5Reviews
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
This is actually a good story, but somehow, the views are too few. Add real chapter titles instead of simply 'Chapter 1,' 'Chapter 2,' etc. I think that will solve the issue. Other readers are too lazy to read everything just to know the content of a chapter. Adding titles gives them some context about the content of the chapter beforehand. And please update this novel, it's been a month since this was updated. I really love this novel, so pleaseee... 馃ズ
A hist贸ria 茅 muito boa, tem uma 贸tima personagem, um cen谩rio legal, espera que essa hist贸ria continue a ser atualizada. S贸 gostaria de saber se essa hist贸ria tem mais cap铆tulo no seu patreon Se tiver avisa por favor
This needs to continue or be updating more. The premise is creative and the situations are so much better and hotter than 99% of the ntr novels online. Gonna give this a 5 star cause it actually gives me a tingle this novel unlike other ones. Please update or notify me where i can get the future chapters.
I know this is one of your least read novels and that others are doing better but please update every now and then. Depictions of scenes and the whole concept is hot af. Do not really care which direction you take the story but updates would be cool. Going through all of the donation goals including reveals and foreplay is a great touch as well. Giving 5 stars to help out
This is actually a good story, but somehow, the views are too few. Add real chapter titles instead of simply 'Chapter 1,' 'Chapter 2,' etc. I think that will solve the issue. Other readers are too lazy to read everything just to know the content of a chapter. Adding titles gives them some context about the content of the chapter beforehand. And please update this novel, it's been a month since this was updated. I really love this novel, so pleaseee... 馃ズ
A hist贸ria 茅 muito boa, tem uma 贸tima personagem, um cen谩rio legal, espera que essa hist贸ria continue a ser atualizada. S贸 gostaria de saber se essa hist贸ria tem mais cap铆tulo no seu patreon Se tiver avisa por favor
This needs to continue or be updating more. The premise is creative and the situations are so much better and hotter than 99% of the ntr novels online. Gonna give this a 5 star cause it actually gives me a tingle this novel unlike other ones. Please update or notify me where i can get the future chapters.
I know this is one of your least read novels and that others are doing better but please update every now and then. Depictions of scenes and the whole concept is hot af. Do not really care which direction you take the story but updates would be cool. Going through all of the donation goals including reveals and foreplay is a great touch as well. Giving 5 stars to help out
this is honestly greatly writin hopfully this is not a droped novel.