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Honestly I wasn't expecting this to so good ππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππ
This is an absolutely phenomenal example of a fanfiction. If all you're looking for is some reassurances that this isn't bad, then here it is, go read this. The Writing Quality is great. I haven't had any problem with reading and keeping up with the thought processes of the characters. The voices of everyone is clear and the reading process is enjoyable. The Stability of Updates has been really good for the last couple of day but even if we look at the lifetime of the fiction, 50-odd chapters in 4 months is more than respectable for this level of quality. The Story Development is just the right mixture of what I expected and twists and turns that I didn't expect. Nothing was so strange that I couldn't think back on a previous plot point or detail and fail to figure out how the characters got to this point. The Author really showcases a level of detail and attention to this story that is really rare to see. The Character Design is good. I personally enjoy it a lot and this is a harry potter fanfiction so a lot of the character design is just sort of filling out characters that were in the original work. It is still really fun and the author does make an effort to showcase more original characters and explore the people in this world. A lot of the character design also ties back in to the world background and how the setting treats powerful wizards and witches. One of my favorite aspects is how the author manages to weave together the feeling of having a powerful and dynamic protagonist with a background of (relatively) unimportant and static characters. I've seen a lot of people try to get that sort of dichotomy to work but this is definitely one of the better examples I have seen. The World Background is great. The AU Harry Potter-verse that this is set in is delightful. I spend a significant amount of time thinking about the world and how cool it is. It is so much more developed and well thought out than I've seen before. It also really respects a lot of the original settings that I tend to ignore in other works. Here the wand is a game-changer as a magic-casting tool and the subtle ways that the author showcases how much better using a wand makes a wizard really sells the world to me. There's so much more than that going on of course. But you should really check it out for yourself. Overall, this is an exemplar of the fanfiction genre. I really enjoy this story and I'm definitely going to waiting for more updates to this going forward.
It's a fresh take on the harry potter world and I'm all for it. It doesn't just revolve around Hogwarts and magical britain but the mc travels to other places in the world as well and doesn't hesitate to do what's necessary for his growth. How I hope the updates become more frequent. You are doing a amazing work with this story.
ΠΠ²ΡΠΎΡΡ, ΠΏΡΠΈΠ²Π΅Ρπ ΠΡΠΎ ΡΠ΅Π°Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ Π°Π»Π·ΠΎΠ»? ΠΠ»ΠΈ ΠΊΡΠΎ ΡΠΎ Π΄ΡΡΠ³ΠΎΠΉ...,.......................,.... ..........................,.............. ..............,.
I have read a lot of HP Fanfics. I will say this; this is undoubtedly the best I have come across. Author, please donβt drop it. Post more if you can π€ππ₯³
I like it a lot I didnβt think it was a translation till reading the comments and the story is good and go deeper in the hp world [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The idea of the story is good, however the dialog is quite bad and doesnΒ΄t feel natural at all - especially with the female characters - itΒ΄s too robotic and there are some translation and continuity errors. All in all itΒ΄s something that can be read but donΒ΄t expect a masterpiece or hidden gem
This fanfic offers an interesting blend of two well-known universes: Harry Potter and Fairy Tail. The protagonist, who is either the same age as Tonks or a year older, is reincarnated into the world of Harry Potter but brings with them a very unique magical ability from the Fairy Tail universe: the capacity to store books in their mind or soul and analyze them at will. This ability opens up a range of possibilities, as the protagonist can access vast knowledge at any moment (as long as they've downloaded it), making them a unique and powerful character. One of the most striking aspects is that the story doesn't focus too much on Harry Potter canon. Instead, it builds a much broader world that, while maintaining key elements of the original universe, expands with new rules and magical dynamics. This makes it a fresh and exciting read, especially for those looking for something different within the world of Hogwarts. The narrative flows well, and the protagonist's development is intriguing. As they explore their abilities and the new world they find themselves in, you can feel a gradual evolution. If you're a fan of crossovers and enjoy seeing how a character can bring drastic changes to a familiar universe, this fanfic is for you.
for those like me who look at the number of chapters before reading, I will say this - there are huge chapters here and 30 chapters here are like 100-150 chapters in another ff. The story touches little on canon and is more about the world of HP, with the addition of things from other worlds.
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I am fed up with all these novels with harem tags. God! Why can't authors just write a descent novel with no harem, no system just a story where main character is just smart and hard working (By the way I am just ranting no offense to who ever like these type of shit)
I read this somewhere, this is not the case where hero goes to China, there will be some jade boys. And then there will be something about demons?
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This is good story the concept of archive magic in hp is good i hope you wont drop this
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started off good, you dont see many AU's this unique. but the sexual deviance turned me off. i dont even care about the harem tag, but every sexual interaction in this novel is just uncomfortable and weird. also, theres a lot of nothing chapters. where the mc just walks around like hes the witcher doing quests. he also has no real goals throughout the story. just mini goals with his education. the story leads nowhere, sexual deviance of a weird sort, and boring chapters questing along the wizarding world.
Honestly I wasn't expecting this to so good ππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππππππ πππππππ ππππππππππππ
This is an absolutely phenomenal example of a fanfiction. If all you're looking for is some reassurances that this isn't bad, then here it is, go read this. The Writing Quality is great. I haven't had any problem with reading and keeping up with the thought processes of the characters. The voices of everyone is clear and the reading process is enjoyable. The Stability of Updates has been really good for the last couple of day but even if we look at the lifetime of the fiction, 50-odd chapters in 4 months is more than respectable for this level of quality. The Story Development is just the right mixture of what I expected and twists and turns that I didn't expect. Nothing was so strange that I couldn't think back on a previous plot point or detail and fail to figure out how the characters got to this point. The Author really showcases a level of detail and attention to this story that is really rare to see. The Character Design is good. I personally enjoy it a lot and this is a harry potter fanfiction so a lot of the character design is just sort of filling out characters that were in the original work. It is still really fun and the author does make an effort to showcase more original characters and explore the people in this world. A lot of the character design also ties back in to the world background and how the setting treats powerful wizards and witches. One of my favorite aspects is how the author manages to weave together the feeling of having a powerful and dynamic protagonist with a background of (relatively) unimportant and static characters. I've seen a lot of people try to get that sort of dichotomy to work but this is definitely one of the better examples I have seen. The World Background is great. The AU Harry Potter-verse that this is set in is delightful. I spend a significant amount of time thinking about the world and how cool it is. It is so much more developed and well thought out than I've seen before. It also really respects a lot of the original settings that I tend to ignore in other works. Here the wand is a game-changer as a magic-casting tool and the subtle ways that the author showcases how much better using a wand makes a wizard really sells the world to me. There's so much more than that going on of course. But you should really check it out for yourself. Overall, this is an exemplar of the fanfiction genre. I really enjoy this story and I'm definitely going to waiting for more updates to this going forward.
It's a fresh take on the harry potter world and I'm all for it. It doesn't just revolve around Hogwarts and magical britain but the mc travels to other places in the world as well and doesn't hesitate to do what's necessary for his growth. How I hope the updates become more frequent. You are doing a amazing work with this story.
ΠΠ²ΡΠΎΡΡ, ΠΏΡΠΈΠ²Π΅Ρπ ΠΡΠΎ ΡΠ΅Π°Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ Π°Π»Π·ΠΎΠ»? ΠΠ»ΠΈ ΠΊΡΠΎ ΡΠΎ Π΄ΡΡΠ³ΠΎΠΉ...,.......................,.... ..........................,.............. ..............,.
I have read a lot of HP Fanfics. I will say this; this is undoubtedly the best I have come across. Author, please donβt drop it. Post more if you can π€ππ₯³
I like it a lot I didnβt think it was a translation till reading the comments and the story is good and go deeper in the hp world [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Reveal Spoiler The idea of the story is good, however the dialog is quite bad and doesnΒ΄t feel natural at all - especially with the female characters - itΒ΄s too robotic and there are some translation and continuity errors. All in all itΒ΄s something that can be read but donΒ΄t expect a masterpiece or hidden gem
This fanfic offers an interesting blend of two well-known universes: Harry Potter and Fairy Tail. The protagonist, who is either the same age as Tonks or a year older, is reincarnated into the world of Harry Potter but brings with them a very unique magical ability from the Fairy Tail universe: the capacity to store books in their mind or soul and analyze them at will. This ability opens up a range of possibilities, as the protagonist can access vast knowledge at any moment (as long as they've downloaded it), making them a unique and powerful character. One of the most striking aspects is that the story doesn't focus too much on Harry Potter canon. Instead, it builds a much broader world that, while maintaining key elements of the original universe, expands with new rules and magical dynamics. This makes it a fresh and exciting read, especially for those looking for something different within the world of Hogwarts. The narrative flows well, and the protagonist's development is intriguing. As they explore their abilities and the new world they find themselves in, you can feel a gradual evolution. If you're a fan of crossovers and enjoy seeing how a character can bring drastic changes to a familiar universe, this fanfic is for you.
for those like me who look at the number of chapters before reading, I will say this - there are huge chapters here and 30 chapters here are like 100-150 chapters in another ff. The story touches little on canon and is more about the world of HP, with the addition of things from other worlds.
π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―
I am fed up with all these novels with harem tags. God! Why can't authors just write a descent novel with no harem, no system just a story where main character is just smart and hard working (By the way I am just ranting no offense to who ever like these type of shit)
I read this somewhere, this is not the case where hero goes to China, there will be some jade boys. And then there will be something about demons?
Reveal Spoiler This is good story the concept of archive magic in hp is good i hope you wont drop this
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
started off good, you dont see many AU's this unique. but the sexual deviance turned me off. i dont even care about the harem tag, but every sexual interaction in this novel is just uncomfortable and weird. also, theres a lot of nothing chapters. where the mc just walks around like hes the witcher doing quests. he also has no real goals throughout the story. just mini goals with his education. the story leads nowhere, sexual deviance of a weird sort, and boring chapters questing along the wizarding world.