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i just plain dont like the character limitations i would not mind if he was hiding his talent until he could escape the clan massacre but hes just SUPER untalented and has a shit system. i dont care to read 100s of chapters of his stuggles. BEEN THERE DONE THAT.
the novel is great the only flow is it is old mc thinks 6 path lv is the strongest don't even know boruto is there a chance that there is boruto plot to in this fan fic ?
read until chapter 54 right now. i find the book to be phenomenal. the mc's character sometimes does a few ridiculous things but they almost always make the story more fun. and I've come too love his quirks too.
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/story and great translation/english.. The grammar is good too... I like the idea about system which help MC make/invent his new jutsu.. And all the jutsu is also very great and useful.. I like his relationship with Minato, Kushina, etc.. I understand that he can get experient from others who learn and practice his new jutsu.. But I think he's dumb and fool when he give Basic Inner Jutsu to Konoha.. He should not give the powerful like Basic Inner Jutsu (or anymore which useful and stronger) to Konoha (the Root is use his jutsu to fight him).. He say that he give it so he can saw Forbidden Scroll, but as Uchiha Hiruzen and his Council will not let him see it.. If he want to success and save, he should eliminate Danzo and make Hiruzen and his Council step down.. (hope he will kill Danzo soon) Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍👍😍😍😍
Great story that isn't rushed and feels great to read I definitely think that this book is worth picking up.
Mc literally poisoned the naruto world with giving people cultivation and dantians 🤢 Good translation but too much cultivation for me
pretty good, translator has chosen a good fanfic to translate. the translator is is good too. also the update on the mc's name is a good choice too. You won't feel the nerf in the mc's system at all, the characters did not feel unnatural too. its not perfect but this is definately better than other translation. the only thing the translator need to do now is to learn how to omit, when to omit, and why to omit.
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Its a great read would be better if i had a proper understanding about the mcs cheat but its okay so far
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The book is quite nice. I'm someone who likes to read while listening to music so i get extra hype during fight scenes, I do wish we got to see more of the actually deduction but the book overall is something I would recommend others give a try
Ah I've read this one, the original I mean. Around chapter 700 ish the designated world isn't too clear for me. Personally I've never heard of it I guess. But overall it's a pretty interesting fic concerning different anime worlds
man you got 2 good fics this time i don't know which one to vote for this or the bleach one
This story was is really great the translation was bad for the first few chapters but it gets way better and the premise of this fanfic is really good
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It’s a good fan fic. Characters are not same as canon because it happens before canon so they are not the people they become
Even 5 points less for an author who respects his readers enough to write raw. Even 5 points less for an author who respects his readers enough to write raw.
Shameless review as always! Anyway, this is one of the August Poll pick ups. Vote for it on P@treon and review it for it to have a chance to be picked up!
i just plain dont like the character limitations i would not mind if he was hiding his talent until he could escape the clan massacre but hes just SUPER untalented and has a shit system. i dont care to read 100s of chapters of his stuggles. BEEN THERE DONE THAT.
the novel is great the only flow is it is old mc thinks 6 path lv is the strongest don't even know boruto is there a chance that there is boruto plot to in this fan fic ?
read until chapter 54 right now. i find the book to be phenomenal. the mc's character sometimes does a few ridiculous things but they almost always make the story more fun. and I've come too love his quirks too.
Nice ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/story and great translation/english.. The grammar is good too... I like the idea about system which help MC make/invent his new jutsu.. And all the jutsu is also very great and useful.. I like his relationship with Minato, Kushina, etc.. I understand that he can get experient from others who learn and practice his new jutsu.. But I think he's dumb and fool when he give Basic Inner Jutsu to Konoha.. He should not give the powerful like Basic Inner Jutsu (or anymore which useful and stronger) to Konoha (the Root is use his jutsu to fight him).. He say that he give it so he can saw Forbidden Scroll, but as Uchiha Hiruzen and his Council will not let him see it.. If he want to success and save, he should eliminate Danzo and make Hiruzen and his Council step down.. (hope he will kill Danzo soon) Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job 😁👍👍😍😍😍
Great story that isn't rushed and feels great to read I definitely think that this book is worth picking up.
Mc literally poisoned the naruto world with giving people cultivation and dantians 🤢 Good translation but too much cultivation for me
pretty good, translator has chosen a good fanfic to translate. the translator is is good too. also the update on the mc's name is a good choice too. You won't feel the nerf in the mc's system at all, the characters did not feel unnatural too. its not perfect but this is definately better than other translation. the only thing the translator need to do now is to learn how to omit, when to omit, and why to omit.
Reveal Spoiler Its a great read would be better if i had a proper understanding about the mcs cheat but its okay so far
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The book is quite nice. I'm someone who likes to read while listening to music so i get extra hype during fight scenes, I do wish we got to see more of the actually deduction but the book overall is something I would recommend others give a try
Ah I've read this one, the original I mean. Around chapter 700 ish the designated world isn't too clear for me. Personally I've never heard of it I guess. But overall it's a pretty interesting fic concerning different anime worlds
man you got 2 good fics this time i don't know which one to vote for this or the bleach one
This story was is really great the translation was bad for the first few chapters but it gets way better and the premise of this fanfic is really good
Translate this.....................................xhdixvkzksjelsosoaphajqhejdh3jbxhxkddvjxisbeudkdbdosbeuebdudsklsiap3jfjdirjrhdudbbduapqwkbsbeur7fnsksiw8s83ue
It’s a good fan fic. Characters are not same as canon because it happens before canon so they are not the people they become
Even 5 points less for an author who respects his readers enough to write raw. Even 5 points less for an author who respects his readers enough to write raw.
Shameless review as always! Anyway, this is one of the August Poll pick ups. Vote for it on P@treon and review it for it to have a chance to be picked up!