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story is alright to turn my brain off, nothing in the story so far has me think deeply that's for sure. story lacks any form of flow as it's extremely fast paced with the way it gets through events, you really don't get any of the little details written about,which i think goes hand in hand with the pacing issues to some extent. characters feel like they lack depth, I feel like I'm reading about a conversation two robots are having rather then characters that I'm supposed to find endearing. like i said at the start don't think to much and it's alright.
The first chapter is the best written one. Afterwards not only does the writing lose quality, but the characters and situations develop too fast. The MC is annoyingly dumb... As an extra the author is incosistent with things such as the level of skills and explanations, never explained what does the skill level actually represent or affect. Oh and the MC is reincarnated but somehow knows things such as family A is very renowned and amazing, level 40 is very OP etc...
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Slight Spoilers. Stop looking now if you don't want to know. Also I finished 72 Chapters and wanted to give my two cents. Chapters 1-72 of Volume 1 is basically the end of the story. Chapters 73 (Volume 2) and onward is basically a new MC. I'm not even joking. I don't have much to say about the MC. He's kind of a wimp or if I had to be nice I'd say he is a wallflower. He gets 3 skills to choose from and you'd think he would use it more wisely but he doesn't. Now I don't want to be rude but in synthesis skill type of novels the Author is the one who makes it work or doesn't. Unfortunately it takes the kid way too long and to top it off he's basically a weakling for a pretty long time. His skill set should be something he can use to make himself overpowered rather quickly. Sadly instead we get what feels like a 12 year old who just hit puberty and lacks some intelligence. I'm not trying to be rude but the MC for the Chapters 1-72 is basically slow. Chapters 73 and onwards on the otherhand. I'll just say it feels like he just got introduced to Linkin Park, Green Day and Paramore and thought wearing mascara and dark clothes made him cool. If you didn't get it he's basically just Edgy. I can't exactly say it's wrong for him to get like that but it certainly feels like we just got introduced to a new Main Character. Right now I can't recommend it to friends. Score: 5.9 Out of 10 Personal Score: N/A. You don't want to know my real Score.
I didn't have many expectations because of all the comments, although I agree with the part about him being naive at the beginning when he was an adult, for my personal taste I hate cheerful characters like his partner's sister and the innkeeper's daughter, I totally despise those characters, in the part of the transition to the demonic world I didn't understand how it happened I think it's like a part was cut off, since it doesn't explain why he's no longer Ethan, anyway I like his current personality and how he's developing his own strengths, I hope he also starts to open up to Bella, while she stops wanting to manipulate him and falls in love with him, without more to say thanks to the author for this story.
I like the story and development. I do see what everyone else is saying with the dumb protagonist comments. My first thought when looking at the skills he chose is that we are looking at a skill synthesis story, yet the protagonist, who claims to be thinking about potential skill combinations when selecting them, turns around and acts suprised when he can synthesis skills. What really bothers me is you build character on all these side characters and then you deus ex machina them to die. Just bam dead. Felt very forced, like you as the author got a little bored with all your characters and decided to scrap them while keeping the plot.
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the mc is soooooo dumb the mythic and ulti mate skill is wasted on him he only uses his ultimate skill on sword like literally synthesizing his sword the system already gave an explanation on the skill it said that it can synthesize fragment even the energy form etc in summary it can synthesize everything the system just elaborate it but the mc is way too dumb to understand it so he only uses it on synthesizing sword Also the mythic skill absorption he don't use it on the same monster he think it's useless because he already got all of the monster skills and is a waste of Mana if he use it again for absorption It took him 11 chapters to understand the potential of his skills, he saw a rare toad and after defeating it he uses his skill absorption on it and he realize he got the same skill again and the system tell him that he can use the ultimate skill universal synthesis to synthesize the skill he got and the skill he absorb before from a normal toad monster the system literally have to tell it to him for him to understand the potential of his skill if the system hadnt't tell him about it i bet it would take like 50 chapters for him to discover it Sorry for the bad grammar
Maybe the story has potential maybe not. The thing is MC is way too dumb and I just hate such type of MC.
hey author congrats on your story but I'd like to ask, why does it feel like your mc is dumb . I mean he's in a fantasy world where the strong prey on the weak and he's weak right now so shouldn't the right choice in this situation be to increase his strength by leveraging on his current acquaintances instead of jumping headfirst into situations without thinking for god sake he was a 30 year old b4 reincarnation so shouldn't common sense make him u know a little distrustful of people's intentions instead of him taking things at face value. I'm really frustrated because I like your writing but the story is just unrealistic. it's like a fairy tale where everyone is kind to each other. sorry about the yapping but i just hate indecisive naive mc's
Overall a nice read. Interesting skills and abilities and world background. I Hope to see him growing very powerful like Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse, that would be nice, if possible 😊
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
A classic book with a nice concept of his own. It is worth reading. Is it a Harem? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A perfect start of a new concept novel. there are no grammar mistakes that can irritate a reader. May be this is a new concept, because i did not read anything like this
story is alright to turn my brain off, nothing in the story so far has me think deeply that's for sure. story lacks any form of flow as it's extremely fast paced with the way it gets through events, you really don't get any of the little details written about,which i think goes hand in hand with the pacing issues to some extent. characters feel like they lack depth, I feel like I'm reading about a conversation two robots are having rather then characters that I'm supposed to find endearing. like i said at the start don't think to much and it's alright.
The first chapter is the best written one. Afterwards not only does the writing lose quality, but the characters and situations develop too fast. The MC is annoyingly dumb... As an extra the author is incosistent with things such as the level of skills and explanations, never explained what does the skill level actually represent or affect. Oh and the MC is reincarnated but somehow knows things such as family A is very renowned and amazing, level 40 is very OP etc...
Reveal Spoiler Slight Spoilers. Stop looking now if you don't want to know. Also I finished 72 Chapters and wanted to give my two cents. Chapters 1-72 of Volume 1 is basically the end of the story. Chapters 73 (Volume 2) and onward is basically a new MC. I'm not even joking. I don't have much to say about the MC. He's kind of a wimp or if I had to be nice I'd say he is a wallflower. He gets 3 skills to choose from and you'd think he would use it more wisely but he doesn't. Now I don't want to be rude but in synthesis skill type of novels the Author is the one who makes it work or doesn't. Unfortunately it takes the kid way too long and to top it off he's basically a weakling for a pretty long time. His skill set should be something he can use to make himself overpowered rather quickly. Sadly instead we get what feels like a 12 year old who just hit puberty and lacks some intelligence. I'm not trying to be rude but the MC for the Chapters 1-72 is basically slow. Chapters 73 and onwards on the otherhand. I'll just say it feels like he just got introduced to Linkin Park, Green Day and Paramore and thought wearing mascara and dark clothes made him cool. If you didn't get it he's basically just Edgy. I can't exactly say it's wrong for him to get like that but it certainly feels like we just got introduced to a new Main Character. Right now I can't recommend it to friends. Score: 5.9 Out of 10 Personal Score: N/A. You don't want to know my real Score.
I didn't have many expectations because of all the comments, although I agree with the part about him being naive at the beginning when he was an adult, for my personal taste I hate cheerful characters like his partner's sister and the innkeeper's daughter, I totally despise those characters, in the part of the transition to the demonic world I didn't understand how it happened I think it's like a part was cut off, since it doesn't explain why he's no longer Ethan, anyway I like his current personality and how he's developing his own strengths, I hope he also starts to open up to Bella, while she stops wanting to manipulate him and falls in love with him, without more to say thanks to the author for this story.
I like the story and development. I do see what everyone else is saying with the dumb protagonist comments. My first thought when looking at the skills he chose is that we are looking at a skill synthesis story, yet the protagonist, who claims to be thinking about potential skill combinations when selecting them, turns around and acts suprised when he can synthesis skills. What really bothers me is you build character on all these side characters and then you deus ex machina them to die. Just bam dead. Felt very forced, like you as the author got a little bored with all your characters and decided to scrap them while keeping the plot.
Reveal Spoiler the mc is soooooo dumb the mythic and ulti mate skill is wasted on him he only uses his ultimate skill on sword like literally synthesizing his sword the system already gave an explanation on the skill it said that it can synthesize fragment even the energy form etc in summary it can synthesize everything the system just elaborate it but the mc is way too dumb to understand it so he only uses it on synthesizing sword Also the mythic skill absorption he don't use it on the same monster he think it's useless because he already got all of the monster skills and is a waste of Mana if he use it again for absorption It took him 11 chapters to understand the potential of his skills, he saw a rare toad and after defeating it he uses his skill absorption on it and he realize he got the same skill again and the system tell him that he can use the ultimate skill universal synthesis to synthesize the skill he got and the skill he absorb before from a normal toad monster the system literally have to tell it to him for him to understand the potential of his skill if the system hadnt't tell him about it i bet it would take like 50 chapters for him to discover it Sorry for the bad grammar
Maybe the story has potential maybe not. The thing is MC is way too dumb and I just hate such type of MC.
hey author congrats on your story but I'd like to ask, why does it feel like your mc is dumb . I mean he's in a fantasy world where the strong prey on the weak and he's weak right now so shouldn't the right choice in this situation be to increase his strength by leveraging on his current acquaintances instead of jumping headfirst into situations without thinking for god sake he was a 30 year old b4 reincarnation so shouldn't common sense make him u know a little distrustful of people's intentions instead of him taking things at face value. I'm really frustrated because I like your writing but the story is just unrealistic. it's like a fairy tale where everyone is kind to each other. sorry about the yapping but i just hate indecisive naive mc's
Overall a nice read. Interesting skills and abilities and world background. I Hope to see him growing very powerful like Infinite Mana In The Apocalypse, that would be nice, if possible 😊
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
A classic book with a nice concept of his own. It is worth reading. Is it a Harem? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A perfect start of a new concept novel. there are no grammar mistakes that can irritate a reader. May be this is a new concept, because i did not read anything like this
This looks pretty good... I hope it comes out good