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till 70-80 chapters was okay, but... shet happened, and he's left and right with criminals, thefts, missions, etc. no family chapters like is supposed to be with this title and few start chapters. it's just a joke of a novel.
very good story, it's fun reading it. a beautiful family of three all lovely God bless keep safe. keep it up.
Ending this train wreck at Chapter 299. Clearly WebNovel has taken the shortsighted route of buying the Novel and not investing in the author.
How come there are only two reviews, this is work of art. I like this novel very much. I finished free chapters in no time and even FPs that I have, but I don't have enough reading yet. I want to finish all the chapters It's that how good it Is for me. Kudous Author-san, you have done a great job. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
First and foremost sorry to author for some of my comments, I think I got to much brain damage from bad chines system novels. Now onto the novel. The novel is good and well written. It's a rather slow story so get straped for the long run. In my opinion it's a good read so give it a try.
The draw for me was the family aspect. I loved reading about the MC and his daughter. She was so adorable and a breath of fresh air. Knowing her bio mom wanted nothing to do with her bc she wanted to pursue an entertainment career, she really cherished Chen Yu. Father and daughter were just too adorable 🥰. Speaking of the bio mom, don’t get me started on her. Ugh, why can’t she just jump off the nearest bridge along with her mother 😒 The romance could use a lot of work bc the mc and the teacher seemed more like friends than romantic partners. I won’t say lovers bc even after they got the marriage license, the mc didn’t make a move on her. As the novel progressed, we see less and less of family and more about business. He’s entering cooking and survival competitions, race car races, becoming a doctor, etc. The heart of the story is supposed to be about family and sadly, this novel loses that, and with it the charm that drew me into the story. Good luck on your future writing endeavors ✌🏾
Reveal Spoiler till 70-80 chapters was okay, but... shet happened, and he's left and right with criminals, thefts, missions, etc. no family chapters like is supposed to be with this title and few start chapters. it's just a joke of a novel.
very good story, it's fun reading it. a beautiful family of three all lovely God bless keep safe. keep it up.
Ending this train wreck at Chapter 299. Clearly WebNovel has taken the shortsighted route of buying the Novel and not investing in the author.
How come there are only two reviews, this is work of art. I like this novel very much. I finished free chapters in no time and even FPs that I have, but I don't have enough reading yet. I want to finish all the chapters It's that how good it Is for me. Kudous Author-san, you have done a great job. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
First and foremost sorry to author for some of my comments, I think I got to much brain damage from bad chines system novels. Now onto the novel. The novel is good and well written. It's a rather slow story so get straped for the long run. In my opinion it's a good read so give it a try.
The draw for me was the family aspect. I loved reading about the MC and his daughter. She was so adorable and a breath of fresh air. Knowing her bio mom wanted nothing to do with her bc she wanted to pursue an entertainment career, she really cherished Chen Yu. Father and daughter were just too adorable 🥰. Speaking of the bio mom, don’t get me started on her. Ugh, why can’t she just jump off the nearest bridge along with her mother 😒 The romance could use a lot of work bc the mc and the teacher seemed more like friends than romantic partners. I won’t say lovers bc even after they got the marriage license, the mc didn’t make a move on her. As the novel progressed, we see less and less of family and more about business. He’s entering cooking and survival competitions, race car races, becoming a doctor, etc. The heart of the story is supposed to be about family and sadly, this novel loses that, and with it the charm that drew me into the story. Good luck on your future writing endeavors ✌🏾
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