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Write a reviewThis novel is very good. The only downside is the fact that the MC is a bit hard to relate to but he's getting that character development in.
The character feels real do to his complex thoughts. He doesnβt lose himself in his emotions. Most of all, He trained outside of what he did with All Might.
Reveal SpoilerRealy great book, perfect English and if there is any error it is so minimal that it is not noticeable. Perfect stability and certainly more can come (An author's tip: Make a Patreon and speed up the writing of chapters, you will earn a lot with this book). Many are talking about how the MC is emotionless and even a bit megalomaniacal, but these are normal traits of people who exist. No one can stand a Gary Stu in EVERY SINGLE BOOK of Webnovel. And for those who think he will be like this forever, he won't (At least as far as the development is going, it is perfect). We can't talk much about World Background, everyone already knows the original work so it is not necessary to describe too much. But you will be surprised by the amount of cool laws and questions in the UA entrance test. Basically, your novel is a Golden Piece. Evolving to Masterpiece only if you write more than 100K words.
I really liked it, the only thing I wish was added was photos of the characters and items that the MC receives π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
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Iβve never seen a main character like this in a fanfic itβs definitely great deserves all 5 stars
the main character is not cold-blooded and intriguing, but simply someone who suffers from a lack of attention and who reacts too violently if they communicate with him only a little more politely, he immediately begins to feel love and affection, if you talk to him normally, apparently in childhood he was not loved and just humiliated if, from simple politeness, butterflies begin to flutter in his stomach and he begins to feel something in his heart, cringe
Mc is a calm-headed and scheming freak. No, not from Earth, no knowledge of plot either. Harem is the reason why I read. But let's hope he won't play them like tools... Sigh... cus it looks like he will. Nevermind... Right, this Fanfic's written style is different than usual ones. Try it out yourself, you're the one who has to read it either way... Let's hope it won't be dropped. Good luck, Author!
The very beginning is pretty good I think it have big potential I liked it @justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath
awesome so far, the mc is unlike any MHA mc ive seen before and its already got me hooked and we arent even at UA yet
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Reveal SpoilerThis novel is very good. The only downside is the fact that the MC is a bit hard to relate to but he's getting that character development in.
The character feels real do to his complex thoughts. He doesnβt lose himself in his emotions. Most of all, He trained outside of what he did with All Might.
Reveal SpoilerRealy great book, perfect English and if there is any error it is so minimal that it is not noticeable. Perfect stability and certainly more can come (An author's tip: Make a Patreon and speed up the writing of chapters, you will earn a lot with this book). Many are talking about how the MC is emotionless and even a bit megalomaniacal, but these are normal traits of people who exist. No one can stand a Gary Stu in EVERY SINGLE BOOK of Webnovel. And for those who think he will be like this forever, he won't (At least as far as the development is going, it is perfect). We can't talk much about World Background, everyone already knows the original work so it is not necessary to describe too much. But you will be surprised by the amount of cool laws and questions in the UA entrance test. Basically, your novel is a Golden Piece. Evolving to Masterpiece only if you write more than 100K words.
I really liked it, the only thing I wish was added was photos of the characters and items that the MC receives π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Iβve never seen a main character like this in a fanfic itβs definitely great deserves all 5 stars
the main character is not cold-blooded and intriguing, but simply someone who suffers from a lack of attention and who reacts too violently if they communicate with him only a little more politely, he immediately begins to feel love and affection, if you talk to him normally, apparently in childhood he was not loved and just humiliated if, from simple politeness, butterflies begin to flutter in his stomach and he begins to feel something in his heart, cringe
Mc is a calm-headed and scheming freak. No, not from Earth, no knowledge of plot either. Harem is the reason why I read. But let's hope he won't play them like tools... Sigh... cus it looks like he will. Nevermind... Right, this Fanfic's written style is different than usual ones. Try it out yourself, you're the one who has to read it either way... Let's hope it won't be dropped. Good luck, Author!
The very beginning is pretty good I think it have big potential I liked it @justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath@justwantgooddeath
awesome so far, the mc is unlike any MHA mc ive seen before and its already got me hooked and we arent even at UA yet
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