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Write a reviewI think I found my favorite author and book. From the first 20 chapters, I realized that the author and I have the same way of thinking. Smart MC OP MC Ruthless MC against enemies Handsome MC But it would be better if it had a love story because being handsome is useless without a woman.
Writing Quality is like a Summary, I dont see any difference, there are hardly 10 dialogues between MC and any character, except that consciousness of Universe , Who literally grants everything, There is no point in this Novel, No unique thing, The author stuffs the MC will all the things needed in Magic Sword World, and As well as stuff from other World. Fast Paced is good, but no description of the scene is not good, One sentence he dies and the next LINE, he will be Wandering the Universe Space
Reveal SpoilerYeah, so for the relatively new readers, go ahead and read this. Dont read too many comments and reviews as it will definitely corrupt your mind. Those are old fogeys who are tired of seeing the same thing over and over again. As for me I am at chap 37 and the only problem I have is {Handsome this, Handsome that}, {Master is beautiful but still cant compare to MC}, {Vice principal is fyn but Anthony is leagues ahead}. Reading this kind of thing makes me lose braincells and wonder how shameless and glazing the author is in real life. Lastly, this one is for the author, can you please stop breaking immersion by putting those brackets to explain stuff, it can be off-putting sometimes.
Reveal Spoilerits a good read if you like op MCs my onl complain is MC is way to egotistacal and focused on looks it should be a tag or mentioned in the synopsis not just say handsome i am not kidding the author can not go 5 chapters without mentioning looks, I wouldnt care a whole lot if this was some type of romance novel which it isnt because the author is constantly saying despite the mc complaining repeatedly that he has no gf or harem. Im not joking about the looks thing its very very terrible in this book for there to be no romance like its just constant look how good looking the mc is or the mc keeps looking at his reflection saying how good looking he is others saying the mc is good looking look how good the mc looks in this clothing its annoying to scroll past paragrahs of how the mc is good looking. Other then that its okay justa sit back and read without thinking to much story
Okay this is my second review of the book as i kept going and then i noticed at my recent review and I felt i was biased as i kept going on I realize mc is suppose the be the most op motherfucker ever it’s in the title😭😭 and his subordinate being op is no except so yeah. A hidden gem just ignore the hate. If you’re here for op mc you’re at the right place.
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First of all I’m caught up with latest chaps and it’s a really good novel if you like OP MCs , even more so with a world building that match his OP powers , usually authors who create OP MCs tries to nerf them halfway somehow to last longer or other characters to keep up because their world building isn’t adapted. In this one it’s not the case at all there’s many cultivation rank , diverse abilities , all the powers you would like to see also unique races a good lore. The main character anthorny null is relatable and likeable (one of the best op MCs I’ve read). Author also is constant with updates , many interesting characters and a loving family (breaking the "cold family" trope). When reading of you think some cliche will appear like playing the pig to eat the tiger , it won’t! MC likes to show off and yeah ofc he’s not using his full power on ants but it’s satisfying to read , there’s cool fights honestly became one of my favourite novels
At the beginning it caught my attention but as it goes on it just felt different especially when he got those “subordinates” if author just wanted to give him friends he should have just done that. Yeah the way he treat his subordinates is like friends even after all this talk about them listening to every word. Yeah he got not 1 not 2 but 10 and the worst part they all got a system his freaking surbodinates like what. btw I’m at chap 78 depends on how it goes I’ll increase it later.
This is my first review ever since I Joined in ‘17 First off this book has been amazing. I’m a huge fan of overpowered characters. This book explores themes of struggle, redemption, and the pursuit of power, as our MC sets out to conquer the world that once crushed him. The MC’s rise is both a personal and literal journey to stand above everyone, challenging his fate and the very forces that held him down. Overall, this book is really entertaining. The book is quite litterly a source of dopamine stimulation.
Honestly speaking I’d wanna be glazed and explained by the author, his attention to detail and creativity are out of this world, W book
This is a great, fun read. The MC is OP for sure. The action is pretty well written in my view. The MC is aloof at times and kind of hard to decipher but also sarcastic and narcissistic, which makes his personality kind of funny for his interaction with others or watching his thought process. It's is a really amazing story with a great world that is developing nicely. It's worthy of a read no matter what
Your story shows great potential, but there are areas that could benefit from further development. The characters currently feel a bit distant, and their emotions aren't fully conveyed through dialogue or description. Adding more detail about how they feel and react in different situations will help bring them to life. Similarly, descriptions of the environment, such as the appearance of the room and the characters themselves, can enhance the immersion and differentiate personalities. While the writing quality could be improved, this is something that naturally comes with practice. Keep working at it, and with time, your writing will only get better! Stay motivated, and remember that every chapter is a step forward in your growth as an author. 🌹🌹🌹
Author, your novel has great potential. It has good world background, story,plot, etc.But your writing style has problem. Every chapter you write recently(last 50 chapter)all has unnecessary word filled the 80% of story it's feel like reading a text book not feel like a novel.In a novel there should be character to character conversation not a third person describe like telling us children story.so, author I suggests yo to change your Writing style
i haven't read it but works 20 hours? still has time to read novels? now i was just being a pain so ignore me please cause i just wrote it because i can
Highly recommend this novel for those who are bored reading the same cliche novels !! author just made the type of novel that we wanted to write at some point in our reading journey about an OP mc . mc has many powerful and useful skills that we thought would be nice to have for many mc's , i came accross many skills in this novel that I thought would be nice and not used in other novels. author can you add a skill where mc can know a person's emotion towards him with a color for each or something ( I saw this skill in some manga , which i actually liked ) actually mind reading should be a nice skill too but it will be boring if mc can read others mind.
Bro story,plot,world building everything is good but it's too slow peace becuse of that it's sometime feel boring like chapter 171-177 has description which if you wish you can wright it 2 chapter but you waste 8 chapter free pass
Dude after 150 chapter the author just changed his writing style. Its fees like I am reading some ancient text or something. Like how should I say this, it's like this line here ' The Null Estate loomed ahead, an indomitable fortress of heritage and might, carved into the heart of the rugged valley' Its presence exuded an aura of silent authority, an ancient testament to the power and lineage that guarded it, standing steadfast as if to shield against the encroaching shadows cast by recent upheavals.The estate's entrance unfurled like the maw of a slumbering giant.' I mean you could have just said the' null estate' that it feels like he is trying to fill the chapters with unnecessary words to expand them.
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Reveal Spoilercan you be more shameless hm the writing is medicare at best you have mc with huge ego non-natural relationship with family ( like saying that grandpa this grandpa why not use their own name ,give them time to develop than rushing it who was mc ,his former parents (if he have ) what was the former world what kind of person was he his age before to know his maturity no world building not character development (mother father who are they no real conversation ) not great power system AND. absolutely illogical thought system of characters father leaving for many years and act like it's normal at reunion his mother an dmaids not noticing his difference its'sjust saddenningbut hey it's web novel as long as you have the fake audience it will make you king better start to proof read and REALLY read other best authors work like shadow slave ( cuz writing is good world building etc..) ,Atticus odyssey too p.s don't delete this one too though[img=disgusted]
redo of my review after catching up and author has improved ngl... The overpowered fights , the freakish displays of power and the no holding back , the author has been delivering recently!!!..... would love it if you just sneaked in a little romance here and there tho.... HEAR ME OUT ! HEAR ME OUT ! overall peak fiction once you get past the first 140- chapters (not that it was bad before but yk... wasn't peak) , good job author !
ok so after 100+ chapters I'm updating my review because I got alot of conflicts with this novel , Firstly , I would just like to say that the writing is great and it would honestly be a great read for those who like OP MCs ( like myself) , I love the concepts from solo leveling and the gojo powers. The few things that throw me off in this novel all involve the mc , HE makes this novel feel so much like a CN. constantly showing the aura of an F rank , I got no problem with that since he still uses full power in his battles BUT LEAVING OBVIOUS THREATS TO BUILD because of his actions ( of lack of action) just makes me so mad bro (eg = when he let everyone believe that he had an artifact which can store mana) like is saying he has an irregularly large mana pool so difficult ?. And the constant lying to his caring and loving parents irks me , I understand not telling them about his reincarnation and the system since that would just ruin the story but lying about his actual strength for over 100 chapters ? lying about his mana being from an artifact ? constantly hiding explainable stuff from them ? it's just unnecessary and disgusts me
reads just like a Chinese novel with a little less power hiding, mc has a huge ego and there is 0 romance, bro is maiden less. oh and mc is best looking guy around! oh and did i forgot to mention mc is soooo good looking! oh wow! look guys!! the mc is sooo handsome guys!!! (you get the point)
Im torn. on one hand, the book is really good. (other than the odd fixation on having the scale of everything seemingly made to be Kilometers, which I question if the author really grasps the scale of how large that is... But it doesn't make the story bad to read, so im ignoring it.) I also appreciate the focus on the story and not making it a harem. pacing feels a bit off at times but overall enjoyable read. On the other hand, this story is about as money hungry as an author could ever be... half the authors' messages are asking for gifts and extra money donations. I understand wanting to make a profit off a book, totally understandable. But after a certain point, it's just ridiculous. I usually buy privilege chapters on stories I enjoy, but this is probably the first story in at least 3 months I refuse to do so. the price for 2 chapters ahead is 50 (most authors had it for unlock cost +1 but sure, thats fine), but then unlocking the 3 after it is over 300? Like seriously? Im all for supporting authors, but that is just insane. Dont even get me started on tier 3 that jumps to over 800 coins.
Bro Academy arc now feel dull add some adventure arc in his world or his adventure in another world
I think I found my favorite author and book. From the first 20 chapters, I realized that the author and I have the same way of thinking. Smart MC OP MC Ruthless MC against enemies Handsome MC But it would be better if it had a love story because being handsome is useless without a woman.
Writing Quality is like a Summary, I dont see any difference, there are hardly 10 dialogues between MC and any character, except that consciousness of Universe , Who literally grants everything, There is no point in this Novel, No unique thing, The author stuffs the MC will all the things needed in Magic Sword World, and As well as stuff from other World. Fast Paced is good, but no description of the scene is not good, One sentence he dies and the next LINE, he will be Wandering the Universe Space
Reveal SpoilerYeah, so for the relatively new readers, go ahead and read this. Dont read too many comments and reviews as it will definitely corrupt your mind. Those are old fogeys who are tired of seeing the same thing over and over again. As for me I am at chap 37 and the only problem I have is {Handsome this, Handsome that}, {Master is beautiful but still cant compare to MC}, {Vice principal is fyn but Anthony is leagues ahead}. Reading this kind of thing makes me lose braincells and wonder how shameless and glazing the author is in real life. Lastly, this one is for the author, can you please stop breaking immersion by putting those brackets to explain stuff, it can be off-putting sometimes.
Reveal Spoilerits a good read if you like op MCs my onl complain is MC is way to egotistacal and focused on looks it should be a tag or mentioned in the synopsis not just say handsome i am not kidding the author can not go 5 chapters without mentioning looks, I wouldnt care a whole lot if this was some type of romance novel which it isnt because the author is constantly saying despite the mc complaining repeatedly that he has no gf or harem. Im not joking about the looks thing its very very terrible in this book for there to be no romance like its just constant look how good looking the mc is or the mc keeps looking at his reflection saying how good looking he is others saying the mc is good looking look how good the mc looks in this clothing its annoying to scroll past paragrahs of how the mc is good looking. Other then that its okay justa sit back and read without thinking to much story
Okay this is my second review of the book as i kept going and then i noticed at my recent review and I felt i was biased as i kept going on I realize mc is suppose the be the most op motherfucker ever it’s in the title😭😭 and his subordinate being op is no except so yeah. A hidden gem just ignore the hate. If you’re here for op mc you’re at the right place.
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First of all I’m caught up with latest chaps and it’s a really good novel if you like OP MCs , even more so with a world building that match his OP powers , usually authors who create OP MCs tries to nerf them halfway somehow to last longer or other characters to keep up because their world building isn’t adapted. In this one it’s not the case at all there’s many cultivation rank , diverse abilities , all the powers you would like to see also unique races a good lore. The main character anthorny null is relatable and likeable (one of the best op MCs I’ve read). Author also is constant with updates , many interesting characters and a loving family (breaking the "cold family" trope). When reading of you think some cliche will appear like playing the pig to eat the tiger , it won’t! MC likes to show off and yeah ofc he’s not using his full power on ants but it’s satisfying to read , there’s cool fights honestly became one of my favourite novels
At the beginning it caught my attention but as it goes on it just felt different especially when he got those “subordinates” if author just wanted to give him friends he should have just done that. Yeah the way he treat his subordinates is like friends even after all this talk about them listening to every word. Yeah he got not 1 not 2 but 10 and the worst part they all got a system his freaking surbodinates like what. btw I’m at chap 78 depends on how it goes I’ll increase it later.
This is my first review ever since I Joined in ‘17 First off this book has been amazing. I’m a huge fan of overpowered characters. This book explores themes of struggle, redemption, and the pursuit of power, as our MC sets out to conquer the world that once crushed him. The MC’s rise is both a personal and literal journey to stand above everyone, challenging his fate and the very forces that held him down. Overall, this book is really entertaining. The book is quite litterly a source of dopamine stimulation.
Honestly speaking I’d wanna be glazed and explained by the author, his attention to detail and creativity are out of this world, W book
This is a great, fun read. The MC is OP for sure. The action is pretty well written in my view. The MC is aloof at times and kind of hard to decipher but also sarcastic and narcissistic, which makes his personality kind of funny for his interaction with others or watching his thought process. It's is a really amazing story with a great world that is developing nicely. It's worthy of a read no matter what
Your story shows great potential, but there are areas that could benefit from further development. The characters currently feel a bit distant, and their emotions aren't fully conveyed through dialogue or description. Adding more detail about how they feel and react in different situations will help bring them to life. Similarly, descriptions of the environment, such as the appearance of the room and the characters themselves, can enhance the immersion and differentiate personalities. While the writing quality could be improved, this is something that naturally comes with practice. Keep working at it, and with time, your writing will only get better! Stay motivated, and remember that every chapter is a step forward in your growth as an author. 🌹🌹🌹
Author, your novel has great potential. It has good world background, story,plot, etc.But your writing style has problem. Every chapter you write recently(last 50 chapter)all has unnecessary word filled the 80% of story it's feel like reading a text book not feel like a novel.In a novel there should be character to character conversation not a third person describe like telling us children story.so, author I suggests yo to change your Writing style
i haven't read it but works 20 hours? still has time to read novels? now i was just being a pain so ignore me please cause i just wrote it because i can
Highly recommend this novel for those who are bored reading the same cliche novels !! author just made the type of novel that we wanted to write at some point in our reading journey about an OP mc . mc has many powerful and useful skills that we thought would be nice to have for many mc's , i came accross many skills in this novel that I thought would be nice and not used in other novels. author can you add a skill where mc can know a person's emotion towards him with a color for each or something ( I saw this skill in some manga , which i actually liked ) actually mind reading should be a nice skill too but it will be boring if mc can read others mind.
Bro story,plot,world building everything is good but it's too slow peace becuse of that it's sometime feel boring like chapter 171-177 has description which if you wish you can wright it 2 chapter but you waste 8 chapter free pass
Dude after 150 chapter the author just changed his writing style. Its fees like I am reading some ancient text or something. Like how should I say this, it's like this line here ' The Null Estate loomed ahead, an indomitable fortress of heritage and might, carved into the heart of the rugged valley' Its presence exuded an aura of silent authority, an ancient testament to the power and lineage that guarded it, standing steadfast as if to shield against the encroaching shadows cast by recent upheavals.The estate's entrance unfurled like the maw of a slumbering giant.' I mean you could have just said the' null estate' that it feels like he is trying to fill the chapters with unnecessary words to expand them.
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Reveal Spoilercan you be more shameless hm the writing is medicare at best you have mc with huge ego non-natural relationship with family ( like saying that grandpa this grandpa why not use their own name ,give them time to develop than rushing it who was mc ,his former parents (if he have ) what was the former world what kind of person was he his age before to know his maturity no world building not character development (mother father who are they no real conversation ) not great power system AND. absolutely illogical thought system of characters father leaving for many years and act like it's normal at reunion his mother an dmaids not noticing his difference its'sjust saddenningbut hey it's web novel as long as you have the fake audience it will make you king better start to proof read and REALLY read other best authors work like shadow slave ( cuz writing is good world building etc..) ,Atticus odyssey too p.s don't delete this one too though[img=disgusted]
redo of my review after catching up and author has improved ngl... The overpowered fights , the freakish displays of power and the no holding back , the author has been delivering recently!!!..... would love it if you just sneaked in a little romance here and there tho.... HEAR ME OUT ! HEAR ME OUT ! overall peak fiction once you get past the first 140- chapters (not that it was bad before but yk... wasn't peak) , good job author !
ok so after 100+ chapters I'm updating my review because I got alot of conflicts with this novel , Firstly , I would just like to say that the writing is great and it would honestly be a great read for those who like OP MCs ( like myself) , I love the concepts from solo leveling and the gojo powers. The few things that throw me off in this novel all involve the mc , HE makes this novel feel so much like a CN. constantly showing the aura of an F rank , I got no problem with that since he still uses full power in his battles BUT LEAVING OBVIOUS THREATS TO BUILD because of his actions ( of lack of action) just makes me so mad bro (eg = when he let everyone believe that he had an artifact which can store mana) like is saying he has an irregularly large mana pool so difficult ?. And the constant lying to his caring and loving parents irks me , I understand not telling them about his reincarnation and the system since that would just ruin the story but lying about his actual strength for over 100 chapters ? lying about his mana being from an artifact ? constantly hiding explainable stuff from them ? it's just unnecessary and disgusts me
reads just like a Chinese novel with a little less power hiding, mc has a huge ego and there is 0 romance, bro is maiden less. oh and mc is best looking guy around! oh and did i forgot to mention mc is soooo good looking! oh wow! look guys!! the mc is sooo handsome guys!!! (you get the point)
Im torn. on one hand, the book is really good. (other than the odd fixation on having the scale of everything seemingly made to be Kilometers, which I question if the author really grasps the scale of how large that is... But it doesn't make the story bad to read, so im ignoring it.) I also appreciate the focus on the story and not making it a harem. pacing feels a bit off at times but overall enjoyable read. On the other hand, this story is about as money hungry as an author could ever be... half the authors' messages are asking for gifts and extra money donations. I understand wanting to make a profit off a book, totally understandable. But after a certain point, it's just ridiculous. I usually buy privilege chapters on stories I enjoy, but this is probably the first story in at least 3 months I refuse to do so. the price for 2 chapters ahead is 50 (most authors had it for unlock cost +1 but sure, thats fine), but then unlocking the 3 after it is over 300? Like seriously? Im all for supporting authors, but that is just insane. Dont even get me started on tier 3 that jumps to over 800 coins.
Bro Academy arc now feel dull add some adventure arc in his world or his adventure in another world
A Gem if I should say the least. Give it a try