappointed. Author is definitely flexing his writing talents in this one, I’m so pumped to see how this develops later 🔥🔥🔥
I need more ........................... Plis god plis.....................,..................................,.n.mmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...............................,
I'm at the 18th chapter Finally a fic where the uchiha clan has some backbone. I hope the story aligns where uchiha clan dominates and sarutobi is fkin killed. Keep up the good work 👍😉 (Will review again at 100th chp)
it's amazing how the author was able to pull this off. keep up the gud work.
It hasn't been many chapters yet, however the story captivated me in many ways! It's an unique storyline which I at least haven't seen before! This mixed with very good writing quality makes it amazing! I will update this review when there are more chapters!
Мені сподобалось якщо хтось намагається зрозуміти що за мова на якій я пишу то це Українська 🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦🇺🇦
Really love the story but the updates…. When is the next chapter coming?
I have seen fanfics like this where the mc is just worrying about the uchiha massacre and is the only story development that goes on and most don’t even finish cuz they just like to drag out the story cuz they know there will be no conflict after this and the story goes to shit and you also need to update more
Well written, if a somewhat slow pace, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it so far, my only real criticism is the fact he has fire, lightning and water chakra affinities. Which isn’t that big of a deal. Thanks for the story, I’m looking forward to future updates!
Its really fun thats all I can say. go ahead and read it. good translation too. really nothing to bad to say. but I have a question what is the chinese name of the novel please?
[img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
the system is kind of cool, but it's still a complete mess. it is intended for people who will study and perform the same actions for pumping, but it is essentially the same as reality
Well, what can I say after reading all the available chapters so far. In brief: the quality of writing is good, the update rate is shit. The plot at first is interesting, here you are shown some light intrigue, a little light manipulation from the main character.... and that's it, there's nothing else. Just light political games (of low lousy quality). Unfortunately all 29 chapters are chatter, not even a bit of shonen. The character design is well written, there is a feeling of a living being, not a dummy. The protagonist is interesting at first, then becomes a bit boring (well, this is the norm for the beginning of the events). Well, about the world is chosen typical Naruto, but with changes so far not very significant. In general, the development of the story will go a long way, but most likely boring and monotonous, if the author does not begin to dilute the political games active actions. And most likely we are unlikely to get a finished story).
A 5 star cause why not. Everyone is doing it anyway Writing Quality 5.0 Stability of Updates 5.0 Story Development 5.0 Character Design 5.0 World Background 5.0
good story with a fresh take on the Uchiha clan and the hidden leaf village alongside an intelligent mc so far. This story is very enjoyable to read. Keep up the great work, author.
Never give UP !!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!
Enjoyable, it's really good, and I finished it in one sitting. Otherwise, you wouldn't see such admiration for the novel (946.9K Views, 5.6k Collections in 23 Chapters, and all of this in 15 days). Keep going! Question: How did it become popular so quickly?
This is a good fic, it’s fun to read. Review by number one author in the world that follows the teachings of Jesus.
Absolute Cinema are the only words that make sense when describing this book, the uchiha clan all taking daggers was blood boiling. Damn good writing
Reveal Spoiler (using translator) Just reading this story makes my heart race, give it a chance, it's definitely a very good FF, in my opinion it's a bit dense but it's 100% worth it.
Reveal Spoiler i'm only chapter 20, but for now this is good. The system is not OP, but has a lot of potential. I hope this Fic don't be dropped. The MC seem good and coherent. This review is writen only about the 20, but this story has potential.👍
I'm currently reading chapter 19 so far it's full of politics and things but I'm not disappointed at all i don't know what to say because nothing happened yet so ... please keep it up author ~
Excellent story! So far (ch15ish) it is mostly politics to delay the uchiha massacre and buy time for growth rather than the power fantasy I expected. However, the author has done a fantastic job of writing both the Uchiha and Elder councils as intelligent and crafty schemers facing off, so I’m not even slightly disappointed. Author is definitely flexing his writing talents in this one, I’m so pumped to see how this develops later 🔥🔥🔥
I need more ........................... Plis god plis.....................,..................................,.n.mmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...............................,
I'm at the 18th chapter Finally a fic where the uchiha clan has some backbone. I hope the story aligns where uchiha clan dominates and sarutobi is fkin killed. Keep up the good work 👍😉 (Will review again at 100th chp)
it's amazing how the author was able to pull this off. keep up the gud work.
A 5 star cause why not. Everyone is doing it anyway