I let go of my saber, the weapon clattering unceremoniously to the ground as I drop onto my behind, utterly exhausted. My entire body feels like it's been put through the wringer, every muscle aching from the relentless sparring. Despite the bruises and the fatigue, a sigh of contentment escapes my lips.
"This day was a lot of fun," I admit, looking up at Ayame with a tired smile.
She raises an eyebrow, clearly surprised by my reaction. "Fun? I thought you'd be beyond furious with me after all that."
I shake my head, still expending great effort to catch my breath. "I did kind of know that your retribution was coming after those comments I made earlier, but you definitely surprised me with that ridiculously condescending bandage get-up. That was… a bit much, even for you."
Please let me know your thoughts on how I handled Ayame in this scene. I always wanted her to be her own person, not a simple harem member that's here to make the MC shine brighter than ever. That's why I've given her traits that I believe an actual woman in her situation might have, which causes her to clash with Quinlan on occasions, but at the same time I don't want her to appear annoying or hostile to the readers, because she is just a headstrong person with her own beliefs- just like Quinlan. At the end of the day each consider the other person very important.