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Hey man ! The thing that I love with your fic is how it is realistic. The way Aegon thought before becoming king for example. And I have just a question. Does this fic is going to deal with the White Walkers ?
This is a amazing story, it has good grammar and a compelling story. The only thing that I have a problem with is it lack chapters. For me this book makes me feel like aegon, in a way. It makes the SI aspect of this story feel real. Overall I would rate this fanfic a solid 9/10. I wish the author the best of luck, and I hope and wish for more chapters.
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It’s great so far 3 chapters in. It’s been 16 hours after said update and now my only complaint is not having 50 chapters to binge read.
It is a really good story I hope you continue it as I’ve read quite a few others with transmigration and reincarnations on the blacks side but rarely have I ever seen or read a green side SI
Shameless 5 star review? Couldn't be me. Anyways, feel free to question me here about the future of this fanfic. Keep in mind, I am not an English Native speaker, so errors are bound to be made. Hope you enjoy the story.
story writing is good but for a reincarnated mc aegon seems like he doesn't know anything which can be seen when he is not sure what to do after his father's death , he should have been prepared for it as he himself tells that his side will move for him to be king even if his father didn't name him heir . And the emotional bullshit is too much it was good first but after every conversation don't give 4-5 paragraph for emotional turmoil it makes story boring for readers . The rest like we saw story writing is good just reduce extra unnecessary paragraph and make aegon composed at least.
Hey man ! The thing that I love with your fic is how it is realistic. The way Aegon thought before becoming king for example. And I have just a question. Does this fic is going to deal with the White Walkers ?
This is a amazing story, it has good grammar and a compelling story. The only thing that I have a problem with is it lack chapters. For me this book makes me feel like aegon, in a way. It makes the SI aspect of this story feel real. Overall I would rate this fanfic a solid 9/10. I wish the author the best of luck, and I hope and wish for more chapters.
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It’s great so far 3 chapters in. It’s been 16 hours after said update and now my only complaint is not having 50 chapters to binge read.
It is a really good story I hope you continue it as I’ve read quite a few others with transmigration and reincarnations on the blacks side but rarely have I ever seen or read a green side SI
Shameless 5 star review? Couldn't be me. Anyways, feel free to question me here about the future of this fanfic. Keep in mind, I am not an English Native speaker, so errors are bound to be made. Hope you enjoy the story.
story writing is good but for a reincarnated mc aegon seems like he doesn't know anything which can be seen when he is not sure what to do after his father's death , he should have been prepared for it as he himself tells that his side will move for him to be king even if his father didn't name him heir . And the emotional bullshit is too much it was good first but after every conversation don't give 4-5 paragraph for emotional turmoil it makes story boring for readers . The rest like we saw story writing is good just reduce extra unnecessary paragraph and make aegon composed at least.