Reviews of My Elf System by PhoenixAsh - Webnovel

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Chris_Gill

Slice of life with some action. I would like a bit more detail on his training, but it was almost all in the 10 yr skip. My biggest issue is we know he is 10 years old but not sure how he looks. He looked 5 years old after a few days and then a 10 year skip. So did he not age for the first 5 years of the skip then start normal after that? Is 10 years old but equal to a 15 year old forest elf? This is one.miss as we do not get an actual description of the MC after the skip. The tournament was good, but phase one of day one was poorly written as there is no correlation to what was written and why his time was so long.

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Yueliang_Haizi

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

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SHADOW_IS_LIFE

Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO

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RagingMutant

Story is really good, so good that I bought the most expensive privilege tier both last month and at the beginning of this month. There have been 4 chapters put out since I bought privilege again. Unfortunately I can’t access any of them and only have access up to chapter 83/97. I don’t know why this is. Idk if the author is trying to stockpile more chapters for the next privilege tier so every “new” chapter is just going towards the next tier. Whatever it is if I don’t get any chapters this month because of it I probably won’t purchase privilege again. If you like the story I’d hold off on purchasing privilege until such a thing is resolved.

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Daoistj7KMDV

Bom livro [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DaoistWZ1F12

This book is very nice and interesting Everyone should try and read💗

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Sathish_Annarapu

It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

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Angelic_Throne80

Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

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Jordzfml_7

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

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Wrathdg

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

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Ahnaf_0435

hi can anyone recommend me novels like "village heads debauchery ","fullfilling my lustful fantasies","perversion douluo dalu","a perverts world" ,etc where the mc can do whatever he wants with anyone and no one would care. Thanks.

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lsfig
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Até agora gostei bastante da história achei legal boa 🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰

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Gaxam
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That's good, I like it, want more of this. But i need to know why I can read up to 45 chapters when there are 48 chapters? where are those 3 chapters?

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yofUcKyOu

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

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Valyrxa
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Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

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Lucky0_0

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

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Aayann_
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Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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Chris_Gill

Slice of life with some action. I would like a bit more detail on his training, but it was almost all in the 10 yr skip. My biggest issue is we know he is 10 years old but not sure how he looks. He looked 5 years old after a few days and then a 10 year skip. So did he not age for the first 5 years of the skip then start normal after that? Is 10 years old but equal to a 15 year old forest elf? This is one.miss as we do not get an actual description of the MC after the skip. The tournament was good, but phase one of day one was poorly written as there is no correlation to what was written and why his time was so long.

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Yueliang_Haizi

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

9d
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SHADOW_IS_LIFE

Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO

12d
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RagingMutant

Story is really good, so good that I bought the most expensive privilege tier both last month and at the beginning of this month. There have been 4 chapters put out since I bought privilege again. Unfortunately I can’t access any of them and only have access up to chapter 83/97. I don’t know why this is. Idk if the author is trying to stockpile more chapters for the next privilege tier so every “new” chapter is just going towards the next tier. Whatever it is if I don’t get any chapters this month because of it I probably won’t purchase privilege again. If you like the story I’d hold off on purchasing privilege until such a thing is resolved.

17d
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Daoistj7KMDV

Bom livro [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DaoistWZ1F12

This book is very nice and interesting Everyone should try and read💗

28d
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Sathish_Annarapu

It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

29d
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Angelic_Throne80

Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

29d
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Jordzfml_7

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

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Wrathdg

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

1mth
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Ahnaf_0435

hi can anyone recommend me novels like "village heads debauchery ","fullfilling my lustful fantasies","perversion douluo dalu","a perverts world" ,etc where the mc can do whatever he wants with anyone and no one would care. Thanks.

1mth
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lsfig
LV 1

Até agora gostei bastante da história achei legal boa 🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰

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Gaxam
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That's good, I like it, want more of this. But i need to know why I can read up to 45 chapters when there are 48 chapters? where are those 3 chapters?

1mth
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yofUcKyOu

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

1mth
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Valyrxa
LV 15 Badge

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

2mth
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Lucky0_0

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

2mth
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Aayann_
LV 14 Badge

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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2mth
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