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Other than a few spelling mistakes an some punctuation issues it's a good translation! Good job,Author![img=recommend][img=update]
I love gamer Jon snow fic I wish there was more of them I like the first chapter
Сначала я думал, что только Джону достанется система. Потом пошли его родственники. Затем, хоть и в урезанной версии, супруги. Скоро это всё превратится в типичную песочницу ММОРПГ.
La historia destaca por su innovador giro a la narrativa original, combinando la intensidad y el drama de Game of Thrones con elementos de la cultura gamer. Cada uno de los niños Stark utiliza sus habilidades únicas de manera ingeniosa para enfrentarse a sus enemigos y cambiar el curso de los eventos que conocemos de la serie. El autor logra mantener la esencia de cada personaje mientras explora cómo estas nuevas habilidades podrían influir en sus decisiones y destinos. La mezcla de estrategia política y acción, con un toque de elementos fantásticos de videojuegos, proporciona una lectura entretenida y fresca que tanto los fans de Game of Thrones como los entusiastas de los videojuegos pueden disfrutar.
It was good until it decided to give the power of the gamer to more than one person.
It was good at start but the main point of being protagonist is lost when you give same powers to everyone . Its's utter garbage
i really like how your using old valyria in the story.I wonder why no other fanfiction thought of this.
Loving the book, you should make roob take some leardship skills and be a great commander. Kepp it up
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The beginning was really amazing and the Gamer element nicely done. BUT now that it seems that every Stark gains the Gamet System the whole individuality of Jon is gone. Jon our MC is now just one of a lot of Gamers and he is no longer unique. Absolutely not my cup of tea... Maybe the author could write another version parallel to this one but the center is focused on Jon and HIS Gamer System... This is something I would prefere very much.
At first, it started well with only Jon as the gamer, and knowing the background, it could do something powerful by chapter 6. Now that Bran and Sansa are gamers, what's the next idea? Making all the family gamers and taking some revenge on the world? 1 gamer is good, but already 3 and maybe more—not for me, and good luck for the future of this when anyone is able to level the continent.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💟💟💟💟💟 so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thanks for the translation and your comments are much appreciated, I hope we see the end of this story.
were is chapter 3 and chapters 4 and 5 are wrong way around unless they are just numbered wrong
Other than a few spelling mistakes an some punctuation issues it's a good translation! Good job,Author![img=recommend][img=update]
I love gamer Jon snow fic I wish there was more of them I like the first chapter
Сначала я думал, что только Джону достанется система. Потом пошли его родственники. Затем, хоть и в урезанной версии, супруги. Скоро это всё превратится в типичную песочницу ММОРПГ.
La historia destaca por su innovador giro a la narrativa original, combinando la intensidad y el drama de Game of Thrones con elementos de la cultura gamer. Cada uno de los niños Stark utiliza sus habilidades únicas de manera ingeniosa para enfrentarse a sus enemigos y cambiar el curso de los eventos que conocemos de la serie. El autor logra mantener la esencia de cada personaje mientras explora cómo estas nuevas habilidades podrían influir en sus decisiones y destinos. La mezcla de estrategia política y acción, con un toque de elementos fantásticos de videojuegos, proporciona una lectura entretenida y fresca que tanto los fans de Game of Thrones como los entusiastas de los videojuegos pueden disfrutar.
It was good until it decided to give the power of the gamer to more than one person.
It was good at start but the main point of being protagonist is lost when you give same powers to everyone . Its's utter garbage
i really like how your using old valyria in the story.I wonder why no other fanfiction thought of this.
Loving the book, you should make roob take some leardship skills and be a great commander. Kepp it up
Very Good .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
NICE Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice Nice god Nice............................................
The beginning was really amazing and the Gamer element nicely done. BUT now that it seems that every Stark gains the Gamet System the whole individuality of Jon is gone. Jon our MC is now just one of a lot of Gamers and he is no longer unique. Absolutely not my cup of tea... Maybe the author could write another version parallel to this one but the center is focused on Jon and HIS Gamer System... This is something I would prefere very much.
At first, it started well with only Jon as the gamer, and knowing the background, it could do something powerful by chapter 6. Now that Bran and Sansa are gamers, what's the next idea? Making all the family gamers and taking some revenge on the world? 1 gamer is good, but already 3 and maybe more—not for me, and good luck for the future of this when anyone is able to level the continent.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💟💟💟💟💟 so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thanks for the translation and your comments are much appreciated, I hope we see the end of this story.
were is chapter 3 and chapters 4 and 5 are wrong way around unless they are just numbered wrong
Loving the story so far needs some editing tho. So far, good job!