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It is just what I wanted to read...I m so happy that finally there is a female lead book which does not revolve around love and male lead saving the damsel... Even all those so called strong female lead books dont have a fraction of this book. absolutely worthy of 5 stars. I have already read 200 chapters hope this is a long book. dont want it to end.
OMG, what a fantastic new find!! It’s a good thing my coins ran out because it’s 4am… oh bliss!!
too fast pace... read till ch 247 for free until i cant take it anymore... drop.. actually good world background but every FL winning & solution is too easy and too fast solved done >> move to next new problem/story/mission... whole pack compressed
Will there be romance? She seemed too detached. Although her family abandoned her, her brother was too small to understand, so I wished she would at least try to accept her brother after he even knowingly got used by her. But she cold heartedly discarded him. To her, it seems nothing matters...
This story pulls you in and you can't help but want more.👏 I wasn't expecting the word building and attention to every detail. It has been fun so far 😃. Keep it up author👍
I would rate this higher but the problem right now is the early chapters are all messed up. Ch 8 has about 1/4th the content compares to the other chapters and I believe alot of the beginning chapters are missing because of the fact a whole battle sequence that had yet to start mysteriously skipped to days after it happened ( there are no time skips listed either ). Ch 16 has half of ch 15 mixed into it ( The chapter title appears half way down ). Then you basically are tossed random character's names because you aren't introduced to them at all (I'm assuming these were the missing chapters) and the MC has talked to them multiple times before. Example: Liliana randomly comes to MC's work and kisses her on the cheek and they start talking about the business they do together but it's never mentioned prior to this. This book has potential if the author would go back and fix what they missed.
This story is great overall. The wording is good and the grammar is also good. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
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I liked the first couple chapters. It's not difficult for the story to pull you in right at the beginning. It also looks as though it has nice pacing. So yeah. DONE
So I’ve reached 100+ chaps already, and all I can say is absolutely chef kiss 😩💗 The world building is impeccable, character building even for some side character are rich with toughfullness, the storyline is progessing forward, there’s no chapter that feels like dragging some issue off, but the most important is I fell in love with MC, herself!!! 😩💗 her act and decisiveness over her life issue, despite some problems comes up or some pressing issue surfaced, the way she tackles it, so suave, cool asf!!! Honestly all I can say more is, she’s the real definition of “come back for revenge”. Don’t let her fragility fools you, the moment you let down your guard, you’re finished boy 🤠 in conclusion, I felt refreshed after binge read this! I need a mass update!! author nim 🫵😩🫶🏼 - Btw I felt compelled to write a review despite not my forte cuz I saw some people, did a review baselessly without any real words to describe this book, unfairly bringing down the rating by notch…. Sed ☹️
It is just what I wanted to read...I m so happy that finally there is a female lead book which does not revolve around love and male lead saving the damsel... Even all those so called strong female lead books dont have a fraction of this book. absolutely worthy of 5 stars. I have already read 200 chapters hope this is a long book. dont want it to end.
OMG, what a fantastic new find!! It’s a good thing my coins ran out because it’s 4am… oh bliss!!
too fast pace... read till ch 247 for free until i cant take it anymore... drop.. actually good world background but every FL winning & solution is too easy and too fast solved done >> move to next new problem/story/mission... whole pack compressed
Will there be romance? She seemed too detached. Although her family abandoned her, her brother was too small to understand, so I wished she would at least try to accept her brother after he even knowingly got used by her. But she cold heartedly discarded him. To her, it seems nothing matters...
This story pulls you in and you can't help but want more.👏 I wasn't expecting the word building and attention to every detail. It has been fun so far 😃. Keep it up author👍
I would rate this higher but the problem right now is the early chapters are all messed up. Ch 8 has about 1/4th the content compares to the other chapters and I believe alot of the beginning chapters are missing because of the fact a whole battle sequence that had yet to start mysteriously skipped to days after it happened ( there are no time skips listed either ). Ch 16 has half of ch 15 mixed into it ( The chapter title appears half way down ). Then you basically are tossed random character's names because you aren't introduced to them at all (I'm assuming these were the missing chapters) and the MC has talked to them multiple times before. Example: Liliana randomly comes to MC's work and kisses her on the cheek and they start talking about the business they do together but it's never mentioned prior to this. This book has potential if the author would go back and fix what they missed.
This story is great overall. The wording is good and the grammar is also good. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
I liked the first couple chapters. It's not difficult for the story to pull you in right at the beginning. It also looks as though it has nice pacing. So yeah. DONE
So I’ve reached 100+ chaps already, and all I can say is absolutely chef kiss 😩💗 The world building is impeccable, character building even for some side character are rich with toughfullness, the storyline is progessing forward, there’s no chapter that feels like dragging some issue off, but the most important is I fell in love with MC, herself!!! 😩💗 her act and decisiveness over her life issue, despite some problems comes up or some pressing issue surfaced, the way she tackles it, so suave, cool asf!!! Honestly all I can say more is, she’s the real definition of “come back for revenge”. Don’t let her fragility fools you, the moment you let down your guard, you’re finished boy 🤠 in conclusion, I felt refreshed after binge read this! I need a mass update!! author nim 🫵😩🫶🏼 - Btw I felt compelled to write a review despite not my forte cuz I saw some people, did a review baselessly without any real words to describe this book, unfairly bringing down the rating by notch…. Sed ☹️