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this I hands down one of the best smut novel I have read. great writing style and the characters descriptions are amazing, sadly I just do not like MC getting cucked so I have to drop. But great work by the way!
I absolutely hate the way the story goes it would have been ten times better without the ntr
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I'm not a fan of NTR at all but if the rest of the story hurts it it hurts it a little, the author's way of writing is very good, speaking of the erotic answer, if you don't like NTR don't even watch this 3 stars for the good scenes , the ntr and the story that in general the non-erotic is quite bad
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Just drop the Ntr and this book will be a 5 star masterpiece better than even all your other books .As You've seen in the reviews of almost if not everyone Ntr is the only thing ruining this book
Esta muy bueno esto siiiiíiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiií iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. alfin un buen netorare csrajo xðdddðddddddddddddddddddddddddddddfdddddddddddddddd
this I hands down one of the best smut novel I have read. great writing style and the characters descriptions are amazing, sadly I just do not like MC getting cucked so I have to drop. But great work by the way!
I absolutely hate the way the story goes it would have been ten times better without the ntr
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
I'm not a fan of NTR at all but if the rest of the story hurts it it hurts it a little, the author's way of writing is very good, speaking of the erotic answer, if you don't like NTR don't even watch this 3 stars for the good scenes , the ntr and the story that in general the non-erotic is quite bad
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Just drop the Ntr and this book will be a 5 star masterpiece better than even all your other books .As You've seen in the reviews of almost if not everyone Ntr is the only thing ruining this book