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Untagged harem so obviously it's trash. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Harem or Non~Harem................?????????????????????????????????????????????????? I will later reviewing this properly after you answer me questions @author~san
basicamente no le entiendo nada, es muy apresurado, caotico y si no sabes de que estan hablando te jodes. no es de mi agrado.
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Well, I like everything so far but as a super fan of the Pathfinder saga, seeing that I could see it reflected in a Fic made me feel that I deserved to give my review and here is my support to the author, thank you!
The story is really good. The way you match/adapt characters from different universes is pretty nice. The dialogue so far of each characters really reflects their unique attitudes and beliefs. The grammar and writing and also good and readable. Keep it up! Hoping for more chapters :)
For the foreseeable future, the story will increasingly incorporate scientific ideas. As a result, it may become chaotic because, by the time I translate these ideas into a story, I may not have sufficient knowledge on certain topics. It might become much more chaotic and challenging to read, as I will be more focused on Quantum Science, including Physics, Biology, and Psychology. In short, this story will be similar to Past Life Returner in terms of its economic side.
Untagged harem so obviously it's trash. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Harem or Non~Harem................?????????????????????????????????????????????????? I will later reviewing this properly after you answer me questions @author~san
basicamente no le entiendo nada, es muy apresurado, caotico y si no sabes de que estan hablando te jodes. no es de mi agrado.
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Well, I like everything so far but as a super fan of the Pathfinder saga, seeing that I could see it reflected in a Fic made me feel that I deserved to give my review and here is my support to the author, thank you!
The story is really good. The way you match/adapt characters from different universes is pretty nice. The dialogue so far of each characters really reflects their unique attitudes and beliefs. The grammar and writing and also good and readable. Keep it up! Hoping for more chapters :)
For the foreseeable future, the story will increasingly incorporate scientific ideas. As a result, it may become chaotic because, by the time I translate these ideas into a story, I may not have sufficient knowledge on certain topics. It might become much more chaotic and challenging to read, as I will be more focused on Quantum Science, including Physics, Biology, and Psychology. In short, this story will be similar to Past Life Returner in terms of its economic side.