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Zaelum

Hi, Translator Here! Hopefully you find it interesting. [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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7mth
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nifty_29

masterpiece unlike other ff where mc has to conspire and wait for opportunities this mc does as he pleases but still the details are accurate with no obvious plot holes and steady story devlopment

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Samp23

No vale la pena leer está basura, solo vas a frustrante el mc está por todas partes y no tiene un objetivo claro al menos para mí, agrega el hecho de que los primeros 12 capitulos son inútiles y con inconsistencias, un montón de sin sentido

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Mubashir_Jaleel_4501

Such a good story the more I read more iIam immersed ❤️

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Susoman_Patra

alright let's not stretch it and get to the point #cons :- 1) story has no logic butterfly effect doesn't exist even tho it's a reincarnation story with mc born in warring states era 2) no charector development or proper story development it's just one big mc glazing story 3) all fights with no stakes mc is like two steps ahead alltime and makes no sense sometimes too 4) no proper backstory or charector introduction to boot #pros:- 1) although the story plot is trash the fights in itself are good 2) translation has minor error and doesn't effect the overall immersive experience much 3) jutsu development is great with quite a few badass moments conclusion :- if you're an addicted man with Naruto fanfic genre then read it it's good for timepass but if you're a newbie trying fics for the first or second time then don't bother on this just skip this one out fr cause I don't want you to read this brain dead one as a starter ratings :- 4,2,4,5,1

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AllhailTrump

If you want to read this here are some good pros and cons . Mc buff here is he is from hagaromo clan which has affintiy with 7 chakra natures and our boy surpasses it by mastering them and combing them to form multiple kekkai genkai and forms dust release as well (this is power at start of the story). Pros : 1) The Mc never relied on the system too much to gain his strength . 2) Lots of good fights , this more like an action -based fan fic . 3) Mc starts off really strong (like peak-level strength from the start ) 4) Mc defeats most of the opponents by quickly plotting aganist them without giving them any time. 5) There also some good fights after he becomes a sage . 6) Takes sasuke as his disciple and has some uchiha clan members with him . Cons : 1) This story lacks basically any interaction with Mc and others , other than when they fighting. 2) Mc dies 1 time to hashirama and gets resummoned by orochimaru after 55 years , which he had trouble at start for completley reviving. 3) The world building isn't enough it felt like the author rushed through it and also didn't have much of a story for the characters he introduced. 4) Author starts the story when Mc is like 22-23 years old and doesn't show how he grew up. 5) No author didn't let Mc reincarnate again after his death in a new young body , but he he came back to his old body (this felt rushed although i liked it ). Personally it would have been best if he reincarnated into a body at the start of naruto he could have pulled through with the help of the system . Overall : I really liked the story all though it was mostly composed of fighting it didn't let me down. It's One of the Unique fan fics i saw .No hiding power or fame shit here so most know about how strong mc is in this fan fic.

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Spearow0

One must never ask what happened with chapter 222 of this story, its not something you should pay attention too, it something better left in the darkness

1mth
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LastGod

So the plot is.... the mc started out killing evil people.... then started killing ninja ..... then started kill good people and student ninja who hadnt even graduated yet or maybe genin..... are we supposed to like this edgelord MC that kills weak because he went psycho???? i hope this MC dies.

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Itsuka_Tobio

[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Shocked][img=Relaxed][img=Unalived][img=Why][img=Shocked][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Why][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed]

2mth
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Rogiers_bro

amazing story system is barely relevant because he achieves power through research into chakra. It's not just giving it to him

2mth
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koby79
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Amazing story. Really love how the system trolls him when it first appears. It has so many comedic moments and the MC is practical with solving his problems.

2mth
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I3laze_5now

Interesting premise, the MC is quite interesting and I really enjoyed the direction of the story so far. Although some fights and unnecessary scenes seems to drag on for too long, the overall story is pretty good. Can't wait to see how it goes!

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CorrenSkyblazer

Very well written and translated. Using the Hagaromo Clan as the main protagonists is a Novel idea, especially having someone who rivaled Madara and Hashirama being their leader.

2mth
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Jadrienne_Lee

It's too bad,too bad first few chapters shows mc being called “god” instead of hashirama who beat the hell of mc! mc is too arrogant and there's even a chapter that shows the mc is innocent when he's clearly arrogant and many says he's too talented as a child when it's cringe, typical Chinese fic,don't read if you don't want to regret it

2mth
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Boran_Arslan

Bu çok güzel bir eser hatta başyapıt (ingilizcem çok kötü olduğundan Türkçe yazıyorum) Karakterler bana göre çok iyi işlenmiş ama mc nin sevgilisi yada sevdiği olsa çok daha iyi olur.

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masbroindo

I've read until 180th chapter. So far, it is good. Interesting naruto fanfic is needed nawadays when many other naruto fanfics emerge out there. And this story provides a breath of fresh air as interesting fanfic nowadays

2mth
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Mr_HonestReview

I'm at chapter 188 I think, so I'll be back author so don't you dare drop this It's not perfect but it's better compared to others. Fight scenes are great, it was actually one of the novels you won't have the tendency to skip scenes/chapters. The only thing to criticize is the plot, you're are just saying what is convenient to you as a writer, it's ruining the realism of the story. I know it's fiction but it needs some authenticity.

2mth
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MadLogic999

Despite being a chinese fic it doesnt sound chinesy. The translation is very good. It is also very funny especially the system which is very broken n(ot broken like overpowered broken but broken like a broken radio). It has no flexibility at all but at least it doesnt give oyt punishment. The attitude of the mc is also very good. He doesnt rely on the system but on himself (hes overpowered already even without the system). The system just adds a slice of comedy to this fic. Please dont drop and keep up the good translation.

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3mth
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Panacosmic_Loner

seriously the fanfic id beautifully done but for someone who reads and understand English after chapter 150 I couldn't read again because of the japanese words like mouton : I don't care no justu stuffs like that it makes it hard to read and understand since this fanfic is all about fight. how would you read and understand how the fight when their skills or move set are written in Japanese

3mth
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masbroindo

The intro story is quite long. I think the main story start from 50th chapter. But it is good story so far. I read until the latest updated chapter, and i can say this fanfic is among the top as naruto fanfic

3mth
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taking_cat

Best, Best, Best, Best Best Best Best Best.............................................................................................................

3mth
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Fabrice_LUCAS

Some bad comments are unfounded. The book is interesting, not just a rehash of the original. Even the system which seemed ridiculous at the beginning is looking promising now. Also, the somewhat long battles are not that bad, at least if one doesn't need to wait for updates.

4mth
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Haidarah

You won't regret reading this masterpiece

4mth
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CouchPotatoDandy

Except for the start of the fanfic where the fighting scene took almost 15 chapters, this fanfic is awesome! The translation is excellent (as of chapter 122) without any mistakes, and the plot itself doesn't have any plot holes that I could find. The only shame is that the translator translate only one chapter a day and not several more. This is definitely a five star.

4mth
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HiddenSwordsman

Despite the whole System thing being unnecessary, this is a genuinely decent story. It helps that I'm not burning brain cells trying to read it. Truly a rare thing here

4mth
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Arthur_Pendragon_9440

to me it's okay I just don't like it that's much I'm losing interest fast I'm forcing myself to keep reading it But that's just my taste in preferences if other people like action and a long fight scene Then they should definitely try this one It's up to their taste but to people who get tired of fighting since easily this one is not really for you but hey that's just my opinion

5mth
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Gabriel_Augusto_2205

Shì hāo ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

5mth
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Emeka_Nwana

first your inconsistent giving hope then taking it away like excessively nerfing him when he is not that powerful the alien cheats he got none his system is trash give him better things at least he has many weaknesses and u nerf him a lot i’m sorry but this is trash

5mth
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Extra_char

after reading the whole thing i found it to be refreshing the mc is op but not in a bad wa =y and the system being useless is funny overall its good

5mth
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Jade_beauty

I've read 332 chapters on the raw, and I think this is a great fanfic. I highly recommend this. There is a system, but it basically does nothing throughout the entire story. Everything is achieved by the main character alone. Also, women only increase his sealing speed, so in all I've read there is no romance.

5mth
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Silent_Sovereign

Good Fanfiction Novel...................👍

5mth
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Zaelum

Hi, Translator Here! Hopefully you find it interesting. [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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7mth
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nifty_29

masterpiece unlike other ff where mc has to conspire and wait for opportunities this mc does as he pleases but still the details are accurate with no obvious plot holes and steady story devlopment

8d
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Samp23

No vale la pena leer está basura, solo vas a frustrante el mc está por todas partes y no tiene un objetivo claro al menos para mí, agrega el hecho de que los primeros 12 capitulos son inútiles y con inconsistencias, un montón de sin sentido

8d
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Mubashir_Jaleel_4501

Such a good story the more I read more iIam immersed ❤️

11d
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Susoman_Patra

alright let's not stretch it and get to the point #cons :- 1) story has no logic butterfly effect doesn't exist even tho it's a reincarnation story with mc born in warring states era 2) no charector development or proper story development it's just one big mc glazing story 3) all fights with no stakes mc is like two steps ahead alltime and makes no sense sometimes too 4) no proper backstory or charector introduction to boot #pros:- 1) although the story plot is trash the fights in itself are good 2) translation has minor error and doesn't effect the overall immersive experience much 3) jutsu development is great with quite a few badass moments conclusion :- if you're an addicted man with Naruto fanfic genre then read it it's good for timepass but if you're a newbie trying fics for the first or second time then don't bother on this just skip this one out fr cause I don't want you to read this brain dead one as a starter ratings :- 4,2,4,5,1

16d
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AllhailTrump

If you want to read this here are some good pros and cons . Mc buff here is he is from hagaromo clan which has affintiy with 7 chakra natures and our boy surpasses it by mastering them and combing them to form multiple kekkai genkai and forms dust release as well (this is power at start of the story). Pros : 1) The Mc never relied on the system too much to gain his strength . 2) Lots of good fights , this more like an action -based fan fic . 3) Mc starts off really strong (like peak-level strength from the start ) 4) Mc defeats most of the opponents by quickly plotting aganist them without giving them any time. 5) There also some good fights after he becomes a sage . 6) Takes sasuke as his disciple and has some uchiha clan members with him . Cons : 1) This story lacks basically any interaction with Mc and others , other than when they fighting. 2) Mc dies 1 time to hashirama and gets resummoned by orochimaru after 55 years , which he had trouble at start for completley reviving. 3) The world building isn't enough it felt like the author rushed through it and also didn't have much of a story for the characters he introduced. 4) Author starts the story when Mc is like 22-23 years old and doesn't show how he grew up. 5) No author didn't let Mc reincarnate again after his death in a new young body , but he he came back to his old body (this felt rushed although i liked it ). Personally it would have been best if he reincarnated into a body at the start of naruto he could have pulled through with the help of the system . Overall : I really liked the story all though it was mostly composed of fighting it didn't let me down. It's One of the Unique fan fics i saw .No hiding power or fame shit here so most know about how strong mc is in this fan fic.

17d
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Spearow0

One must never ask what happened with chapter 222 of this story, its not something you should pay attention too, it something better left in the darkness

1mth
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LastGod

So the plot is.... the mc started out killing evil people.... then started killing ninja ..... then started kill good people and student ninja who hadnt even graduated yet or maybe genin..... are we supposed to like this edgelord MC that kills weak because he went psycho???? i hope this MC dies.

1mth
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Itsuka_Tobio

[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Shocked][img=Relaxed][img=Unalived][img=Why][img=Shocked][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Why][img=Unalived][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed]

2mth
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Rogiers_bro

amazing story system is barely relevant because he achieves power through research into chakra. It's not just giving it to him

2mth
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koby79
LV 12 Badge

Amazing story. Really love how the system trolls him when it first appears. It has so many comedic moments and the MC is practical with solving his problems.

2mth
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I3laze_5now

Interesting premise, the MC is quite interesting and I really enjoyed the direction of the story so far. Although some fights and unnecessary scenes seems to drag on for too long, the overall story is pretty good. Can't wait to see how it goes!

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2mth
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CorrenSkyblazer

Very well written and translated. Using the Hagaromo Clan as the main protagonists is a Novel idea, especially having someone who rivaled Madara and Hashirama being their leader.

2mth
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Jadrienne_Lee

It's too bad,too bad first few chapters shows mc being called “god” instead of hashirama who beat the hell of mc! mc is too arrogant and there's even a chapter that shows the mc is innocent when he's clearly arrogant and many says he's too talented as a child when it's cringe, typical Chinese fic,don't read if you don't want to regret it

2mth
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Boran_Arslan

Bu çok güzel bir eser hatta başyapıt (ingilizcem çok kötü olduğundan Türkçe yazıyorum) Karakterler bana göre çok iyi işlenmiş ama mc nin sevgilisi yada sevdiği olsa çok daha iyi olur.

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2mth
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masbroindo

I've read until 180th chapter. So far, it is good. Interesting naruto fanfic is needed nawadays when many other naruto fanfics emerge out there. And this story provides a breath of fresh air as interesting fanfic nowadays

2mth
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Mr_HonestReview

I'm at chapter 188 I think, so I'll be back author so don't you dare drop this It's not perfect but it's better compared to others. Fight scenes are great, it was actually one of the novels you won't have the tendency to skip scenes/chapters. The only thing to criticize is the plot, you're are just saying what is convenient to you as a writer, it's ruining the realism of the story. I know it's fiction but it needs some authenticity.

2mth
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MadLogic999

Despite being a chinese fic it doesnt sound chinesy. The translation is very good. It is also very funny especially the system which is very broken n(ot broken like overpowered broken but broken like a broken radio). It has no flexibility at all but at least it doesnt give oyt punishment. The attitude of the mc is also very good. He doesnt rely on the system but on himself (hes overpowered already even without the system). The system just adds a slice of comedy to this fic. Please dont drop and keep up the good translation.

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3mth
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Panacosmic_Loner

seriously the fanfic id beautifully done but for someone who reads and understand English after chapter 150 I couldn't read again because of the japanese words like mouton : I don't care no justu stuffs like that it makes it hard to read and understand since this fanfic is all about fight. how would you read and understand how the fight when their skills or move set are written in Japanese

3mth
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masbroindo

The intro story is quite long. I think the main story start from 50th chapter. But it is good story so far. I read until the latest updated chapter, and i can say this fanfic is among the top as naruto fanfic

3mth
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taking_cat

Best, Best, Best, Best Best Best Best Best.............................................................................................................

3mth
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Fabrice_LUCAS

Some bad comments are unfounded. The book is interesting, not just a rehash of the original. Even the system which seemed ridiculous at the beginning is looking promising now. Also, the somewhat long battles are not that bad, at least if one doesn't need to wait for updates.

4mth
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Haidarah

You won't regret reading this masterpiece

4mth
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CouchPotatoDandy

Except for the start of the fanfic where the fighting scene took almost 15 chapters, this fanfic is awesome! The translation is excellent (as of chapter 122) without any mistakes, and the plot itself doesn't have any plot holes that I could find. The only shame is that the translator translate only one chapter a day and not several more. This is definitely a five star.

4mth
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HiddenSwordsman

Despite the whole System thing being unnecessary, this is a genuinely decent story. It helps that I'm not burning brain cells trying to read it. Truly a rare thing here

4mth
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Arthur_Pendragon_9440

to me it's okay I just don't like it that's much I'm losing interest fast I'm forcing myself to keep reading it But that's just my taste in preferences if other people like action and a long fight scene Then they should definitely try this one It's up to their taste but to people who get tired of fighting since easily this one is not really for you but hey that's just my opinion

5mth
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Gabriel_Augusto_2205

Shì hāo ....................................................................................................................................................................................................

5mth
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Emeka_Nwana

first your inconsistent giving hope then taking it away like excessively nerfing him when he is not that powerful the alien cheats he got none his system is trash give him better things at least he has many weaknesses and u nerf him a lot i’m sorry but this is trash

5mth
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Extra_char

after reading the whole thing i found it to be refreshing the mc is op but not in a bad wa =y and the system being useless is funny overall its good

5mth
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Jade_beauty

I've read 332 chapters on the raw, and I think this is a great fanfic. I highly recommend this. There is a system, but it basically does nothing throughout the entire story. Everything is achieved by the main character alone. Also, women only increase his sealing speed, so in all I've read there is no romance.

5mth
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Silent_Sovereign

Good Fanfiction Novel...................👍

5mth
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