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Frowfy

Author here. Let's discuss important things first. This is terror and mystery and can be uncomfortable for some readers. The protagonist shares a body with Wednesday, as the title says. Don't read it if this makes you uncomfortable. I'm using it to practice dark humor and action, and I am a total newbie with 1 month of experience. The timeline is original, inspired by animations and series. Updates: every three days (can change depending on problems in real life). Official release: 07/08/2024 (dd/mm/YYYY).

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Hyper_FromDK

can't wait for more, it starts out easy to understand. then it turns abit darker and harder to follow at first before it starts to make sense. TY for this wonderful work can't wait to see Enid at some point cuddle with Wednesday and Thursday

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Dreamy_C

Love the story but I wish it would update more frequently

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TheAuthorKami

After reading this fanfic up to the last written chapter, this was my conclusion: What did the author have in mind when writing that lousy arc? Sorry if it sounds offensive, but it's the truth. The only thing that kept me from ignoring this novel were the first 5 chapters and the trope itself. But after that? Boom: 9+ chapters with a plot that was clearly pulled out of nowhere. It makes no sense, it's boring, and the most infuriating thing is that it seems endless. God! I'm even sure there are more chapters to come with this arc.

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Max_I_4248

Looks good. But: 1) The hero is either a guy or a girl. At least "his description" that he can't decide is confusing and annoying. On the other hand, he is revealed as a guy like my slippers... A murky, unclear character. 2) The last scenes-hallucinations are described well, funny. But they feel somehow raw and useless. It seems that they lack meaning, construction.

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Mohamed_Lazaar_5443

No es mi taza de te, y una trama demasiado rebuscada, ¿recuerdas es una niña de ni siquiera 3 años ?, y a toda la gente que dice q le gusta es solo porq es un fanfic de miércoles.

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

this work is incredible, the comedy, the dynamics between the two in the same body was very good (by the way, I hope they continue in the same body for at least 100 chapters, as the cover suggests that they separate), it's very fun to read and he still doesn't accept this weird family, it's also very well done, my only "complaint" about this work so far is that the update schedule isn't daily, other than that it's perfect.

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Quem_Matou_Owen

Gostei da história, embora o arco "preto" seja uma mudança de ritmo desagradável eu ainda considero uma história com uma premissa muito boa e interessante.

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Kemal_Kuku

noiceeee storyyyy . . . . ..

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sotulio

I love it But I didn't quite understand the last chapters I hope it becomes clearer later on what's happening But the story has a lot of potential, so I give it my 5 stars.

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Sergio_Navarrete

Pretty good start. Keep it up author!

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vaicomerseumorcego

eu realmente gostei muito dessa história principalmente como é a relação de wednesday e tuesday

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Buccas

I really like how the author has created the dynamic between Thursday(mc) and Wednesday. Another part I like is the fact that the mc has character progression. btw I’m really looking forward to the school arc and is hoping to see some nice interactions.

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NagiToad

I don't know why this was recommended to me and I don't know how all I do know is that I really love how this story is going so far. Within 24 hours of reading this I have checked about 8 or 9 times to see if it had been updated. While I couldn't really connect with the prologue that well for some reason the first chapter beyond had me captivated and enthralled. The writing is great and can clearly portray what the author wanted to tell us The comedy is amazing and doesn't feel overwhelming and forced in the story like some others The idea itself is fantastic and the interactions between Tuesday and Wednesday is wonderful The chapters themselves have a nice length so they don't feel too short or too long The only flaw I can find in the story (in my opinion ) is the lack of chapters this has which I'm sure will be a non issue in the future. A few things to note 1. I haven't watched Wednesday Addams I have seen the old movie about it so I know a baseline of the family though even if you have little to no knowledge of the characters prior I'm sure you'll be able to understand them quite quickly from the author's description 2. Please do check out the Author's other fanfic about Steven universe (I'm not even a fan of SU but I enjoyed it very much) 3. If I were to truly rate this with a comment it would just be the word perfect however I know that when people are looking at reviews the 5 star reviews with little explanation on why they like it are the worst so i wanted to explain my review Sorry if there were any typos or grammatical errors as I'm writing on my phone and writing what comes to mind for this review Keep up the good work author and hopefully you can shelter all my stones as they're all going to reside here from now on

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CatInBox

i really like the idea and so far its well executed so i cant wait for more. im also interested in how other characters will interact with wednesday/tuesday

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Grey_Mason

I love this work and the relationship between all the characters

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YoDarki

More More More More More More More More

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Omega_Mystery

I like the idea behind this story I only have a few suggestions.it might be a problem for both Wednesday and Tuesday to agree on a person to date so my suggestion is to have a Wednesday x Tuesday pairing. the reason being that I love their interactions with each other and it kind of makes sense. it would also be kind of interesting if Wednesday is super possessive of Tuesday.

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YoDarki

interesante necesito más capiítulos ahhh

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WalAcht57

I really like the idea and I can’t even explain why but I immediately got hooked on this ff. I hope it doesn’t get dropped

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Binge_Reader69

seems really cool so far, i just hope its updated often and the childhood part is small, keep up the good work author

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meHzyk

I really enjoy gender-swapped fanfics, I just hope the protagonist doesn't forget that he's a man internally and ends up with girls. stay strong and don't give up please, also try to do some more 18+ scenes if you can...

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Frowfy

Author here. Let's discuss important things first. This is terror and mystery and can be uncomfortable for some readers. The protagonist shares a body with Wednesday, as the title says. Don't read it if this makes you uncomfortable. I'm using it to practice dark humor and action, and I am a total newbie with 1 month of experience. The timeline is original, inspired by animations and series. Updates: every three days (can change depending on problems in real life). Official release: 07/08/2024 (dd/mm/YYYY).

4mth
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Hyper_FromDK

can't wait for more, it starts out easy to understand. then it turns abit darker and harder to follow at first before it starts to make sense. TY for this wonderful work can't wait to see Enid at some point cuddle with Wednesday and Thursday

2mth
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Dreamy_C

Love the story but I wish it would update more frequently

2mth
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TheAuthorKami

After reading this fanfic up to the last written chapter, this was my conclusion: What did the author have in mind when writing that lousy arc? Sorry if it sounds offensive, but it's the truth. The only thing that kept me from ignoring this novel were the first 5 chapters and the trope itself. But after that? Boom: 9+ chapters with a plot that was clearly pulled out of nowhere. It makes no sense, it's boring, and the most infuriating thing is that it seems endless. God! I'm even sure there are more chapters to come with this arc.

2mth
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Max_I_4248

Looks good. But: 1) The hero is either a guy or a girl. At least "his description" that he can't decide is confusing and annoying. On the other hand, he is revealed as a guy like my slippers... A murky, unclear character. 2) The last scenes-hallucinations are described well, funny. But they feel somehow raw and useless. It seems that they lack meaning, construction.

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3mth
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Mohamed_Lazaar_5443

No es mi taza de te, y una trama demasiado rebuscada, ¿recuerdas es una niña de ni siquiera 3 años ?, y a toda la gente que dice q le gusta es solo porq es un fanfic de miércoles.

3mth
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gustavo_hhhhdsd

this work is incredible, the comedy, the dynamics between the two in the same body was very good (by the way, I hope they continue in the same body for at least 100 chapters, as the cover suggests that they separate), it's very fun to read and he still doesn't accept this weird family, it's also very well done, my only "complaint" about this work so far is that the update schedule isn't daily, other than that it's perfect.

3mth
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Quem_Matou_Owen

Gostei da história, embora o arco "preto" seja uma mudança de ritmo desagradável eu ainda considero uma história com uma premissa muito boa e interessante.

3mth
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Kemal_Kuku

noiceeee storyyyy . . . . ..

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3mth
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sotulio

I love it But I didn't quite understand the last chapters I hope it becomes clearer later on what's happening But the story has a lot of potential, so I give it my 5 stars.

3mth
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Sergio_Navarrete

Pretty good start. Keep it up author!

3mth
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vaicomerseumorcego

eu realmente gostei muito dessa história principalmente como é a relação de wednesday e tuesday

4mth
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Buccas

I really like how the author has created the dynamic between Thursday(mc) and Wednesday. Another part I like is the fact that the mc has character progression. btw I’m really looking forward to the school arc and is hoping to see some nice interactions.

4mth
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NagiToad

I don't know why this was recommended to me and I don't know how all I do know is that I really love how this story is going so far. Within 24 hours of reading this I have checked about 8 or 9 times to see if it had been updated. While I couldn't really connect with the prologue that well for some reason the first chapter beyond had me captivated and enthralled. The writing is great and can clearly portray what the author wanted to tell us The comedy is amazing and doesn't feel overwhelming and forced in the story like some others The idea itself is fantastic and the interactions between Tuesday and Wednesday is wonderful The chapters themselves have a nice length so they don't feel too short or too long The only flaw I can find in the story (in my opinion ) is the lack of chapters this has which I'm sure will be a non issue in the future. A few things to note 1. I haven't watched Wednesday Addams I have seen the old movie about it so I know a baseline of the family though even if you have little to no knowledge of the characters prior I'm sure you'll be able to understand them quite quickly from the author's description 2. Please do check out the Author's other fanfic about Steven universe (I'm not even a fan of SU but I enjoyed it very much) 3. If I were to truly rate this with a comment it would just be the word perfect however I know that when people are looking at reviews the 5 star reviews with little explanation on why they like it are the worst so i wanted to explain my review Sorry if there were any typos or grammatical errors as I'm writing on my phone and writing what comes to mind for this review Keep up the good work author and hopefully you can shelter all my stones as they're all going to reside here from now on

4mth
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CatInBox

i really like the idea and so far its well executed so i cant wait for more. im also interested in how other characters will interact with wednesday/tuesday

4mth
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Grey_Mason

I love this work and the relationship between all the characters

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4mth
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YoDarki

More More More More More More More More

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4mth
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Omega_Mystery

I like the idea behind this story I only have a few suggestions.it might be a problem for both Wednesday and Tuesday to agree on a person to date so my suggestion is to have a Wednesday x Tuesday pairing. the reason being that I love their interactions with each other and it kind of makes sense. it would also be kind of interesting if Wednesday is super possessive of Tuesday.

4mth
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YoDarki

interesante necesito más capiítulos ahhh

4mth
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WalAcht57

I really like the idea and I can’t even explain why but I immediately got hooked on this ff. I hope it doesn’t get dropped

4mth
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Binge_Reader69

seems really cool so far, i just hope its updated often and the childhood part is small, keep up the good work author

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4mth
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meHzyk

I really enjoy gender-swapped fanfics, I just hope the protagonist doesn't forget that he's a man internally and ends up with girls. stay strong and don't give up please, also try to do some more 18+ scenes if you can...

4mth
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