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There is only 6 chapters, and I have been sucked into the story since the beginning. I can't wait to read more!!!
LV 1
The story is great. Definitely a catchy hook. The structure of the story is great as well. I do want to keep reading as it has me wanting more. Having a editor or someone go over to catch those pesky mistakes that most people miss would also be a good idea.
LV 11 ![Badge]()
There is only 6 chapters, and I have been sucked into the story since the beginning. I can't wait to read more!!!
The story is great. Definitely a catchy hook. The structure of the story is great as well. I do want to keep reading as it has me wanting more. Having a editor or someone go over to catch those pesky mistakes that most people miss would also be a good idea.